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Twilight Sparkle never meant to do anything wrong. But then again, all magical mistakes are caused by ponies who have no idea what happened. That's why they're called mistakes. The only difference with Twilight's mistake is that it accidentally sort of turned her into Princess Celestia. And now she doesn't know how to change back.
This is priceless, i can't wait to read more. On another note, the changling idea makes sense to me, i mean why should i go about with such a busy day when i can have someone look just like me and do it for me? Totally wish i had one of those for certain occasions.
SOMEONE MAKE COUCH POTATO CELESTIA PICS!
DO IT!
The premise, I think, is a bit stretched. I mean, I've seen quite a few variations on the subject here on the site. That being said, the story is well done, though towards the end it started getting a bit strained, kinda like you were trying to extend it to get it as wordy as you could, but you weren't quite sure how to do it well, so you just settled for writing whatever came to mind instead of thinking your sentences through. But like I said, overall I enjoyed it. So I will be following this for later. 
I can expect this to be a good story. Doesn't sound all too relevant to my interests, but good nonetheless.
One thing, though.
in the sentence: "HOW DOST THOU INTEND ON RETURNING TO THOU'S NORMAL SELF?"
Shouldn't that be "HOW DOST THOU INTEND ON RETURNING TO THINE OWN SELF?"
Unless I'm using 'thine' wrong, in which case your sentence would be just fine.
Other than that, I don't see all that much wrong with this story, except maybe the occasional lack of italics with all caps instead.
"Lunnaaaaaa! Help meeee!" Twilight couldn't help but notice how incredibly WHINY Princess Celestia's voice sounded."
I choked on my drink. 
Also, I believe Celestia looks a bit like Heavy in this video when she is thinking:
LOL, InB4 featured, me thinks. The premise is just so amusing and hilarious.
While the character of TS seems a bit off, and there are a few minor quirks in formatting that I find puzzling, the execution is BRILLIANT.
Moar, please. And I beg of you, DON'T SCREW THIS UP. This concept is too good to waste.
It's 3:21 AM here and I can barely hold myself back from laughing out loud, this story... this is amazing, you dear sir earned my so precious, only for one use BUCK! Congratulations!
No, seriously this is so good I can't find words to describe how awesome it is!
While perhaps not the most canon story I've ever read, I got some laughs. You've got me interested.
It's a wonderful concept and I look forward to its continuation.
Oh, and please don't stuff in pointless filler where you don't have to, or cut things short when you want to explain them more. Pacing is important and that's really the only minor flaw I see right now.
Um.........
so wait Celestia is an egotistical narcissistic A.D.D neat-freak who consists of swag, laziness and potato who the majority of the time is a changeling. So wait that means that the Celestia at Cadence's wedding was in fact a changeling, which means that Chrysalis couldn't identify her own changeling when disguised and therefore is a massive failure of a queen being unable to recognise her subjects.
Meanwhile, Twilight is a purple pony-chick who can't keep her beak out of other pony's secrets, which in turn should've made her the epitomy of lust for her lust for knowledge, which makes her the opposite of Tom?
I think I understand this story.
Twilight's near infinite magical potential inside an alicorn body? What could go wrong?
Also imagine how wonderfully organized the country will be!
So Twi has found out that her idol is lazy, got a Cider problem and let a Changeling do her job!
Whereas Celestia only found out uh nothing.
Yeah, Twi gonna end up on the sun when this ends.
So how long till Celestia decides to do some uncouth stuff since she´s in her student´s body?
Also it´s darn mean to say that Twi is ugly. She´s not! D:
Or at least i doubt she´s ugly in normal Pony standard.
Edit: I forgot about the fact that Twi found out that Celestia lied about how difficult it is to raise the sun. XDDD
As long as Twilight hadn't discovered any of her secret's, Celestia would dismiss this as simply an accident.
Celestia would dismiss this as simply an accident.
simply an accident.
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