Interesting...I like!

Good job, keep writing

I have only one question:

WHY WAS IT SO SHORT! MORE I SAY! MORE! I can only imagine how this will turn out...

This shall be added to my "Cheerilee is best pony" group whether you like it or not! lol

>>13980911398091 Well, I can now borrow my dad's laptop, but my mom only let's me online for a limited time. However, I shall write more. We'll just have to see how the TV show goes.

>>13980961398096 By all means, go ahead. This IS a very good reason as to why she is best pony. Not everypony gets to be the one and only Sherlock Holmes's "Watson".

>>13981901398190 Lol that is very true!

Ok, I like the writing so far, but please use paragraphs.

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We'll just have to see how the TV show goes.

That right there is a red flag. Makes it sound like you're gonna ponify every episode. (Granted, that would be interestng, albeit unoriginal.)

However it would be far more interesting and impressive if you took it in your own direction.

I may just be jumping to conclusions. But hey, at least I warned ya, and that's all that matters.

Good luck with this sir, I wait in anticipation.

>>13982181398218 I'm actually making VERY big changes from the episodes. Considering the fact that Ponyville is a peaceful town, I highly doubt there would be murders and kidnappings and all that stuff. Petty thefts and misdemeanors however, are a whole different thing. So to inform you, I'm not really going to ponify each episode. I will be adding my own to it.

>>13982641398264 And that's all I needed to hear.

And so...it begins.

>>13982141398214 I'll see what I can do bucko!

>>13981951398195 Hey! You're putting this story on a group?! SPONSOR!

>>13983001398300

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>>13983261398326 Bahaha yeah, though sadly it is small, since there arn't very many Cheerilee fans out there.

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This is amazing. Albeit a little too fast and needs more spacing, slightly difficult to read.

>>13988571398857

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Meh.

>>13997361399736 Just like Holmes.

>>13999001399900 That face

>>14013051401305 Have another sexy Pewdiepie face!

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>>14017071401707 That is a classic "Rapeface"

>>14017231401723 Indeed.

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MORE BEAUTIFUL!!!

>>14017471401747 Lol! Quick! Kill it with fire!

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>>14017541401754

I totally read Sherlock's voice as that of Benedict Cumberbatch.

I am a guy and what is this... And why do i have a bad feeling about it?

The plot-much like batter-thickens.

Haha, Soarin.

NO Soarin LIKES PIES NOT CUPCAKES!

>>14214301421430 Exactly!

Is Cheerilee going to fall for Holmes?

>>15688211568821 You'll see.

I approve.

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Welp, my OC is going to face the spotlight! Let's see what you have in store for him. MOAR NOW PLS.

PS: I think Fluttershy must have something to clean her house. Her floor must get stained from bird poop every time.

>>15829731582973 Bird poop! Yuck!

Moar pls.

>>16148261614826 The new chapter will most likely come out this weekend. That's when I have more free time.

*Sigh* Now I need to write a Sherlock crossover to counter this. Not that Elementary is bad... just... Watson is freaking amazing in Sherlock

aaaahhhhh the nonmodesty of holmes is amazing

Wait a second i remember this author now.  Great stories so far also and this needs to be about 10% more snide from holmes.