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ReModeledCupcake
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this is how all ponys must die
Very few grammar errors, interesting story, I'd like you to make spaces between your paragraphs. Thanks! (Not as if I don't make grammar errors or anything, few to none in this case on you're story. I do very much enjoy it. Also, every writer makes mistakes, thats how we all learn to become better. ;3)
-Muffin ![]()
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