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Microshazm


My fics are a pleasure. No one's ever told me that, but I read minds. Occasionally.

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I am going to make this clear: yes, I woke up in Ponyville, and yes, I was a pony. For the next five minutes I was happily shaking my cool mane and wagging my new tail like a puppy. Best five minutes ever... and then everything went to hell.
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Eric knew exactly what to expect of Equestria, but when he actually got there, absolutely nothing was as he expected.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 27 )

This is really interesting! I may have to come back to it later...
It has a pretty good storyline, and I'm excited to see some more explaination!

:derpytongue2: ~Shadow

Not my usual cup of tea.

That being said, I like it. As long as you find a way to keep the double name thing straight and simple to know who is who, this story will go far.

Damn. This is a new twist I have NEVER seen. This is REALLY interesting. Keep it going. Grammar police, Take it away.

I admit, I was put off by the description, but then I saw that Microshazm wrote it.

All I'm going to say is that I'm curious as to where this three-mile pileup version of Equestria goes.

Wouldnt that suck if it happened to any one of us? Thatd be a wake up call. *SMACK* Real Life! Pony Style! Meh? I'll read on

Ehh... The concept is pretty interesting, but your writing leaves a lot to be desired

... Why does he have to be cast as an apple just because he looks like apple bloom. Trixie, Pokey Pierce, and that pony that looks like the 3rd Doctor all have the same color scheme (and all 3 are unicorns).

My head hurts... favorited but I might need an aspirin after all that. Please keep going, though. This is way too interesting.

1452894 Eh, what does Spike know?
1452875 Thank you, I was running low.
1452759 I usually write from the point-of-view of intelligent characters, and now I got a 4chan-dwelling teenager brony. Severe degradation is the price for now.
And thanks for the positive comments

This is a very interesting take on the usual "what if" story. I like it, seems a bit dark, but that's cool.
Looking forward to more!

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Thanks.
Dark? Hm... That reminds me. I left the rating "Everyone". (obviously I fixed it now)

I'm forever calling Applejack "Agent Orange".

Things are going to get really weird when Big Macintosh shows up, aren't they?:unsuresweetie:

I've got plans for one more chapter, and if I find myself motivated I'll continue with episodic content.

s1

1770906
Are these characters going appearance ?:
Zecora
Discord
Lyra Heartstrings
Gilda
Sombra
Trixie
Braeburn
Chrysalis
Mr. Carrot Cake and Mrs. Cup Cake
Cheerilee
Derpy Hooves
EDIT: Iron Will

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A few of those I have some plans for... Braeburn happens to be a special case even.

We'll see... The episodic content could be a gateway to lots and lots of interpretations.

Glorious stuff. This fic was a godsend and kept me happy when otherwise I would have been bloody miserable.

s1

1783032
This story remind me of this video:

And what about Iron Will and G1 characters like Zeb the Zebra? and its would interesting if these guys show up as interns:
Grogar:
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Bray:
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I refuse to believe that a civilization of absolutely awful ponies would be able to maintain ponyland in a beautiful enough state for Hasbro to even bother interdimensionally shitting over. They live on a death world full of catastrophic weather and gigantic super predators. You don't survive that if you're wasting your time killing each other over petty mafia/office politics. The power of friendship will hold strong and true, or else the things from beyond will tear you all to shreds!

It'd be worth it to live in a world with a hang glider like that.

But seriously no, death world. It makes even less sense that the Hydra is a chain smoker working over by the gas station, than that ponies aren't awesome. Though frankly that would be the sort of gas station you'd stop at on your trip down the midwest just for the spectacle. Come see the mighty Hydra! $5.99 a gallon

1770906
Guess that other chanpter never happened then?

I'm off Fimfiction for a week and someone puts my story that's over*checks again* two years old in a couple of new groups? (It probably belongs in those fine enough.) Can't complain. A nice surprise.

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Yes...
I wrote a couple of paragraphs and got the idea that the joke had worn out and to continue the story I would have to make it a bit more serious - which I had no intention to. It was a dilemma I couldn't resolve.

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