Hey guys. This was kinda what I was working on instead of My Little Behemoth. One more chapter for this, and I'll be off writing more MLB stuff.

Sorry. But this seemed like something I really needed, and wanted, to do.

Will read later.

Will read now.

ch needs to be 1000 or more  how it got pass i will never know

>>14002361400236

Lol, silly person. The first chapter is 2000 words long.

By the form of punctuation you use, you either didn't get sleep last night, or you're just a troll.

I'll accept the former and ignore the latter.

MOAR GOD PLEASE MOAR

Really awesome!

There is one error I spotted.

1. The Aegis VII incident happened in 2508 not 2507.

Also the apparition Joon is seeing intrigues me because you usually only see dead loved ones, I wonder what connection Anne has with Joon?

>>14002881400288 its 741 words not 2000

YAY! A non-Issac POV!

>>14014751401475

Only the first chapter has to be 1,000 minimum.

>>14010901401090

Really? DANG IT DEAD SPACE WIKI! YOU LIED!!!!

>>14014751401475

I don't really see what's the problem. Only the first chapter needs to be 1000 words. And all three chapters were basically one BIG chapter, so the first chapter was technically over 6000 words long.

So yeah. If you got a problem, tell knighty. He was the one who approved it.

>>14051611405161

I checked the wiki to notice that!

>>14051811405181

But it says 2507 here

http://deadspace.wikia.com/wiki/Dead_Space

>>14052141405214

Haha, continuty errors on the wiki. I don't even know which is correct right now.

On here: Dead Space Wiki, it says Isaac went there in 2508.

I will go check it out on my copy of the game later.

>>14052361405236

K fixed it. Thank you for the help!

Yessssss.  I AM FIRST!

>>13842541384254It's fine.

>>14010901401090

Crap. I wasn't suppose to emphasize her first name in the first few chapters, only until later. Sorry I had to edit that part out.

Just forget that whole thing ever happened please!

MIGHT!? My good time lord WE HAVE A F*CKING DISASTER ON OUR HOOVES!

Inappropriate theme music is a go!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

PS. I hope the 4th wall jokes are kept to a minimum.  They tend to get old quick, like in that life of Dusk Shine story.

Oh god...is Pinkie going to try to giggle the necromorphs away?

He misunderstood the voice.  It wasn't saying 'make us whole' it was saying 'make a show'.  Him and Pinkie need to put on the best performance ever!

Yay!

Another Dead Space crossover.

I've only found two good ones so far.

Well, three good ones counting this one.

IS BAD TIME FOR PINKIE PIE! But big Human man will protect her... Humans smash puny necromorphs! RAAAAAAAAAGH!

Now if only there was a good Star Wars fic that the author doesn't drop... and involves the Sith.

Uh oh.

The alert message said 'Hostile Alien'

So how do you think they would react to a pink horse-creature?

Be careful Pinkie!

>>14113301411330

Can't you just imagine Joon swimming through a pool of gore with such an upbeat toon?

And don't worry. I don't plan on doing anymore 4th wall jokes.

>>14113301411330>>14126071412607>>14127021412702

Thanks guys for the wonderful feedback!

Hope you guys get all the references I dropped in the story

There gonna subtly pop up every now and then!

And if you guys read up on some Dead Space canon references in the story that confuse you (like Cadigan and anything else) feel free to look them up on the wiki!

>>14110461411046

Come on. Doctor Who- I mean...Whooves, has gone through worse.

Transporting a pink pony across the universe onto a ship about to encounter zombie/aliens can't be that bad. It'll only result in some mental scarring and a REALLY tragic ending....

>>14114611411461

They could try....but I don't think the Marker will let them...

it's just jelly.

>>13998721399872

So...what did you think?

Honestly, this fic is pretty good so far. I really want to see what you have planned next.

>>14163071416307

Thank you!

I'll try not to disappoint you guys!

Wow, he's taking rather well, isn't he?

"Hey, Vargas! How much closer?" I was like "LOL, I don't know. Do I look like a GPS?" Because my last name's Vargas

Not 5 secs later I'n dissapointed to find out Vargas is a women. Not because I'm sexist but since my last name Vargas I could be a smart-ass. But since Vargas is a girl I can't.

