What happens when "The Hunger Games" gets ponified? This. This is what happens. Collaboration with zombiesurvivor123.
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Mitslits
I am new at fanfictions, but I really enjoy writing so here goes nothing!
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looks good, also like the cover picture :P
mmk
Wow, this looks pretty good. I hope to see some other familiar faces!
Greatly written, but 'Fire Mare's' personality is a bit off. I would have kept Katniss as her name, because that is a plant, so it wouldn't be out of place. Plus, Fire Mare sounds like a firefighter mare, or a super hero.
'Fire Mare' should have also criticized the dress, saying 'it was too fru-fru' or something like that. Remember, Katniss doesn't like being fancy, at the cost of their money.
Good on you for keeping Gale's name, as well as Primrose's.
In the line 'Instead of slaying us all she decreed that one colt and one mare were to be chosen from each District etc etc, I would have substituted mare with filly or colt with stallion, since colt and filly are equivalents, like mares and stallions.
Keep writing, mate.
-Wayward
Love the Hunger Games and love Ponies. So when combining the two, you get the second best thing known to man kind.
Keep it up!
is pinkie pie is president snow and twilight rainbow applejack and fluttershy are gamemakers im going to be so mad
i might just have to make you something...
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An amazing story! The book cover is stunning as well!
This is a much better crossover than the few I've seen with the Hunger Games (and I tried to write one
)
All of the things that stood out to me have already been mentioned, so keep up the good work!
I have faith in this...Don't fail me.
For the first chapter....5 outta 5 moustaches.
Very good.
For once, a non-descriptive description actually led me to an interesting story. Rarely happens I tell you. It's for the better, considering dramatic descriptions for this crossover completely drive me away.
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Don't worry, it's nothing of the kind. We won't focus on the Gamemakers too much and President Snow is equivalent to Princess Celestia. Other than Rarity, I don't think any of the mane six will be in there.
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First off, thanks for actually offering constructive criticism. And now: a rebuttal.
Yeah, Katniss would have worked. But Peeta wouldn't have, so we decided to go with Bread Boy. And since we named him after his title "Boy with the Bread", we felt Katniss should have her title "Girl on Fire" as well.
This is only loosely based off of The Hunger Games. We have to change enough so that it's not just re-writing the story, so some aspects of Katniss' character had to be downplayed a bit. Plus, she isn't quite as tough considering the ponies don't eat meat, therefore she doesn't actually hunt. That, we felt, would take away a bit of her tough, tomboyish character.
The colt and mare thing: yeah, I know. XD The only thing is a colt can also seem to refer to a more teenage male while stallion seems to be reserved for older ponies such as Big Macintosh. Filly seems to mean somepony very young and none of the tributes are actually that young.
We hope this helps to explain some things.
Touche, my friend, touche.
Not unless you renamed Peeta, whom I would have called him 'Pita Bread.'
Yeah, I got nothing, you have bested me, mate. Although I'll still be slightly irritated every time I read 'Fire Mare.'
'Til Next chapter:
'Team Wayward is blasting off again~~~~! *random star glitter*
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IS THIS A ABANODNED STORY?!??!! OR ARE YOU STILL WRTING!?!??! CAUSE ME LIKE!!! HAVE A LIKE!!!
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No, don't worry, this isn't abandoned. XD However, to save space on my computer, I don't make word files for these which means I just come here and type it right into the box. That means I have to write it all at once without leaving my computer. So if I want it to be any good I have to spend a few hours just writing the story. I am incredibly busy with school so until there's a big break like Winter Break or something there probably won't be many updates. Sorry.
This shows promise. I normally try to refrain from this but.....
take it.
here
Live long, write fast
Titan
This is awesome! I love how you got the characters from the series and used them here.
Again, only because you guys aren't taking this seriously.
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Yeah, it's meant to be a kind of parody.
Lol this was fun to read. Can't wait for the actual arena!!
Aww, no first-person present tense?
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Why not use a GDocs file?
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I don't like Google docs very much.
I always forget how funny this story is. I also just noticed that it has a now-illegal story tag combination.
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I-illegal?!
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You can't create a story using [Sad] and [Comedy] together anymore.
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Well, that's a shame.