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    • Law of Multiverse
      Multiverse states that there is a universe for every possible situation. Fictional included. Humans.

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    The Law of Multiverse, a set of hypothetical, multiple universes that any scenario can exist. Any situation possible, according to the theory, can exist. Fiction or non-fiction.

    You know when most little girls at a young age dream of being a princess in a giant castle? Yeah, that could be a possible scenario.

    You know when most people spend hours on RPG games, assuming the role of another character and living a second life? Once again, possibility.

    You know that girl you liked but may not like you back? Guess again, somewhere out there, she would like you back.

    Now, try to apply all of that here. The fictional world of My Little Pony, an old 80's kids cartoon that had been recently revived. To some it may be a dream come true, to some, a total nightmare. How it is possible to contact these worlds? Man will never know, but until recently, one man did know.

    First Published
    27th Dec 2011
    Last Modified
    30th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 38 )

    #2 · Chapter 3 · 77w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Tracking for good faith!

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 77w, 1d ago · · ·
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    trackiing due to AWESOMNESS:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 77w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Hmm. Good concept. Begining to show flaws in implementation.

    I like the idea of the Multiverse, always have. However, I do hope eventually you'll stop with the "oh no i am- OH GOD WHAT IS THAT." Type of sentences. They become quite tedious after a while. Pet peeve, but i know most readers dislike them.

    Errors with the chapter: I had to turn off my sonic fine-tooth comb while reading this. Too many spelling, grammer, and flow errors. A Pre-reader or a post-story check is REQUIRED if this story is to survive. I recommend a pre-reader to a ton of people, but you, my friend, need it. :twilightsheepish:

    All in all, potential is here, but improvement is needed.

    -The Librarian

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 77w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>91157

    Will do.

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 77w, 22h ago · · ·
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    Uhm, I don't want to be the troll here, but the ponies are... Small...

    Somebody actually made the calculations, and they are (or Applejack at least) about 1 meter and 10 centimeters tall.

    That's 3.6 in feet.

    Soooo....

    Uhm....

    :trollestia:

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 77w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>91217

    Which is why the character is in a universe with that scenario :scootangel:

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 77w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>91227

    That makes sense.

    But it doesn't means that I accepted them as tall as a human...

    :S

    #9 · Chapter 4 · 77w, 16h ago · · ·
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    Tough love, baby. :twilightsmile:

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 77w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>90985

    Yo loleé.

    lol

    #11 · Chapter 4 · 77w, 7h ago · · ·
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    good story

    #12 · Chapter 5 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Moar. Now. I demand it, mortal.

    #13 · Chapter 6 · 76w, 1d ago · · ·
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    More :3

    #14 · Chapter 6 · 76w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowkiss:

    #15 · Chapter 7 · 75w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #16 · Chapter 7 · 75w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #17 · Chapter 7 · 74w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Huh. Well, I enjoy the multiverse just as much as the next sentient life-form, but the sometimes awkward wording and fairly frequent spelling/grammar mistakes are sorta turning me off of this one...

    I've only just started, so it'll probably improve... What the hay; I'll track it :twilightsmile:

    #18 · Chapter 7 · 74w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yeah, I've just now realizing that I can't proof read for shit. Until someone else comes along as is willing too, I'm not sure if I can continue this.

    #19 · Chapter 8 · 69w, 5d ago · · ·
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    daymn.

    #20 · Chapter 8 · 69w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Fun fact: I actually took the time to proof read this.

    #21 · Chapter 3 · 69w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Uhhh... I think pony is a bit smaller than that? But it's alright. It's your universe after all.

    And It's nice story.:yay:

    #22 · Chapter 9 · 69w, 1d ago · · ·
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    My first thought on the pony was Alucard..... Then i saw no face. SlenderPony. Fear him.

    #23 · Chapter 9 · 69w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Don't look at the slender pony. Stay close to other ponies. If you find yourself alone, keep your eyes shut. Don't move don't talk. If you look at him or make a noise in his presence... You vanish.

    One of my theories is that he grows jealous of us having eyes and facial features. That why he goes after children more so than adults. They don't know to fear him. He likes bad children the most. Mostly, because they wander of where there parents tell them not to. So there alone, easy targets. The main thing I want to know is what does he do with them after getting them?

    I guess the only way to know is to be gotten.

    Good story by the way. One tip though, space out your dialoge. When somepony else goes to talk start a new line. It helps Uthe reader. Also more detail would be nice. Just a suggestion.

    #24 · Chapter 9 · 69w, 18h ago · · ·
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    well fuck

    #25 · Chapter 10 · 68w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ...:trixieshiftleft:...:trixieshiftright:...

    ...

    I DON'T HAVE YO TWENTY DOLLARS!

    :trollestia:

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 64w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Man crosses the multiverse through a car crash.

    Seems legit.

    #27 · Chapter 11 · 64w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>367966

    Wasn't exactly the crash that caused it. More like an natural force.

    #28 · Chapter 11 · 63w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Will you ever continue it?

    There are a lot of things to explain, and the story have a potential too.

    #29 · Chapter 11 · 62w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>403025

    Usually my hands are full with portions of life, and the only potential time I can add chapters are on weekends/breaks. Hopefully I'll try my best to continue on with the story soon, though.

    #30 · Chapter 11 · 62w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>411287

    Good! I'm looking forward to read it!

    #31 · Chapter 12 · 62w, 5d ago · · ·
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    "mmhmm"  -- I laughed so hard at this...

    Yes, the humor is still good and you made a pretty good explanation too.

    Keep up with the good work!

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is a real theory.And,if this theory is correct,somewhere,out there,equestria exists.

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    In fact,all of the fictional universe's exist.There's a Star Wars universe, a Halo universe, a Mario universe.The only problem is that we can't get to them.At least not yet.Or perhaps we will be visited by another us,a different reality.Just imagine it.All religion and physics shattered.It could cause mass hysteria,or the world leaders could think that they are a danger and launch a world war with them.Just know that nothing is impossible.And I mean NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE.

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Just as this states,all possible scenarios exist.So,by writing this fanfiction,he has created a whole new universe where this actually happens.

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 55w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>603360 so the guy who wrote princess molestia made a universe where that happens :unsuresweetie:

    #36 · Chapter 13 · 55w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Wow.

    Well, this is.... interesting....

    :S

    #37 · Chapter 13 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >blood hurdling

    It's "blood curdling". How do you mess that up?

    #38 · Chapter 13 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>674534

    I fail at interpreting everything and anything, so just by habit...

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