Just here ta read
A mysterious colt awakes in an alleyway having no memory whatsoever. No name, no clue as to where he is or how he got there.
Originality flows through this story, Not. Anyways, I don't really care, I think it's ok but, it's the classic 'Pony-wakes-up-with-amnesia' story.
...You're right...I can't believe I didn't realize that...
Then again, this is the first fanfic I've ever written. I guess I can't expect it to be amazing.
If anything, I hope it'll become more original down the road...
>>13519601351960 Heh, don't worry, your doing a very good job for your first story (Mine was shit.....). Anyways, I look forward to updates!
Chapter two is up. Three is coming soon.
"Then both heard four clops in rapid-succession...from the balcony."
I lolled at that line
When you were talking about sharp claws and razor teeth, where you talking about the amnesia monster.
also how do you comment
The teeth and claws thing, was referenced to a dragon. Foreshadowing...
And "Also how do you comment"
I don't understand...
What I meant by comment was respond to certain comments in the list.
Click the two bubbles to the right side of the comment you wish to comment on (?)
Thanks for the tip but right before I posted my last comment I found out.
Sorry, I guess?
This is a really good opening for your first fic keep it up
Awwwwwwww its over
Thanks. And it's not over. I left it open like that for a reason.