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Brotato 10339

Joined January 2012
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    Brotato's Stories (10)

    • Not so nightmare
      Nightmare moon has returned and plans to frighten everypony. That is, until she reaches Ponyville

      2,684 words · 1,921 views · 185 likes · 3 dislikes
    • You will always be...
      A mother's heart grows weary with the departing of family.
      2,809 words · 557 views · 60 likes · 0 dislikes
    • An Island built in the sky
      Kid winds up in Equestria and has to learn the magic of friendship before going back.
      53,568 words · 2,075 views · 158 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Return of the Ura
      The Ura, a long-time enemy with the Kid back in Caelondia, has returned.
      10,242 words · 415 views · 31 likes · 0 dislikes
    • A bard's tale
      36,131 words · 710 views · 50 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Itsy Bitsy dance
      6,334 words · 262 views · 32 likes · 1 dislikes
    • XGRA: Ultrasonic Rainbow
      29,483 words · 310 views · 18 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Luna eats a PB&J sandwich
      3,675 words · 630 views · 39 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Ace combat: Shattered Rainbows
      70,589 words · 1,569 views · 44 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Toothpaste
      7,691 words · 448 views · 26 likes · 2 dislikes

    Luna discovers the simple wonders of a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, which leads to a small rivalry between the two Princesses.

    Rated teen for "Implied suggestive" content. (Just in case)

    (Also: Title renamed for the sake of submitting it to "ponies doing things" group.)

    First Published
    30th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    30th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 20 )

    #1 · 33w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Short story? Check

    Silly/Joke-y subject? Check

    Alicorn princesses? Check

    Inb4 feature box

    #3 · 33w, 3h ago · · ·
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    You forgot to add an end to the italics.

    #4 · 33w, 2h ago · · ·
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    Very funny and entertaining.

    But why is everything in italics about a third of the way through? :applejackunsure:

    Never mind, stealth edit while I was reading.

    #5 · 33w, 2h ago · · ·
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    >>1363759 I can only hope :pinkiesad2:

    >>1363889 Thank you so much :heart:

    #6 · 33w, 2h ago · · ·
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    >>1363920 Jphyper was nice enough to point it out. It should be fixed now :twilightsmile:

    #7 · 33w, 1h ago · · ·
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    This is a very short but very interesting story!

    I always love the comedy about Luna versus Tia in a hilarious way.

    GJ!

    #8 · 33w, 43m ago · · ·
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    Ahahahahahahahaha :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    I loved this story good job :pinkiehappy:

    #9 · 33w, 41m ago · · ·
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    Delightful--I literally laughed out loud!

    #10 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "We thank thee butter Croissant!" She continued to hug the poor mare as she drape her across her shoulder.

    *Butter

    *draped

    Overall, 3 out of 5 Trixies  :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft:

    #11 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I find this one to be one of the more silly stories that have been made here. Luna vs Celestia over PB&J? Priceless. :pinkiehappy:

    #12 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "Wit haste"?:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::trollestia:

    #13 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1364772>>1364631 Thank you both. Feel rather foalish for not catching those, even after using a spell check :twilightblush:

    #14 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Milk form Denmilk?  I don't know about you, but I always order my milk from Wiscownsin.  Tastes fuller and creamier, to me anyway.  Great cheese too.

    #15 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hahahaha oh god :rainbowlaugh:

    #16 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    'Equestria at a stand still as peanuts reign supreme! What you should know about our new legume overlords.'

    :rainbowlaugh: epic

    #17 · 32w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    That was great, nice fun story. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #18 · 20w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Dearest Tia,

    Revenge is best served stuck to the roof of your mouth.

    I see what you did there...

    #19 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I would consider replacing "stores" with "food banks" at the very end.

    #20 · 11w, 3d ago · · ·
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    HAHAHA funny story. Luna such a troll! :pinkiehappy:

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