A one shot
That I wrote
About Rainbow Dash
And the first time she did a Sonic Rainboom.
Tagged adventure because ask Rainbow Dash, she'll tell you it was.
You cannot argue with the logic of Miss Ranbow Dash.
EDIT: Nice story. I love the way you described things.
This was a fun little one-shot. The only suggestion I have is to make your sentences longer before the race. Short sentences work well during an action sequence, but too many of them get annoying during buildup.
Tiny pegasus ponies struggled to keep their feet on the clouds.
Yes, I'm thinking of adding some more meat to it, particularly the first sentances.
Also, will fix.
EDIT: Fixed! Also, made the start longer. Hope that makes it better
Also, the story has cover art now. It's not really relevant, but god it is funny.