She tries to stop it...But the monster inside is too strong. For Luna, there's only one way out.
Well, here's anther tear-jerker. Hopefully everybody likes it. :3
Oh yes, and....Subliminal DiscLuna shipping~~~~
SPOILER (i guess)
I never understood cutting, is she just distracting herself? does she actually think it's hurting her other self as well? I've always heard it was a way to express internal pain in a physical way. (though I haven't really looked into it)
anyways pretty good story :P would have liked even more umph when Tia found Luna. And, I thought the death was supposed to bring peace, not a yelling nightmare :P
>>13543321354332 I think, I read something about cutting and how it releasing endorphins, thus causing a calming effect.
yep yep, that does ring a bell now that you've said it :P
I guess I can understand the concept, but not being prone to anxiety or panic attacks personally makes it difficult to grasp. This story sparks a curiosity in me though and makes me want to look for more on a similar topic :P, so gj
I like this story. It's well written, but I think maybe it would be better if Luna felt that maybe she liked it a little more, just for a while, knowing that every cut kept the monster in. Then, maybe, she could go on to dislike it more and more when she realises that it's pointless to just do little cuts, and there's only one way out, which is death. But the concept is believable.
>>13543841354384 Glad I could help, but just remember, curiosity killed the colt. ? I have no idea what i'm doing...
>>13543321354332 In my head, it was that pain was the only way to keep Nightmare Moon at bay, basically. And cutting/stabbing herself was the best way to do that.
excellent read, but you're going to have to do much better than that if you want me to cry.
still, good story! thumbs up.
The story was a little too short, but definitely deserves better than 4 likes 4 dislikes. The writing style was pretty average, but the idea was interesting enough to counter that. Overall, decent story.
Yeah, it's a good story. Has a nice element of darkness to it, which was obviously trying to be set. The emotional levels seem about right for what would've happened had the scene actually unfolded, and the reasoning behind it is believable.