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CountDerpy


She/Her (Trans). Occasional Writer, Storm Chaser, SFM Artist and Former Special Events Staff at Ponyville Ciderfest. PFP by LincolnBrewsterFan.

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(Photo Credit: gifsthebrony at http://gifsthebrony.deviantart.com/art/Canter-Tailor-Soldier-Shy-308426272)
Based off the movie Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy. All rights to their respective owners.)

When Rainbow Dash (aka. Control),the head of Equestrian Intelligence (aka. The Elements of Harmony), sends Pinkamena Diane Prideaux (aka. Pinkie Pie) to meet the Changeling General, she is shot and captured.

Control and her second-in-command Flutter "Smiley" Shy are forced into retirement.

Years later, "Smiley" is brought out of retirement and finds Pinkie Pie, who claims there are moles in Equestrian Intelligence. She only refers to the suspects as "Canter", "Tailor", "Soldier", "Shy".

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This sounds interesting! Can't wait to see where this goes! :twilightsmile:

1333859 thanks... I'm afraid to many ponies won't like the fact that i decided to make Twilight a changeling in this one.... i saw the picture on Facebook and thought i should do that...idk hope it works out well in the end

That's why there called "fics". They deviate from the characters and their original storyline. That's why you see characters die in some fics and almost "magically" return in others... and this is a LOT coming from me since I'm a "huge" Twilight Sparkle enthusiast... :twilightsmile:

1334905 True... true... after all, she still has that "look" to her. (cool pic btw)

1335067 (thank you) and yes... that "look"...frankly i think that changelings are cool to begin with

1335095 Indeed! Only one flaw I see in this picture... (forgive me for pointing this out... I tend to take detail VERY seriously since I'm a comic designer...) On Twi's right hoof, the lower-most medium sized hole in her hoof, you can see right through which I "believe" is supposed to be where her upper arm connects to her solder... sorry... I'm just another one of those knit pickers... :twilightsheepish:

But Twilight as a changeling... I can't wait to see where this takes place in your story! :twilightsmile:

1335524 yes i noticed that too... it's just one of those mysteries...and thanks i hope it goes well!:twilightoops::twilightsmile:

Hey could you possibly upload a version of this that ISN'T Mature? Cause I would totally read it if it where Teen or something.

1340344 sure...ill change it right now... i may have to up it again if things get alil "steamy" later one

1341170 Hopefully they won't. For me it kinda robs from a good story to suddenly plummet into gross sex scenes. It's like a sock tacit. Almost if the writer's not confident in his own writing (NOT YOU THOUGH. THIS LOOKS VERY VERY VERY GOOD.)

1341191 thanks...and if anything gets "steamy"... it will probably be in my Post-War/ Flutter Dash romance story Replica...but maybe not...i don't know yet ^^"

1341210 Well. I read it. I'm hooked. This will be epic.

1343397 thanks! glad you like it!

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