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    • Lunaughty
      Lunaughty strikes back! Can the mane 6 stop her once more, or is there something else?

      33,602 words · 23,534 views · 418 likes · 16 dislikes
    • Unhealthy Obsessions
      A collection of stories where different characters fulfill their deepest, creepiest desires...
      3,394 words · 1,919 views · 133 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Running Shadow... that's also really annoying.
      An ominous shadow is seen running through ponyville annoying everypony in sight. mainly Rainbow Dash
      11,048 words · 2,346 views · 224 likes · 9 dislikes
    • Ergodic
      Twilight figures out just what the fourth wall is... and how to destroy it completely.
      2,805 words · 3,410 views · 154 likes · 7 dislikes
    • When I see a world untouched by war...
      16,879 words · 3,703 views · 435 likes · 32 dislikes
    • I just want you back...
      8,791 words · 3,166 views · 351 likes · 29 dislikes
    • The Iron Dragon
      2,883 words · 3,013 views · 55 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Pony Scales
      12,933 words · 15,230 views · 371 likes · 37 dislikes
    • What A Party!
      3,679 words · 2,724 views · 144 likes · 12 dislikes
    • The Dark
      8,350 words · 445 views · 38 likes · 5 dislikes

    The Shadow...

    A dark entity that has been plagueing the quiet town of Ponyville for several days now...

    ...is really freaking annoying the manure out of everypony there, especially Rainbow Dash.  But as the mane 6 try to get together to catch this trolling creature, what mysteries will they inevitably uncover?

    Will they find the origins of the creature?

    Will they figure out why it retreats to the Everfree Forest when it's done trolling ponies?

    And will they be able to outsmart it?

    Maybe... maybe...

    ...

    ...but I have yet to meet a mare that can outsmart the Bonk!




    (Pssst, the shadow is the Scout.  TF2 crossover peeps!)

    First Published
    25th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    7th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 75 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh this is fucking glorious. I think you have Scout's character down perfectly.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    oh yes. that is Scout. more please, but next time, do Pinkie Pie.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I would have laughed so hard, but my teachers would be mad.

    Did anyone else envision Owliscious' head pivoting around left to right with a little beep going off every time he changed direction?(Oh wait, that was on the chapter of "The Dark")

    I half expected Dash to run into a random Engineer with him saying "Nope".

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    sssssssssssss.......SSSSSSSSSSSSCCCCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!! little twiligt sparkle look close and see humans have fur!(tiny strings, that is.)

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    #6 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1336996 :coolphoto:

    ADMIIIIIIIIIINS

    ||   HALP

    V   V

    :raritycry::raritydespair: :facehoof: :twilightangry2: :pinkiesad2::flutterrage::ajbemused::rainbowhuh:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Fire makes everything better."

    Narrator is Pyro.  Calling it now.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1337182

    I actually am a pyro :D

    Will be posting more about this on my blog later today~

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #11 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1336468 Most likely because those are his lines.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    Scouts make Rainbow cry.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It's..... it's... BEAUTIFUL!

    Especially with the sandman!

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:I LOVE IT!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1336996 (Scout's Voice) Need an admin heah!

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Huzzah for the holy mackerel of godliness.

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Troll on, you magnificent bastard.

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    It's Major League not Made ya leave.

    That an there were spelling errors in this.:ajbemused:

    Still, it was good.

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    i want to see more of this, if only to know when th' inevitable drunk night together happens.

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1344550

    What I was gonna say.

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Niiiiice! I hope to see more! :pinkiehappy:

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    noone can out speed the scout:pinkiehappy:

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Replace Yay with Yeah, and bam! Scout!

    Rainbows make me cry!

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Odd, I don't remember the Army allowing their soldiers to get high...

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    lol this is fun :rainbowlaugh:

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    RED scout, calling it.

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Pure comedy gold!

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 43m ago · · ·
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    Not bad. I like the plot and the idea of the most obnoxious game character ever to be designed has ended up in Equestria. Plus reading Rainbow Dash's ego getting trampled into the dirt is always satisfying. :rainbowwild:

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 20h ago · · ·
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    >>1336823

    For some reason, you made me think of Owlowicous turning his head back and forth in synchronisation with the song My Sharona.

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh shit. Scouts so dead.

