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Dragon Clawed Cakelings on Equestria Mountain

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Dragon Clawed Cakelings on Equestria Mountain by AwesumBronze

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Travel with Fluttershy and Pinkie as they embark on a heart-gripping battle against the feeding cakelings, growing ever stronger from the frosting. When Pinkie and comrades decide to explore a mysterious mountain, which is mystical and magical, things get terribly out of hand. Maybe she will die a grimy, red death. Or she will uncover the very seed at the heart of all of Ponyville. In either case, the magic of the cakelings is not enough to stop the haunting of Twilight, referred to as Sparks or Sparkie.

First Published
27th Sep 2012

Last Modified
27th Sep 2012

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Thorlol

#1 · 33w, 1d ago ·

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Quotation marks? Have you heard of them?

#2 · 33w, 1d ago ·

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Question marks are totally unnecessary, and quotation marks are just too visible, don't you agree. I might change points of view though.

Thorlol

#3 · 33w, 1d ago ·

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*Rubs head*

Very funny. I'm dying of laughter.

TheHylianBatman

#4 · 31w, 6d ago ·

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>>13520831352083

LOL! HAHA!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

They are completely necessary. I thought I was reading a poem until I realized you had words like 'said' and 'muttered'.

Even I wouldn't edit this.

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It seems my party has been disconnected. Au what the hell, I'll laugh anyway. Baw ha ha. However, my next story has almost done the same.

TheHylianBatman

#6 · 31w, 6d ago ·

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I don't quite get the last one.

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