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Gearshed 151

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    Inspired by a random 4chan post 'Rarity is now beside you, what do?' I decided to write what my reaction would be in a slightly more realistic scenario. ( As realistic as random ponies appearing out of nowhere can be.) (PS I wrote the story as a character, not as myself specifically. It's just how I would react in that situation.)

    First Published
    27th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    13th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 141 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #2 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #3 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1348468

    I'm sorry, we are all out.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ok, if mine was, "Rainbow Dash is now next to you, what do?", she'd crash into me, we dust ourselves off, introduce ourselves, have some fun times together, and MAYBE fall in love.  But then again, who knows?

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Watching. Be sure to continue this, por favor.

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This sounds like it could get interesting, big man hero there to save the day with big stong arms. :raritywink:

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1348612 wat? no we are not theres plently of rape to go around

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >ra-...damn, beat to it.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hm. It's written well, hardly any mistakes.

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1348957 But are there any brakes on this train? :pinkiecrazy:

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1349032

    What do you think?

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    #12 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Cool?

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Must say, I like the idea, suprised you wouldn't faint.

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    CHAPTERS ARE SHORT

    STAHPIT

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :eeyup:

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A few minor grammar errors, but overall, a good read with an excellent premise. :twilightsmile:

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You have piqued my interest! :derpytongue2:

    Please continue (and maybe longer chapters if that's okay? :fluttercry:

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I like it keep going :trollestia:

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You've got me hooked! :pinkiehappy:

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Suddenly, Rarity is next to you. What do?"

    Kill her, >rape her corpse, continue doing whatever I was doing before.

    Okay, now to read.

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1349921

    What.

    I like this concept; it's as interesting as it can get for a "random pony appears" fiction. It's worth giving it a shot. I was slightly worried by the title of this chapter, however...

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You have 37 likes and over 70 favorites over the last 2 days.  Is that how you got featured so quickly?  

    Anyway it certainly was an interesting beginning, do you mind if I have your story featured in the "Ponies In The Real World" group?

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1350170 It's apparently A Thing on 4chan to mention "rape" as the answer to everything, along with including everything after > in green text.

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1350221 Because it's fun, I guess. 4Chan's a strange place though, don't go there.

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1350227

    I have never been, nor have I any inclination; this is just from what I've been able to infer.

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1350240 Good. Retain what innocence your mind may have left.

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1350207 I got featured!?! Nice. Go ahead and add it.

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1350270

    Done it and yeah, you really did got featured which is the reason why you're getting much more faves and comments than usual.

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'll go on.

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    oshit. please continue soon.

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1350359 To be honest the usual reaction to most of my stories is dislike and hate comments. The fact that I got featured in the first 10 hours of me submitting it almost gave me a heart attack.

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :derpyderp1: oooooooh, what's this? PoE story? you have my attention.

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1350875

    Heart attack in a good way or heart attack in a bad way? ^^;

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1350940 As good as a heart attack can get

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    aaahhh shizza

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This is gooood... no sex tag? = Fav+thumb!

    Also, 1st chapter -> 'oppertunity' lol.

    #38 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Unless the road he was walking down was actually called "Memory Lane" then he was not literally walking down memory lane. He was 'figuratively' or 'metaphorically' walking down memory lane.

    AUTHORS, Y U NOT KNOW WHAT 'LITERALLY' MEANS?! :raritydespair:

    ...sorry, that's just a pet peeve of mine :twilightsheepish:

    Other than that, looks interesting, but I'd have to see more before saying much else.

    #39 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    MOAR:flutterrage:

    #40 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1351392 Haha fixed it.

    #41 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Holy crap Tense switch!

    The narrative so far isn't bad but please choose a tense and stick with it.

    #42 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    *Reads chapter title* Interested.... *Reads chapter* What?! No one chemically exploded?!  Nopony (Or person) was harmed in the making of this spontaneous combustion (or did she somehow implode into existence on Earth mayhaps?!). Good day.:trollestia:

    #43 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1351447 Yeah I do that a lot, sorry. I think I fixed most of that.

    #44 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    If I had Peter Griffin's "go on" picture saved, that's what I'd post. Alas, I do not. Keep updating!

    #46 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1351392 No, I take it back, it is called memory lane.

    #47 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Haven't read yet but will soon. I like this idea. I have to say if a pony from MLP appeared next to me right now I would stare for approximately 22 seconds and then shout to the skies above: A CHARACTER FROM A TV SHOW JUST APPEARED IN REAL LIFE THEREFORE ANYTHING AND EVERYTHING IS POSSIBLE SO I WANT THE POWER TO HAVE ALL POWERS OR THE POWER TO CHOOSE WHICH OF MY THOUGHTS BECOME REALITIES!!! (All in one breath).

    Then I'd have to wait and see what happens next.

    #48 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You should write "A walk in the 'I want to cum inside rainbow dash' park" next.

    #49 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :twilightangry2: ... damned cliffhanger...

