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  • 16w, 2d

    No seriously, go check out my friend GoldenArbiter.  He is a long time friend and co-author/editor of mine.  He started a new story that is like a spiritual sequel to Flight 19!  GO! NAO!

    6 comments · 70 views
  • 16w, 2d
    Something lurks on the horzions, I do believe it is Ty! Once again looking for help!

    Hello everyone, it is I! The magical writer who seems to disappear for a very long time only to show up with nothing in hand except a hello.  However I am hoping for otherwise.  I am currently working on a new project and the task is too much for me to keep in my mind to myself.  I was curious to see if there were a couple of writers out there who would be willing to listen to my thoughts and allow me to bounce ideas off of and help me with this project.  A co-author if you would.  If anyone is interested please let me know!  

    2 comments · 42 views
  • 27w, 6d
    Anyone think about this?

    Did anyone think about my Trading Places story when they watched the Simple Ways episode???? (S4EP13)

    4 comments · 109 views
  • 44w, 15h
    (A late) Second Anniversary of MLD:S

    Hello all!  I'm sorry about my last blog post, I didn't realize that I could only tag one story in it now, compared to a while a go where I would tag everything.  So I feel apologies are in order.  ALSO!!!!  I wanted to try and throw together a little project to release to you guys!  I would like ask anyone who has artistic talent, ANY AT ALL, to please create some art relating to my story.  I would like to make a slideshow/fanart video to release to youtube!  As well as any questions or comments or criticisms you might have for me!  Please, I ask anyone with any talent to slide me something that I can make into a beautiful video dedicated to all of my supporters and fans!



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  • 47w, 2h
    A Warrior's Tale (Happy New Years)

    I wonder if the Gods feel pain?  It is a question I find myself pondering more and more.  I wonder if Celestia and Luna and God all feel pain?  Or is it, perhaps, beyond their mortal bodies…  I wonder if ache and jealousy plague their souls, or if they hurt and yearn for the days since past?  I wonder this because it seems to me that they are filled with contempt for those below them, only concerned that things are the way they like it.

    You never know what you have until its gone.  This is something everyone learns sooner or later in their life.  It is one of the hardest lessons to learn, and perhaps the most demoralizing.  I have learned this before, but now… I must learn it again, but this time, I don't know why.

    I understand the reasoning for the harsh lesson before.  I was rude, crude, and mean; things quite deserving of such a worthy punishment.  Since then, I have been forced to change, but do not let my ramblings leave the wrong impression.  Forced doesn’t always mean something bad happened.  I was forced to realize the error of my ways, and it made me a better and stronger person.  I had shed many tears over this event, and I grieved many days.  I now know what it feels like to ache and beg for the pain to stop, for the days to end so I no longer have to live in torment.

    I am no coward however.  I may beg and cry and whimper, but I will never run.  Too much lay on the line to run.  It would be a simple task, to just end all the pain and move on to a better place.  In fact, the thought sounds quite welcoming, doesn’t it?  But I reiterate, that is the cowards way out.  A man must stand up and face his challenges head on.  He must dig himself in and brace for the coming storm.

    I fear, however, that I might have dug too deep, and weathered this storm too many times.  I cannot say for sure, but if there weren’t certain circumstances blocking my route out, I would have tried to move away from this storm, somewhere where I could hold out better.  But I can’t.  Again, too much remains on the line.  I can’t run, and I can’t move to a better place to face these challenges.

    So it comes to the question, what must I do?  What must a man do to both protect himself and those around him, while trying to be happy in life?  I have thought out almost every possibility to my predicament, but nothing comes to mind.  The fate of several peoples futures rest upon my decision.  I can break bonds that have grown so strong over the years, and forsake two people I hold the closest to my heart… or I can fight on, forever having myself withered away by the onslaught of the brutal storm I have fought so long.