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ...Scout, you done goofed.

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    harr harr harr

    -wargod

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Rainbow trail, omfg :rainbowlaugh:

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    You sir, are a certified genius. :pinkiehappy:

    #37 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Damn, i thought it was the RED scout.:ajbemused:

    #38 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh... shit. RUN, SCOUT, RUN! RUN UNTILL CELESTIA HERSELF COMES OVER AND BEATS YOUR FLANK!

    #39 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    and then they all fucked. the end:trollestia:

    #40 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    TACTICAL GENIUS!

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1337233

    I'll buy all of that, if you just go and touch Heavy's gun...

    #42 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I BET ALL PONYS BECAUSE THEY CHOIR!!!   *wins 20 bucks* Eh eh eh~:rainbowkiss:

    #43 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Shit i bet on Rainbow -sigh- take my bucks:applejackunsure:

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I like this new weapo- comedy story. I bet there are yet to be even more crazier crossovers. Magic school bus goes to Equestria? The Colt(God)Father? I dare you. :ajsmug:

    #45 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    RUN SCOUT RUUUUUUN:pinkiehappy:

    #46 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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      “Ragle fragle!” and that weird Sasquatch monster from Billy and Many? Da'fuk?

            Dude, that thing just jumped out from the basement, grabbed Spike, and then hauled ass out the window. Spike was screaming all “aaah! Help!” and everyone else just did nothing. Seriously, the frik is wrong with these ponies?

    You an I are now friends :rainbowlaugh:

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    'You fucked up!'

    Abraham Lincoln

    #48 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Scout is totally going to do something crazy. Or Fluttershy will stop them.

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    While I like the idea behind the story, I couldn't make it halfway through the first chapter before the incredibly annoying writing style threw me off.

    It may be a deliberate attempt to imitate Scout's way of talking, but to quote Yahtzee Croshaw "Deliberately annoying is still annoying."

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Got It Memorized?

    :pinkiehappy: I smell an Axel quote in here :pinkiehappy:

    #51 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Always the generic BLU scout...

    Oh well good story, Streak. :pinkiehappy:

    #52 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1404523

    you win 1 internet

    #53 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Mad Milk, Billy and Mandy, Fluttershy, but no requests for dispencers? This chapter was almost perfect.

    #54 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1406014

    I knew i was forgetting something!

    #55 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1406863 Half the time I was just thinking "sayitsayitsayitsayitsayit!"

    #56 · Chapter 3 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Please pass the egg salad :3

    #57 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 18h ago · · ·
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    >>1414312 Throws egg salad at you:rainbowwild:

    #58 · Chapter 3 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    i wonder when is the next chapter

    #59 · Chapter 3 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I wonder if the Scout will find out Spike breathes fire and suddenly develops a fear o--

    WHOOPS DID I JUST THINK THAT SPIKE WOULD PLAY ANY PART IN THIS STORY SILLY ME

    #60 · Chapter 3 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    RED scout master race

    #61 · Chapter 3 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #62 · Chapter 3 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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    aaand... when do they fuck?

    #63 · Chapter 3 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Calling Scout's first line in the next chapter:

    "I regret everything! Everything I've ever done!"

    #64 · Chapter 3 · 24w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is the funniest story ever.  of all time.

    #65 · Chapter 1 · 24w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    Twilight Sparkle had gone to bed from a late night of sleeping.

    lolwut.

    #66 · Chapter 3 · 24w, 1d ago · · ·
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    i was bettin on derpy

    #67 · Chapter 3 · 24w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1753467

    Don't advertise other fics on the comments of other people's fics. :trixieshiftleft:

    #68 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wanananaanna....

    #69 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>1756161 Please... continue. So funny.

    #70 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1756161

    Hey, I haven't even written a tic. Don't hate what you cant prove. I just like derpy.

    #71 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·
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    * fic

    #72 · Chapter 3 · 18w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Dammit, just found this story. Please continue soon. :twilightsmile:

    #73 · Chapter 3 · 15w, 3h ago · · 1 ·
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    More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::fluttershbad:

    #74 · Chapter 3 · 14w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Little little man is in for it :yay:

    #75 · Chapter 3 · 6w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    *coughs* *coughs* new chapter? *coughs*

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