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ReModeledCupcake 200

Joined August 2012
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    ReModeledCupcake's Stories (2)


    When Fluttershy gets a letter from Princess Celestia and exsplains in Great Detail the peril of Equestria's Vamponies, Fluttershy and Angel will learn the ways of Vampire from the one and only- Master Spike!

    [Some Proofreading, Didn't fix ALL Mistakes! Help is always Great :D]

    First Published
    4th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    4th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 8 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    interesting...

    Don't fail me

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Spelling and Grammar

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    #3 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fix this wall of text with paragraphs and your set. Good luck!

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #5 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    please continue

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    this is how all ponys must die

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Very few grammar errors, interesting story, I'd like you to make spaces between your paragraphs. Thanks! (Not as if I don't make grammar errors or anything, few to none in this case on you're story. I do very much enjoy it. Also, every writer makes mistakes, thats how we all learn to become better. ;3)

    -Muffin :derpytongue2:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cup' O' Interesting. :moustache:

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