    What must I do?  I have fought so long, I don’t think I know what I would do without it anymore.  It has grown to define me as a human.  I fight to keep my two loves in my life, but it seems to be a fading prospect.  Should I just let them go, or do I fight on?  I have lived the past 6 years of my life on a rollercoaster of ups and downs, all the while fighting the same fight.  The first two years was only to achieve a basic goal: secure her heart.  That was the beginning of the storm that has laid siege to my heart over the years.

    It was a long and hard fought battle, with me taking many pains and lessons from it.  But I grew stronger because of it.  I learned many things, mainly that if you fight long enough, you will get what you seek, as long as it is in your heart.

    It was at this point that I thought that I was the victor, that I had beaten the storm, and that clear days were ahead of me.  And so it seemed, but my opponent is crafty, and strikes when I least expect it.  It was because of the first fight I endured did I evolve myself into a warrior.  A person who fights for what he believes, and will stop at nothing to succeed, no matter the cost.  However, a year and a half of what seemed to be clear skies had left me complacent and left me with a false sense of security, something a warrior should never have.  And when I least expected it, my old foe struck another blow, this time with a sneak attack, straight to my heart.

    I was crippled and left to die, but my sinister enemy, as clever as he was, only pierced my heart.  I was not destroyed.  It was because of this, was I able to survive and fight.  I was quiet at first, silently building my forces and regaining my strength.  Only then did I strike again, and retrieving my love from the evil that has shadowed me for so long.  I may have won the battle, but I was far from winning the war.

    My dastardly foe had deposited something into my love, something that grew and became whole.  Something which slowly corroded the hard exterior of my heart, and slowly began to eat away at it. I wasn’t sure how to react to this new being.  All emotions were brought forth, but the last and most prominent was acceptance and love, and with that my son entered my life.  He may have not been born of my will, but I accepted him all the same.

    But again, something was eating away at my heart, something that always made me on edge, no matter what happened.  It was because of this, that I was constantly alert and ready for a fight.  I had been fighting so much over the years, it seemed that I needed to continue, no matter who or what it was.  It was so that I lashed out at those close to me, at the person I fought so hard for.  And it was because of my incompetence and desire for a fight, did a fight come to me again…

    It has returned once more.  And so here I sit, fighting yet again for my love.  I fight the darkness that creeps into my mind, I fight my emotional desires to do physical damage to all around me.  So much fighting… I must ask ...When have I won?  When have I lost?  When can I be done?  When is enough, enough?  When is a tired soldier allowed to final reap the benefits of all the combat he has partaken in?  When is he allowed to say, “no more…”?

    Hello Folks, Ty500600 here.

    For those of you who have followed me from the beginning are well aware of my turbulent life over the past few years.  I thought it was all getting better recently, but life is a cruel mistress, and as such has deemed it time for me to be in misery again.  I, however, take comfort in knowing that I have a wonderful group of fans and friends who are always there to help out.  I just want everyone to know that I am always available to message.   I never turn anyone down and I answer everything you guys send me.  I am not above anyone and I treat everyone equally.  Please feel free to message me and strike up a conversation.  I enjoy talking to people, so if you are ever looking for a friend and you happen to read this, Im here for you, just like I would think everyone is there for me.

    Happy New Years!

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  • ...

Audiobook/Readalong:  Very professional and well made.  Voices for each character, sound effects, and background music.  Highly Recommended.

After being touched by the great story My Little Dashie written by ROBCakeran53, I wanted to give the story an ending, something that would bring closure to all.  Rainbow has finally returned back to the lands of Equestria, but things did not go as well as the ponies were hoping.  Meanwhile, Dad is having a brash confrontation with magic and other-worldly situations.

UPDATE: EpicBG has decided to continue on with my continuation (lol), but in his story, my Epilogue never happened, so go into his story knowing that.  His is about the adventures of Dad and Dashie in Equestria, go check it out, its quite good.  Here is the Link!