    Alright. You have my attention. :duck:

    #50 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >RAPE

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    im pleased so far, the conversation between him and his friend, told me quite a bit about his personality xP NEXT! :D

    #52 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    love it! rarity is acting like.... well rarity and he's taking it well so far :D thumb up from me :3 cant wait for more

    #53 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1351900

    Where we're going, there are no brakes.

    #54 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >rape

    #55 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1349032

    *Big Mac voice*

    Aint no brakes on the raep train.

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    meh

    #57 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    okaaaayyy....................... hav a fuck

    #58 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1350975

    Funnyjunk links do not work.

    Also, I'm just going to trump you all...

    #59 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >rape

    #60 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Shoot son, whenever I find these questions, those strangers always quit like FUCKING BITCHES. (Omegle)

    #62 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Why can't stupid people learn to use the thumbs. Like it or hate it, cast your vote

    #63 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1352767

    Cant, not enough >Rape

    #65 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1353475 Haha a cheese pony!

    I think that would be Luna if anyone, only she knows if the moon is really cheese :rainbowderp:

    #67 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1353605 Darn. Every time ya come up with something original, turns out it's already been done :ajsleepy:

    #68 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Rarity is now beside you. What do?

    'Have mutual freak-the-fuck-out time, ask her what the fuck she's doing in my house to establish myself as the leader of the conversation as it's taking place in my abode, explain that she's in a different universe, explain she's fake and from a TV show, explain there's no way for her to get back home, explain that if she leaves my house she'll be captured by the government or a sadistic brony to be experimented on, work up the nerve to tell my parents and siblings she exists, carefully plan her rise to fame. *Imagines interviews with Lauren Faust, the President, and scientists who finally learn how magic works through electromagnetic monitoring tests applied to objects lifted magically*. Then, live out our lives, set for eternity with fortunes, while trying to help Rarity get through a long-seated depression about losing all her friends that she eventually grows old with and dies having. What a fucking depressing story; this is why I hope this never happens.'

    >The best fucking explanation I have ever read.

    #69 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1354154

    Rarity suddenly appears before me. What do?

    Laugh like a dickhead and wish she was

    .

    #70 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Great Chapter Ending! Favorited!

    I'm not sure what's with all the rape comments though.

    #71 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1354745 If you knew 4chan then you would know

    #72 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1352767

    Being a colorblind indivudal, I thought my choice of green was similar enough to that of 4chan's quote-text color. Sorry.

    #73 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #74 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I hope everyone has their tickets to the bandwagon!

    >rape

    Also, Then she exploded into bats.

    #75 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Interesting beginning. :twilightsmile:

    #76 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1352314 >THERE ARE NO BRAKES MOTHERFUCKER!

    #77 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #78 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice story. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #79 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1351392 This is literally the most annoying comment I've read in the past 10 minutes. :trollestia:

    #80 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1352767 Sweetie Belle is eating an insect in that picture.

    #81 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I require more rape that is this story.

    #82 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 22h ago · · ·
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    #83 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    need any help on ur next chapter?

    #84 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Mental note: Never invite Rarity to my house.  She'd be appalled.  :raritydespair:

    #85 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Enjoyable story, I'll be looking forward to more.

    Honestly, if I were in this guy's position, I wouldn't be able to help Rarity at all, I'd be too busy doing a victory dance.

    #86 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Bow chicka bow wow... Awesome:pinkiehappy:

    #87 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    INCOMING CLOPSTORM!!!!!!:twilightoops:

    #88 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1372163 Depends on what you're offering

    #89 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Magic dilutes when wet?

    Was kinda hoping this would not turn into clop.

    #90 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I love it when a usually crappy idea (a pony comes to Earth right in front of me) turns out good.

    Keep it up!:twilightsmile:

    #91 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is a test. If you fail, your genitals are hers. If you pass, you might return to Equestria with her.

    #92 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh God, so many things could go down when the next chapter starts...

    #93 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    What will happen next to our pair? Will our hero manage to get Rarity back home? Is Rarity putting the moves on him? And where did that violet towel come from?

    Find out next time on, A Walk in the Park!

    #94 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1372376 I doubt it'd turn into clop. Probably an awkward scene of epic proportions.

    #95 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1372443 What will happen next to our pair? Will our hero manage to get Rarity back home? Is Rarity putting the moves on him? Where did that violet towel come from? And why the HELL am I asking you questions that you clearly don't know the answers to?:derpytongue2: Lawl, I'm kidding. Take no offense, that was just tempting. But this really could go in the direction of any of the questions you just asked.

    #96 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    What do ya need?

    #97 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1372532 Proofread if ya want, or maybe you could message me a couple of ideas on how you would like the story to go. To be honest I'm winging it and any input is good.

    #98 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Awesome job Gears.  I will keep up with this. ^_^

    #99 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well, looks good, for now. Sooner or later a storm will be brewing on the distance....

    Keep it up! :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss:

    #100 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter. :twilightsmile: I can't wait for the next one!

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