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Art Inspired


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MORE FROM YOU! OH YEAH! :rainbowkiss:

I'm here Art don't worry oh and that icon is really awesome. I'm gonna do one too... after reading this... :twilightsheepish:

Damn that sexy Twilight!
Alright, you have my attention.
Will read later.

Following it. This looks interesting.

Not bad, not bad at all. A couple odd pacing errors, but it's not really necessary for this type of story. Feel free to go nuts and do what you want, so long as it's good :twilightsheepish:
Looking forward to more! :rainbowkiss:
Oh, right. Also, props to ABronyLife42 for givin help on the side. Glad to see you two havin fun with this'n.

I'll be sure to check this out...once I get some sleep. My night at work only ended a few hours ago. :twilightsheepish:

And an Art Inspired fic...hmmm, I wouldn't be surprised if this is in the featured block at some point soon. Sounds like an interesting idea...and a collaboration with A Brony 42 Life. Hmmm, yep, definitely gonna check this out later! :eeyup:

1350616 I think it's the very mentioning of 'Anon' that sets people off. After that it's mostly a snowball effect.

(Haven't read it yet though, maybe it really is just terrible...:scootangel:)

1354139 No, actually, it shouldn't be... worked kinda hard on it.

I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this. But I'll keep it in my Read Later list so as to keep an eye on it.

Will favorite. Now intrigued.

1354387 You liked it then? Please say yes.:pinkiesad2:

Just curious, but who's "Anon", and why does he set people off?
This is Art Inspired, people!

1354803 This might get featured, and it might not, but like I said, I worked hard on it, got some help, and people down vote it because of the title. Buck it!

1354832
It does look a little like another "Anon in Equestria" story...

1354841 But not what you'd expect.

1354850 Yeah... I know. But don't judge a book by its cover!:ajbemused:

1354867
I know, which is one of the main messages in the brony fandom.
But people still do that, sadly.
Your stories are awesome, Y U NO UPDATE FIRST UNICORN?

1354881 It's too sad, even for me to attempt to... please... be patient...:fluttercry:

1354888
Sad? In what way?
The Forced-to-love-twilight-and-immortal-pain?
The Everypony-has-a-crush-on-Twilight-but-she's-with-the-unicorn-whose-name-I-can't-remember?

1355189 (sigh)... You'll see.

1354393 Haven't read it yet, too busy :twilightblush:

1355196
Oh, alright.
Sad.
Sorry, but you'll always know that I always appreciate what you write, regardless of how it is.

1355212 Thanks:pinkiesad2: That... makes me feel better about it... it really does.

1355196
Damnit, now you've gotten my sadistic imagination going. Thanks for that...

For reference, if you've read CardsLafter's ongoing rewrite of Through the Eyes of Another Pony... my imagination is running like Firewall's when Tisiphone makes her remark about introducing racketeering... Not pleasant at all.

1355218
No problem! I know when someone(s) is a good writer, and I always appreciate good stories!
And you, sir, are an amazing author!

1356169 Grazie, if you speak Italian, that means thank you.

Is it bad that I laughed at this, while being aroused? :rainbowwild:

I liked it. Though I have to say this seems a little... rushed.
There are quite a few errors.

>mesmerized by it’s slick and shining head
When used possessively, "its" does not have an apostrophe

1350616 It needs editing. Relevant: The Art of Plain Speech :moustache:

1356180 >if you speak Italian
What if someone can speak Italian, but not read or write it?

1357009 <-- This

This was pretty good, but I agree, slightly rushed at a few points.

It's clearly centered around all but erotica, more for just some quick, sloppy sex. Eh, all in all good though.

good to see an actual AIE fic on fim, and reference to CBT makes it even better, cheers to future chapters.
Dislikes just for human/HIE/clop fics annoy the buck outa me, if it's not your cup of tea then leave otherwise just leave constructive criticism if desired or whatever.......

Humans and ponies doing sex aren't really my thing, but I'll give it a shot. It was absurdly entertaining.

Not a big fan of HIE clop, but i am huge fan of Art Inspired... I'll try this one. I just thought of a way to be okay with it. Think of it like human-alien relationship. The ponies are basically like humans with different bodies. so... i'll read HIE clop.

I loved it, hope you write more for this, it could get good, real good!

Where do Anons come from? Does Twilight pluck them out of the Brumda triangle and brainwash them?

I noticed there's new cover art for this fic. Does that mean it will be getting updated soon?:pinkiehappy:

I personally like the story, and I think that it has already gotten most of the downvotes that it will get.

Most of the opposition to the story probably comes from the title and the association of anon. Therefor, with most of the negative first impressions out of the way, the longer this fic continues, the higher the like percentage should go.

I'm also very fond of humanxpony stuff, so I would really like to see more of this.:duck:

1417002 Yes, it'll update within the week... I hope.

I got a good laugh with how this is written, in a good way. :ajsmug:

Totally want more! :pinkiehappy:

NEED MOAR! Dude you got skillz man. Can't wait for part 2:rainbowkiss:

1442915 Thanks, and it's on haitus for a mundo important fiction of mine. Watch me to keep tabs, and join my fan group as well!

1442927 You know what? That sounds like a good freckon plan :]. Im going to do that

This... this the bad. Random capitalization, OOC characters, rushed as hell, weird formatting, wish-fulfillment garbage, very boring and bland, etc.

It's just not very good at all. :ajbemused:

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