First Published
25th Dec 2011
Last Modified
6th Jan 2013
#1 · 152w, 3d ago · 1 · · Chapter Two ·

very good. only one small problem. in my opinion the chapters are too short

#2 · 152w, 3d ago · 2 · 3 · Chapter Two ·

I have read the story My Little Dashie and thought it was simply perfect. A well-written sad story. It made me tear, indeed it did. This, however, is....really good. You have reached the same writing level as the person who made My Little Dashie. Good job to you sir, 4.5/5 stars. Do continue writing as I'll favorite this. :twilightsmile:

#3 · 152w, 3d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

#4 · 152w, 3d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

I'm liking this so far, hopefully this gets around more. A sequel might actually finally stop the sadness, a little. :(

#5 · 152w, 3d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

This story is really good, even if the chapters are short. I look forward to seeing more chapters, tracking and faving this story.:rainbowdetermined2:

#6 · 152w, 3d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

I am really liking this so far,:pinkiegasp: I am honestly surprised that it is as good as it is

Anyone who was reading chapter three, after reading some comments of my chapters being too short, I took the liberty of adding some extra words so please be sure to check that you read all of it.  Thanks everyone for reading and following, and for the criticism

#8 · 152w, 3d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

This is really good, I'm tracking and I'm a give ya five stars for now

#9 · 152w, 3d ago · 2 · · Chapter Three ·

Nice, terrorists.

#10 · 152w, 3d ago · 1 · · Chapter One ·


That was beautiful. I like your writing style, and you've managed to pull off continuing the story. I just want to thank you for offering some solace to the readers of that story... :pinkiesad2:

I sense a sonic rainboom... I hope Dashie gets to go back home. To Earth, I mean, not Equestria. I know that she belongs in the latter, but she wants to be in the former.

hmmmmmmmmmmm, this is a great continuization of my little dashie

lol look at the word i made up......

keep it coming....keep it coming

Are you posting more chapters?

It's short, but loving it so far.

Oh god... this story is gonna be so awesome! :rainbowkiss:

The chapters are kinda short though... -tracks-

Love it so far. Just hope Rainbow Dash gets comfortable in Equestria, with all her friends...

I know she wants to be on Earth so badly, but the thought of her sitting there alone with her dad just wounds me. At least in Equestria, she'd have friends to play with all the time.

please continue this, i swear this is opening up the wounds left by my little dashie, the only piece of fiction that i shed manly tears over, even "marely and me" wasnt as sad, i hope you do the series justice.

He was going to take her to see the Blue Angels?

The BEST military and possibly best overall avation team in the world?

I are Jealous.

Well anyways, back to the manly tears.

just got out of my little dashie and i'm looking forward that this story will ease the pain.

i sense something about a certain human being transformed and dragged to a different world.

Now now Talow, don't try guessing you will have to wait like everyone else for the next chapter

Great chapter, I hope Dash gets to be with or see her father again. Only time will tell

i want a little dashie.. :fluttercry: or a fluttershy. but thats irrelevant right now. honestly i hope she goes back with her daddy.

Good job!

I like it so far, but I'm a little confused, why would she panic if, in the first one, she accepted the fact that she had to go back?  I guess I could see the memory spell erasing the entire incident of her departure from Earth, but I don't know.  Sorry if I'm sounding a little critical but it seems like a big plot-hole to me.  Once again, sorry if it rubs of on you wrong, I'm just curious.


As the wise saying goes:

"Don't cry because good times are over. Smile because they happened."

Rainbow's dad respected this saying in the original story, as so did Rainbow Dash. But now, they are both tangled up on their sadness as they hang on to a reality that no longer exists. Prisioners of chaos.

I know that without the chaos there wouldn't be a story to tell, but for me, My Little Dashie shouldn't have a sequel; it's perfect as it is.

(Still, I don't hate it. Keep writing.)

