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I'm only commenting here because I don't see any others besides SBM here.
I'm only commenting here because everyone deserves a comment.
I'm commenting here because Metal Gear Rex.
I have to say, I'm a little surprised this fic doesn't have more likes. The intro is capturing and well delivered, and the story is close enough to the source material to draw in fans and yet stands alone enough to be interesting in its own right. Caro's character doesn't have enough lines in the first chapter to give my a full view of his personality but that's because he appears to be the 'straight man', so to speak, and doesn't seem to talk much. I actually like a character that can go from slated for execution to being rescued by a group who has no obvious reason to, and he doesn't feel the need to go overboard with questions like so many other character types tend to do. Overall, the writing is solid, the plot is interesting, and I will be following its progress. Good show.
Tohro is awesome!
~Skeeter The Lurker
I very much enjoy this story. Sort of like Fallout Equestria, which I am also reading, in its basis upon the game, yet with an indepent and original story.
1431904 I too had a good laugh at that I kinda want to write a cross over story just so I can play the game as "research"
2865629 I'd assume the reason this story is more under the radar because of its length, but then there's FoE, which is pretty much one of the most (if not The most) popular MLP fics out there alongside Past Sins and My Little Dashie; then again, it's ing FoE. I've recently read two MLP crossover fics, one that crossed over with the videogame Final Fantasy 6, and one that crossed over with the anime Death Note. Both actually stick much closer to their original counterparts' storyline, but the twists and tweaks that are put in both stories make for excellent writing. Yet I find both are rather under the same boat as this story.
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Where am I again? How did I get here? Wow, I try to go to bed, and this is where I end up. At least I didn't wander into Tartarus again. I seem to keep doing that on my way to the kitchen. I am not a clever colt...
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what are these fics I've never heard of them
I have heard of three hundred and fifty-that made me cry
It is well-written and the pacing is perfect, the characters are appropriate and the world seems gritty. With all that being said this story just does not hold my attention for some reason. I might keep reading it, but then again I may not. I was hoping to see the Zebra sing, 'Ragnar The Red'.