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LuminousRabbit's Stories (7)

The Paradise We're Dreaming Of
A Lyra x Bon Bon fic about fighting for gay rights in Equestria
10,386 words · 527 views · 30 likes · 6 dislikes
Dystopia
The technological revolution has set a future for Equestria, but what happens when it corrupts?
5,764 words · 140 views · 10 likes · 1 dislikes
Colour Spectrum
Rainbow's first Sonic Rainboom
1,206 words · 123 views · 4 likes · 0 dislikes
Our Lives, And Why We Don't Want Them Any More
Oh, the pains and joys of living. For some ponies, the pain grows too much.
2,691 words · 128 views · 3 likes · 0 dislikes
Illogika
1,000 words · 48 views · 3 likes · 2 dislikes
The Force of the Elements
23,781 words · 174 views · 2 likes · 1 dislikes
The Pains Of A Pink Pony
1,595 words · 243 views · 4 likes · 21 dislikes

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Colour Spectrum by LuminousRabbit

Adventure Slice of Life

A one shot

That I wrote

About Rainbow Dash

And the first time she did a Sonic Rainboom.

Tagged adventure because ask Rainbow Dash, she'll tell you it was.

First Published
4th Oct 2012

Last Modified
4th Oct 2012

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KartalTheWriter

#1 · 37w, 1h ago ·

You cannot argue with the logic of Miss Ranbow Dash.

EDIT: Nice story. I love the way you described things.

Scribblestick

#2 · 37w, 46m ago ·

This was a fun little one-shot. The only suggestion I have is to make your sentences longer before the race. Short sentences work well during an action sequence, but too many of them get annoying during buildup.

Also,