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    The New Lunar Republic are fighting back against the Solar Empire, secretly and evasive. The fight between who should be the true leader of Equestria is causing an uproar from civilians. Who will become the victor whilst the defeated are exiled or maybe even killed? Maybe both sides will face an untimely loss and none of them win or lose? Inspired to write this from the cover art. Link: http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/235/170/915.jpg

    First Published
    1st Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    10th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 33 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This fix looks promising, any idea when the next update will be?

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    No.The whole NLR vs the Solar Empire crap is too over used.And it makes me sick just thinking about the whole concept.This is not a hate comment,im just saying how i feel.Siblings should not fight,and the whole thing takes it too far.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368166 Ha! You spit lies, siblings should always fight, it's nature. If siblings didn't fight we'd get nowhere we probably wouldn't even have internet, if two siblings didn't fight over something completely pointless. :flutterrage:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    True it is just natural for siblings to fight it is just how they bond.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368166 They are right conflict is nateral wit hones so close the wounds are easly made and healed (sometimes) and its nateral for any conflict of any size to arise its part of growing up , progrestion ,and life itself this isnt ment ot offend am just poking at you! so no offence! :twilightsheepish:

    This is going to be good I feel it in my bones!

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368207

    I'm sorry what was that? Pretty sure I don't fight with my brother or  at least not to the extent of the damned NLR/SE cliche

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sorry I hadn't commented yet I had work :P

    Also >>1368166 I'm always fighting with my sisters...

    >>1368165 Uh, next update could be tonight or tommorow depending on how I feel :P

    >>1368276 It is true.

    >>1368557 :D I fight with my sister, then we become good friends again, then we fight again and so on

    >>1368740 Lucky you, but trust me when siblings do fight, they always do at least once. Unless your all perfect kids.

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368740 Also, who said the Solar Empire would lose? Or the New Lunar Republic would lose? Who knows it might be a tie or one could fall whilst one could rise. Maybe they are both defeated?

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368965 I vote for the Twilight Brigade! She gets sick and tired of the goddess's little 'play fighting' and kicks both their asses to put them into their place! :twilightsmile:

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368984 Lol, I can imagine that, but their is going to be something about the elements of harmony that may change your view on that.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Never knew there was an actual fanfic that started this concept. thought it was just something people came up with from the pilot episode.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369008 I actually don't know if there is I did it to make sure they know that I didn't intend to copy if there is. I removed that part from my story description though.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369008 Do you mean the concept of the New Lunar Republic vs the Solar Empire? Cause if so, it was started by neither. I believe it started as a discussion over who was the better princess and why, and then grew into a kinda play RP people liked to do, Either being in the New Lunar Republic, or being in the Solar Empire. It is kinda like... 'The Game' Where it's more of a concept many people play along with it, but it don't actually have any rules, goals, or anything. Hard to explain xD I just know I am part of the New Lunar Republic all the way! :heart:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369067 Luna Nobis Providet! Also this story will be based on a war between the two. It's based after the Changeling invasion as well.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368740 Give it a try :trollestia:

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368955

    We do fight but it was always small

    >>1369071

    For an United Equestria: Ex Solis et Lunae, Provendtia et Prosperita

    From the Sun and Moon, Providence and Prosperity  

    >>1369261

    Probably not, I just saw the comment about siblings and well... kind went off

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369425 Still fighting :raritywink:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 19h ago · · ·
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    >>1368955>>1368557>>1368207

    I know that siblings fight all the time(i should know,i have a twenty year old sister) but I personaly hate fighting,im sort of a pacifist when it comes to family,and regardless,a sibling rivaly has its limits!And that limit is far far far below a freaking Rebellion on a country,no matter that they are princesses.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 18h ago · · ·
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    >>1371040 *cough* ummm sorry but your kinda wrong there am not gonna go naming stuff but there have been rebellions by siblings and they all had more then one reason for it am sure but come on thats how it works cant get revenge as a prince/princess (or other) without some politics coming to play not everyone can understand peace and greed is jsut as powerful in human nature then any other (and dont go "these are ponies not humans" becuse this is a bloody cartoon with talking ponies and "goddesses" as rulers so) and am sure 1000's is kinda long enough to make a grudge for any family AGAIN no offence am jsut stating my case! :twilightsheepish:

    but lets let it fly shall we? stories a story!

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 18h ago · · ·
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    >>1371040 2 gods, a rebellion..seems like that's the minimum, it could've been complete genocide.:rainbowlaugh:

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 14h ago · · ·
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    I LOVE NLR fanfics :rainbowkiss:

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>1371077 It's called war :P

    >>1371188 Yeh lol >>1372430 :D

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    you have a watch from me (and i swear i'll get around to reading this), but not enough words at the moment (5,000 minimum cause i don't like reading through something good in 10) i hope you make regular updates

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #25 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1378486 I will try to update regulary, but I have another story I have to update too.

    #26 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1368965

    Uh uh I know WHO Will win... Its the legions of discord... Just kidding :twilightsheepish:

    #27 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1417675 :P Hehehehehehehehehehe, no one shall know yet, you may be surprised you may not be. Just gotta wait to see. :derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh you....haha

    #29 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #30 · Chapter 3 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cant wait for more... I. Need. Moar. Now:flutterrage:

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1450703 Hehehe forgot to mention school's back up....

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 2d ago · · ·
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    5 weeks. Quite the long wait period.

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1675109 Yeh, I'm really sorry about this, exams came up followed by assignments then exans again followed by work then back to assignments, but I just quit work, got most of my assignments done and tomorrow and the day after I have my last exams.

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