I think... we're getting some Discord later on and this is really cute. It almost perfectly goes with the actual story MLD even though they are a little short still

I'm reading this on the 25, but it says it was published on the 26. Are you a Time Traveler? :rainbowhuh:


No, you're in different countries :twistnerd:

loved the story and love it's possible endings, now I can't help but wonder about what is the best that could happen, I mean, the best for WHO, Equestria needs it's elements of harmony reunited, and her friends want Dash back, but Dash can't help but feel alone and threatened (at least now).

Her friends should note that unless some MAJOR magic is casted, their relationships won't ever be the same.


I'm excited and waiting for the next one!

Thanks to everyone for supporting me thus far, I will try to incorporate all questions you guys may have into the story, like the comment above about dashie freaking out.  I tried to make it more noticeable when applejack is talking to her friends.  Thanks everyone, another chapter should be up by Wednesday.

>>87866 *Sigh* Too cliched.

Done to death. I mean, have nothing against transformation itself, I am actually a fan of it.

But every story I have seen thus far has the human protagonist abandon their human roots.

It is as if the human body is a walking time bomb that needs to be jettisoned as soon as Celestia possible.

>>87873 I cried so hard in these three chapters...

i demand MOAR! that is all.....

Very nice, my only complaint is the tense, you're mixing present and past.  But still, I like I like I like!

I hope she stays in Equestria. While she may love her other home, in Equestria she can truly live.

I hope she can meet her Dad again, I'd be sad if she doesn't. Fus Ro Moar!

Guys, I'm his assistant writer, helping him come up with ideas (in also his younger brother) so I'm going to try to clear some things up. The reason for the anger is because they are both suffering from a loss and the 5 stages of loss can happen in any order, so even though they both have went through acceptance, they've both also gone through bargaining, so they still need through depression and anger which is what you are seeing.

you show this to rob yet? i wonder if he read it I'll ask him when i see him in chat :) I'm about to dive into it in a few mins and by the reviews i see I'm excited :raritywink:

>>88417 well not rly reviews i mean comments XD :derpyderp1: i derped

I'll admit, I didn't have high expectations going in with the word "sequel" in it, but after reading the first chapter, the feelings I felt in the original came back up, and the stories seamlessly integrate to me.  I'm crying to this story as well.  Where My Little Dashie taught the value of love, this sequel is giving much-needed closure for the readers.  I think that you're doing a fantastic job so far.  Keep up the excellent work, and I think it definitely took a bit of courage to try to expand on a widely-adored fic.  You have a brohoof for that :twilightsmile:

i always wanted to see this story progress tracking

#45 · 152w, 3d ago · · 2 · Chapter Three ·

Hmm, this just gave me an idea for another similar story.

What if 2 years after 'my little dashie' the conversion bueruo's are opened up?

(is this a good idea? Feel free to make it if you think so :derpytongue2:)

P.s. <3


Before reading: I'm somewhat skeptical at the moment... While I hope that this is good, I must say that making a sequel to "My Little Dashie" is a bit... though. Many people will expect a lot from this, but I hope that it will somewhat fulfill its purpose.

I. Will. Be. Back. :coolphoto:

After reading: Not bad, not bad. I must admit that this is pretty good. While the style of writing is a bit different from the original, it certainly sounds like it. The only thing that I didn't really like about this, is actually because of MLD itself. Seeing as he actually came to terms with it all and admitted that his life was now changed for the better, and then reading this, makes it all seem like he didn't change at all.

But enough of me being a reviewer, I HAVE only read a single chapter so far, and it didn't exactly disappoint me, so I look forward to reading the next chapters and seeing how it all works out.


Any doubt I had in the previous chapter has been flooded(?) away, this sounds pretty damn good! Will continue! :ajsmug:


*clap clap clap* This is getting real good, real fast!

If you, as a reader, can submit to not everything adding up to MLD, like what they felt and so on, this is a really good read.

Keep 'em coming! :twilightsmile:


MORE, MORE I SAY!:pinkiehappy:

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