Why Vargas die first? Any way nice chapter. I'm pretty sure any other human would think they're losing their mind but Joon no, He's accepted the fact that he's insane and will continue to march forward like a champ.

I would prefer Issac Clarke has the main char but whatever

>>14324511432451

Sorry, but there are WAY too many dead space fan-fics that are about Isaac.

My hipster preferences must ignore ALL mainstream characters!

>>14318941431894

Holy crap! I totally didn't see that coming!

Oh well, sorry for making you a woman in the chapter...and making you die..

>>14316711431671

Oh don't worry. The mental breakdown comes later.

>>14331381433138

Ah, you made my day!

Sooo, where did Joon come from? Hmmm?  You can't explain that.

>>14337521433752

Wait. What?

As in the name? Or the character's origin?

>>14337611433761As in what were you taking/ is this a cleverly hidden self-insert?  Some of the things you have put in are too specific to be from your head.

>>14338241433824

You have to understand that some of the story elements are DIRECTLY from the game universe itself.

So if it seems SUPER specific, that means its from the game.

Joon is not from the game universe however. He was of my own making.

But, I'm afraid that I can't understand the way your writing your sentence:

As in what were you taking/ is this a cleverly hidden self-insert?  Some of the things you have put in are too specific to be from your head.

I have to know what specifically you're trying to ask, because I have no honest clue what your referring to.

I have a feeling that you're talking about Joon's name. Well Joon is a Korean name (it is actually a reference to MY korean name, and my friend's, who is currently suffering from leukemia right now). Kinda wanted a tribute to him and to put a little piece of myself in the story.

And I wanted some diversity in a human crossover. All the time, whenever I see a human crossing over in a story, it's always an North American/ European that meets the ponies. What about the rest of us in Asia or from Asian origin? Why can't we ever meet one of the Mane 6?

Did that answer your question? Come on dude, don't leave me hanging....

Yay new chapter!

Hey guys! Sorry, if this seemed rushed or my Pinkie is a little hard to believe. (Pinkie hardly cries, so it's pretty out of character fro her to cry in the beginning)

But it gets better from here on out.  I already got all that stuff over with. And i'll be adding musical accompaniement in the next chapter(s)!

What is Pinkie thinking during all this?

>>14349821434982

Sorry, if I don't switch perspectives with Pinkie every so often. The reason being is that her thought process is extremely convuluted, and will distract from the storyline. So I prefer to write things in Joon's perspective.

Plus, I want to avoid the whole "Pony becoming emotionally numb" cliche as much as possible, something that I'm sure I'm going to run into if I write in Pinkie Pie's POV.

Any tips if you want me to write in her perspective?

She'll get her own little vignette at the end, though. Don't worry.

Again I stress they are taking this well. It just feels odd that Pinkie isn't commenting on the vast amounts of death and violence.

>>14351061435106

Here's what I said in another comment that may sort of explain why I didn't write like you wanted me to:

Plus, I want to avoid the whole "Pony becoming emotionally numb" cliche as much as possible, something that I'm sure I'm going to run into if I write in Pinkie Pie's POV.

It's a cliche that I really felt that would leech the entertainment value of this.

Joon is used to it. Pinkie is partially insane already, so....yeah. That's why I chose Pinkie for this fan-fic. She's not reasonable enough to notice that people ARE actually dying, or she brushes stuff off quite easily, as she does in the show.

And again, knowing that you will probably not respond to this, like the majority of everyone that reads my stories, it's not like Pinkie Pie won't get emotionally scarred after this. It's just not THAT gory or tragic yet for that to happen

But what am I saying? I'm still waiting for you to write some character emotion for YOUR crossover.  

>>14351391435139

Hah, I guess it's just me and my evil ways of destroying characters. I tend to write alot of dark stuff.

This is what I imagined as the marine and Pinkie after she jumped into his pack

Image: http://www.rare-extreme.com/images/bnb_cast_1.jpg

>>14351901435190

You are quite the comedian!

But yeah. That's what I imagined it as too.

>>14114471411447 yeah, necromorphs aint no un-moving trees

there are OTHER small pockets of resistance trying  to get away right?

....

right?

...

but..but what about Cardigan? and the marines that reported to him, they're still alive yes?

