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Heavy when on the "Multiply a Weapon's Stat by 10" server once.
He decided to equip the Gloves of Running Urgently Gloves of Running Yesterday
i'm calling shenanigans. pinkie could easily caught up to scout remember Griffin the brush off? pinkie was always ahead.
Well, that was a depressing read. Scout spending the entire chapter beating up Rainbow Dash? No thanks.
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Dear scout,
"What is your major malfunction brutha?"
- The brony community
WOW, My notifications exploded with comments and favorites, is this story really that good?
Wait, in her house? Doesn't she live in a house made of clouds in the sky? Plus, ponies don't have hands, they have hooves. Still fun story though
Nitpicks:
"Ok, first, we know that this pony is dangerous, he is fast, he is sneaky, he is unpredictable, so if any of you see him, i'll need you to get some answers out of him."
"I'll."
Scout ran off, Rainbow Dash could here him in the distance going "Wananananana."
"Hear."
Ok. This is great i must admit, (i bet your playing tf2 right now to learn all the taunts the scout has lol) tracked
Oh god, please make another story with Heavy from Red Team in it!
What's sad is that Scout would probably try drink that much Bonk!
GOD, I'm afraid of what he could do as a pegasus. And I thought Sonic was too fast...
Wow, Scout is just a jerk in this story. I don't think Scout would act this way...and that is why this story is good. Favorited.
From the descripition...
I JUST HAVE TO READ THIS STORY
BONK BONK BONK BONK BONK BONK
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Like instantly for the "original" concept and the picture. I don't care whether you made it, but it looks awesome. And I put "original" in quotes because it's happened... once or twice on this site, and needs to happen more. So yeah... ONTO READING!
Okay, you're literally only QUOTING the Scout, and this story is fuckin, FLYING by. Like, seriously. There are occasional lacks of punctuation and capitalization, so that's another thing. However, I will NOT let this story drop, so I'll read the next chapter, but please don't screw up anymore.
FEKFEKFEKFEKFEKFEK.
Welp, this is eating my mind from the inside.
So many problems. So little time.
If this stuff is ever corrected and this makes it to the featured box, I will read it.
For now, you can have... MY BIG GAY DANCE.
What is this, I don't- I can't...
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*Favorite*
Too good. I'm bawling over laughter right now.![]()
But damn, Scout is screwed once the Bonk! wears off. Also, don't mess with the Scout if he gets angry. He has his damn Baseball Bat with several balls!
She was Equestria's Best Young Flier. How could she lose to a simple earth pony?
BECAUSE IT'S SCOUT.
>a hundred cans of Bonk! at once
GOODNESS ME!
WHAT IS THIS WITCHCRAFT?
*marks to read later*
There is so much fucking win in this fic, that I think I came.
I literally came.
Stop trying to break reality! The fourth wall can't handle the stress!
Come ONNNNNNN this is screaming for a Rainbow Dash X Scout here! ![]()
As much as like the wing idea I think it is a bit silly seeming the only wing spells they have are for butterfly wings, maybe rewrite the first chapter and give him wings that he doesn't,t know how to use seems more appropriate
That's just my opinion you don't need to do this as its your own story
No, don't make them a couple, at least not right now. Instead, fill the void with belligerent sexual tension.
You heard me. Rainbow goes out of her way to show just how much she hates Scout while he simply doesn't give a fuck while everyone else notices how similar they are and figures that Rainbow is either working way too hard to make everyone thinks she hates him, or is trying to impress him by catching him.
Well, aside from the usual RAINBOW DASH X SCOUT OMFGHFGKLDHNJS, you've got yourself some grammar errors there. You know, periods instead of commas, awkward wording, and uncapitalized I's.
....this chapter was okay, but the last half seemed a bit rushed to me. either that or the fact of a dragon suddenly appearing and scout having to be the badass and save them like damsels in distress was just wierd.
I want to hope that the others on the team will come to Equestria... ![]()
Oh don't worry. Scout and Rainbow Dash will get together soon. Just give me some time.







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