When the menace of the Evil Black and White Pony Rangers atempt to end the lives of Dash, Applejack, and Rarity, an intervention from the princesses saves their lives, and give's them the same powers used to keep peace before the time of the Elements of Harmony: the powers of the Pony Rangers. now the three of them must protect ponyville from the evil rangers and their dark masters plans to take over the world.
the story is meant to be an atempt at the "Cheesy, but serious and sometimes a little dark" feel from the saban seasons of "Power rangers". also, it's my first story to ever be put online, so constructive (and only constructive) critisism would be apreciated.
Also, i wasn't entirely sure what tags i should add, so i just put the adventure tag (the need an action tag that's seperate from the adventure tag) and the romance tag due to a plot point that involves a shipping even if it isn't the main focus of the story, and will probably add others later on when i have more feed back. for the moment i find it to be just a tad to serious to be tagged comedy and a bit to funny/cheesy to be tagged dark (at least i hope it is...) not to mention it isn't really a crossover, despite the fact that it combindes the aspects of two different shows (if it were a crossover, Tommy Oliver would be in the story, because he's as awesome as Dash).
Power rangers and all related concepts belong to Saban and/or Disney.
My little pony Friendship is magic belongs to Hasbro, the hub, and Lauren Faust.
the story, main bad guy, and everything else not mentioned above belongs to me.
Woah...Power Ranger ponies... I like this... I like it a lot. Make more. FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA!!! MOAR!!!! Oh, btw, *Favorites and upvotes* I'll be waiting....for updates....
haha lol more pls!
So Twilight is the evil white ranger? huh...seems legit.
1356753 if you want more you're going to get it. i have four whole seasons planned, and this is only number one.
1356933 Yes. originally i was going to leave it a mystery for a while, but episode one just seemed a bit too light hearted without revealing she'd gone badguy.
Also, thank both of you for commenting! you two are my first comments ever.
1357536 your most welcome!
Power Rangers Theme - Buckethead
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yes, that's exactly the idea of the story.
Hmm....interesting chapter you have. I'll give you a bit of advice, though it is more of my stylist advice. Ponyville and Everfree should be capitalized, in my opinion. Also, the thou and thee thing with Luna...I get you are trying to have her use that Ye Olde English, but my advice, again, my opinion, is that you lay off it some. It is not necessary at every sentence. My vote is that is is used when the event is rather stressful, and that if it is something important for them to understand, to not use it. All of the above is my opinion only, and none needs to be used, but I just wanted to help and throw myself out there. Also, if you ever want a pre-reader, *shamelessly plugs self* I'm open. Just lemme know, and I'll get back to you. But still is an interesting chapter.
P.S. The flashback was extremely confusing to me. I suggest a quick plot summary instead of little snippets of dialogue. Yet again, my opinion only, so hey. Yeah, have a good day too!
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I will take all that into consideration and may go back to edit it at a later point in time...
Thank you for the constructive critisism
1360733 Hey, just glad to help. As I said, if you want someone to look it over first, send me a PM, and I'll see what I can do, as I'm on here pretty regularly.
1360744 that would be very helpful, thank you. I'll probably have you look over the next chapter before i publish it...once it's ready of course.
1360754 Cool. Just send me a PM when it's ready, and I'll do what I can to help. Keep up the good work.
Just finished reading the first two chapters... I can already think of two crossover chapters you and I could do. Just contact me on Google+ and we can talk it over, then.
Also, overall, it's a very nice and pretty original story. You have my approval.
2616519 cool. good to know.
Thanks for putting in music, your placement for them was great, and for once I didn't mind having music in the BG as I read.
Also I loved the fourth wall breaking.
I'll admit, I'm enjoying this a lot more than I thought I would.
The scene with Gilda and Trixie getting food, not to mention the music, just brought so many memories back..........
Sorry, zoned out for a second there, anyway I can't wait for the next chapter, great work.
5830067 Thanks. It's actually been a while since I worked on this one, but it's really nice to know someone liked the music and stuff. I might pick it up again soon.