Inspired by a random 4chan post 'Rarity is now beside you, what do?' I decided to write what my reaction would be in a slightly more realistic scenario. ( As realistic as random ponies appearing out of nowhere can be.) (PS I wrote the story as a character, not as myself specifically. It's just how I would react in that situation.)
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very interested please continue this
>raep
Also, lemme get that for ya.
Ok, if mine was, "Rainbow Dash is now next to you, what do?", she'd crash into me, we dust ourselves off, introduce ourselves, have some fun times together, and MAYBE fall in love. But then again, who knows?
This sounds like it could get interesting, big man hero there to save the day with big stong arms. ![]()
What do you think?
A few minor grammar errors, but overall, a good read with an excellent premise. ![]()
You have piqued my interest! ![]()
Please continue (and maybe longer chapters if that's okay? ![]()
"Suddenly, Rarity is next to you. What do?"
Kill her, >rape her corpse, continue doing whatever I was doing before.
Okay, now to read.
You have 37 likes and over 70 favorites over the last 2 days. Is that how you got featured so quickly?
Anyway it certainly was an interesting beginning, do you mind if I have your story featured in the "Ponies In The Real World" group?
This is gooood... no sex tag? = Fav+thumb!
Also, 1st chapter -> 'oppertunity' lol.
Unless the road he was walking down was actually called "Memory Lane" then he was not literally walking down memory lane. He was 'figuratively' or 'metaphorically' walking down memory lane.
AUTHORS, Y U NOT KNOW WHAT 'LITERALLY' MEANS?! ![]()
...sorry, that's just a pet peeve of mine ![]()
Other than that, looks interesting, but I'd have to see more before saying much else.
Holy crap Tense switch!
The narrative so far isn't bad but please choose a tense and stick with it.
*Reads chapter title* Interested.... *Reads chapter* What?! No one chemically exploded?! Nopony (Or person) was harmed in the making of this spontaneous combustion (or did she somehow implode into existence on Earth mayhaps?!). Good day.![]()
If I had Peter Griffin's "go on" picture saved, that's what I'd post. Alas, I do not. Keep updating!
Haven't read yet but will soon. I like this idea. I have to say if a pony from MLP appeared next to me right now I would stare for approximately 22 seconds and then shout to the skies above: A CHARACTER FROM A TV SHOW JUST APPEARED IN REAL LIFE THEREFORE ANYTHING AND EVERYTHING IS POSSIBLE SO I WANT THE POWER TO HAVE ALL POWERS OR THE POWER TO CHOOSE WHICH OF MY THOUGHTS BECOME REALITIES!!! (All in one breath).
Then I'd have to wait and see what happens next.
You should write "A walk in the 'I want to cum inside rainbow dash' park" next.
im pleased so far, the conversation between him and his friend, told me quite a bit about his personality xP NEXT! :D
love it! rarity is acting like.... well rarity and he's taking it well so far :D thumb up from me :3 cant wait for more
Funnyjunk links do not work.
Also, I'm just going to trump you all...
Shoot son, whenever I find these questions, those strangers always quit like FUCKING BITCHES. (Omegle)
>Toasting in epic bread with wrong color
>Not using FiMFiction Enhancement Suite
Dammit gaiz, what's wrong with you?
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Also, ITT:
>rape
Why can't stupid people learn to use the thumbs. Like it or hate it, cast your vote
Holy fucking hell!
Is your avatar like a ponified version of cheese or wat? ![]()
lolwut?!
I meant cheese from Fosters home for imaginary friends
Rarity is now beside you. What do?
'Have mutual freak-the-fuck-out time, ask her what the fuck she's doing in my house to establish myself as the leader of the conversation as it's taking place in my abode, explain that she's in a different universe, explain she's fake and from a TV show, explain there's no way for her to get back home, explain that if she leaves my house she'll be captured by the government or a sadistic brony to be experimented on, work up the nerve to tell my parents and siblings she exists, carefully plan her rise to fame. *Imagines interviews with Lauren Faust, the President, and scientists who finally learn how magic works through electromagnetic monitoring tests applied to objects lifted magically*. Then, live out our lives, set for eternity with fortunes, while trying to help Rarity get through a long-seated depression about losing all her friends that she eventually grows old with and dies having. What a fucking depressing story; this is why I hope this never happens.'
>The best fucking explanation I have ever read.
Rarity suddenly appears before me. What do?
Laugh like a dickhead and wish she was
.Great Chapter Ending! Favorited!
I'm not sure what's with all the rape comments though.
I hope everyone has their tickets to the bandwagon!
>rape
Also, Then she exploded into bats.
Mental note: Never invite Rarity to my house. She'd be appalled. ![]()
Enjoyable story, I'll be looking forward to more.
Honestly, if I were in this guy's position, I wouldn't be able to help Rarity at all, I'd be too busy doing a victory dance.
Magic dilutes when wet?
Was kinda hoping this would not turn into clop.
I love it when a usually crappy idea (a pony comes to Earth right in front of me) turns out good.
Keep it up!![]()
This is a test. If you fail, your genitals are hers. If you pass, you might return to Equestria with her.
Oh God, so many things could go down when the next chapter starts...
What will happen next to our pair? Will our hero manage to get Rarity back home? Is Rarity putting the moves on him? And where did that violet towel come from?
Find out next time on, A Walk in the Park!
>>1372443 What will happen next to our pair? Will our hero manage to get Rarity back home? Is Rarity putting the moves on him? Where did that violet towel come from? And why the HELL am I asking you questions that you clearly don't know the answers to?
Lawl, I'm kidding. Take no offense, that was just tempting. But this really could go in the direction of any of the questions you just asked.
Well, looks good, for now. Sooner or later a storm will be brewing on the distance....
Keep it up!
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