...

NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo!!!!!!!

oh well, atleast there's Isaac Clarke out there somewhere no doubt being the only human again on his own necro infested ship

good luck jun, you've been blessed with the burden of not only trying to survive and/or kill all the necromorphs on the ship by your lonesome but ALSO protecting the lil equine

>>14351901435190 Hell's ya

Did the Valor crash in the USG isumara?

>>14361281436128

In the game, it did.

But were not there yet in the story, but I intend to include that in it. Please be patient.

Ok. I'm going to take a break from this for a week. I need to focus on writing and finishing My Little Behemoth.

But anyway, tell me how the story is going!

>>14350181435018 Sorry, got nothin'. Was asking because I was doing a fic-reading with my friend and he asked "I wonder what Pinkie is thinking right now." and I was like "Your right. I MUST COMMENT ABOUT THIS!" and then we epic bro-hoofed and then I asked

What is Pinkie thinking during all this?

BANANA HAMMOCK

>>14393851439385

Sorry. I can't see your image

It's derping.

>>14393941439394

awwwwww

>>14338911433891Rest assured, you have.  A magician never reveals his tricks and I will leave you to the decyphering.

There are two types of people in this world, those who can extrapolate information from incomplete data.

>>14480831448083

What?

Ha... Doing my homework then this comes up as I type it in.

Sorry that comment seems a bit rushed I just got excited.  I won't mind about infrequent updates and I look forward to your higher quality chapters.

omg this is getting badass

>>14594971459497>>14595631459563

Thanks guys!

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>>14599481459948

Heh. Sorry. But that was a good point to stop at, I felt.

>>14599951459995

Actually, it's a good cliffhanger, ended at a good point. By the way, I'm enjoying the main character a ton. Good work on his motives and personality.

>>14599881459988

...I feel like you are completely missing what I'm saying.

The USM Valor picked up an escape pod from USG Ishimura. A necromorph was in the escape pod, casuing the outbreak on Valor.

Understand now?

>>14600471460047

Thank you!

>>14600611460061

OH! I see...I'm afraid I'm not at liberty to say.

It gets extremely fast-paced from here on out, so all I can say is VERY near

There are only two-three more chapters left to write before this ends, so.....

Why isn't this in the feature box?

Dooooooomed.

Bwuh.

Oh noes, wut if Joon tries to shoot Pinkie?!

Kill all the necros, it'll help Issac... especially in that pesky barracks area.

They aren't scared at all, and are totally just blazing through without a care in the universe.... i'm not buying it.

This guy is talking about sleep, makes me wanna sleep too.

Fast stories are fast yo.

>>14854181485418

Ok.....Thanks for spamming in the comments, I guess

Yes, and they are blazing through this without a care. Joon has what's called EXPERIENCE

>>14882861488286 Experience with necromorphs? Nah... nah.... Issac is a scaredy pants and he has way more exp. points. He's a level 90 Fury Warrior with 500 engineering. Joon is a level 60 Survival Hunter with 200 engineering.

You can see the difference.

>>14923321492332

Add Pinkie Pie to the equation. Your arguement is invalid. Nice try tho

>>14959521495952 Pinkie ain't helped none. So she is just a pet.

>>14961241496124

Oh she'll help a lot. Just wait till I finish up. I'm planning to release the next couple of chapters all at once.

And yes. That means I'll be ending it in...a quite....abrupt manner. Blegh

>>14961861496186 Because Issac blows it up.

>>14962051496205

I'll just point and smile at your comment. Because I have no idea what it's talking about.

>>14962211496221 The story ends because Issac takes the Engine core from the ship causing a cataclysmic systems failure aboard the ship which destroys it. Or does the story finish before they crash into the Ishimura?

>>14968711496871

You'll see. I can't give away all my secrets.

Was that a Half Life reference thar?

So far, this is a really

Image: http://i.chzbgr.com/completestore/2011/12/15/57e8f366-339a-48eb-86a0-6f722579d0ec.gif

No, really. I mean it.

>>15443021544302

Finally, someone comments about the references.

I swear, you are the first comment to ever notice them.

And thanks for the compliment! It means a lot to me that you guys like it

>>15481651548165I KNEW IT!

Also, L. Jenkins, huh?