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The diary forgotten on the moon.
This is a diary Princesa Luna kept while on the moon.
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My one mistake
Well bored again, This is a diary that Trixie kept after boastbusters. Rated teen just bin case.
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A Long Way From Home.

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A Long Way From Home. by The weird user

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Changelings are back, and this time, they are not playing nice. The old head butting cannon fodder has been replaced with cannon fodder with weapons. After his camp has been attacked, our hero private Green Leaf, along with his rag tag group has to bring word to Canterlot that the changelings are coming, if not, the surprise attack could be devastating. Too bad that Green Leaf is, A Long Way From Home.

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22nd Oct 2012

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22nd Oct 2012

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#1 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 5d ago ·

Oh my. A first-pony fic. This should be an interesting read.

RECOMMENDATION: Write in omniscient third-person or semi-omniscient first-person. Regular first-person can leave out a lot of details about the scene.

Edit: no need for a review. Just a proofreader or editor. Little grammatical mistakes and misused words are scattered about this story, but other than that, I can't say I hate it.

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	Trollfics are not banned! Please stop reporting them.

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