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There is a dragon problem, and the Mane 6 are there to stop it. However, something goes wrong and they wake up in the blocky world of Minecraft. They find Spike and use him to contact Princess Celestia to get out. But will they survive until Celestia can help? Or will they just die and respawn several times?
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As a first fic, this is a success.
Crossing Minecraft with ponies is not too easy. But you managed to form up a good start.
Good ol' Enderdragon, fooling 'round in Equestria.
I'm not going to do a grammar check, as I didn't see too much mistakes. Your grammar is good and readable.
But I'd like to say a single thing. Use colors for the flashback, maybe? Pink color for Pinkie's flashback? Cyan for Rainbow's if there is ever going to be one etc.
It may be hard to read or something like that but it certainly is better than CAPS-LOCKING it all over the story.
Example:
All in all, great job. I'll be stalking this one.
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Thanks! I appreciate your enthusiasm for this story and willingness to stalk it. I think it will be hard for me to do colors though, because I still don't understand this site too well. I think i'll fix it once I learn how, but I think I will just leave it how it is. Thank you for the support.
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Well, you are the Author and it's up to you what your story looks like. I appreciate your opinion.
And no problem! Happy to help!
hmmmmm......... my account is theenderperson. tell me if when they teleport into minecraft if you want me to be in the story,the ya if you want a picture of my first skin i ever self made, you got it!
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I'm sorry it took a while to respond. I appreciate your support and pretty good prediction skills, I don't really want to have any OCs or created charectors in this story. I just want Celestia, Spike, and the Mane 6 in this story. I love your help, but its not what I am going to do.
1338576as excpected. but this goes off good mate, and i only did that comment today so im ok!
nice job with the dragon, and making it so that the end is actually Equestria (I think that's right) and Steve managed to banish him there
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You have pretty good prediction skills.
1343717 thanks
your offering shall suffice... for now.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Don't worry, I am currently working on the second chapter. (P.S Its called Taking Inventory, Getting Wood, and Benchmarking)
*cricket chirps*
It's quiet in the comment section.
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. I liked the chapter, make more
i mean, if you don't mind...
NOT ANYMORE! *Gasps* yay
So far I'm happy, but I am kinda surprised that Twilight didn't absolutely freak out that they weren't in Equestria.
I grant you the power of mustache!
Sounds interesting! I'll put it off for now, but when I get the time to read it....
"Witches, Wither Skeletons, Zombie Villagers, Wither Bosses"
how come i've never herd of these???
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They are only in the latest Snapshots. When 1.4 comes out they'll be in the game.
In case anyone was wondering where Spike is, I have a big plan for him in the next chapter. I just have to leave people wondering when and where he will show up though.
Shortest. Chapter. I. Wrote. Ever!
Yah, a little short but it was pretty good.
containor ~ incorrect spelling
container ~ correct spelling
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Sorry for the typo. I'll fix it now.
Why was Twilight looking to see what she can make with sugar cane, when you need it to make the cake?
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She knows nothing about sugarcane unless she looks it up. You can make paper and sugar, but she never knew that until the latest chapter.
I think I went a bit overboard with the fourth wall here
. Does anyone else think that? Respond to this comment with your opinion.
Smashing of the fourth wall until u can barely here it scream anymore is a good thing u used it perfectly
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DERPY APPROVES THIS STORY!
Now I want to download a My Little Pony mod and play minecraft!
Well, it's sure been a while since I have read this story, but I decided to change that fact today.
Good and steady work, no huge mistakes other than minor grammar. (Missing some capital "I"s from here and there to point out something).
A great chapter, just like the earlier ones. Good job.
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Sorry, I'll fix that mistake right now.
I know some people think I am just a little cruel for making Fluttershy stick her hoof in Lava, but later she gets much more tough and will someday be able to last longer than how she is now.
P.S: My first dislike ever was given today. Wow. And no reason was given either. I am going to hunt this person down and make sure I figure out whats the problem. If its a troll doing this, IM GONNA LOVE AND TOLERATE YOU TO DEATH!!!!!!! *ahem* 'solve the problem'. Seriously, give me a reason why anyone would hate this story exept for what happened to Fluttershy (me making her tougher and all), and make sure it is a legitimate reason. If its a mistake I can forgive you, but otherwise I need an answer.
This is amazing
Have some mustaches!
I
Minecraft and ponies. Heck. Im going to be a creeper for halloween!
I dont remember bats in minecraft?
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Its new in 1.4, which is comming out soon. I always download the latest snapshots :D.
1473466 New snapshot.
keep up the amazing story. Thought they where gonna die a couple times.
You mean underground lake?
Quite enjoying this so far
Only spotted one spelling mistake "comming" is actually spelt "coming"... small thing but I think I saw it more than once...
Anywho keep up the good work
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I'll fix that immediantly, thanks for telling me my mistake.
As 1473581 said, coming.
And it's sentEnce, not sentance.
Also, I don't quite get it... how is it possible that Pinkie got the Acquire Hardware achievement now? I mean in chapter 5 you wrote that she'd cooked the iron and even made some buckets out of it...Edit:
Wait, never mind... I just checked and it looks like she lacked the achievements to do so...
I haven't played Minecraft in too long a time...
Great and steady work as always. Good job!
Two mistakes spotted.
And
And some notes.
- Don't spiders hiss rather than scream?
- While writing dialogue, you should use the comma. See
Red parts are fixes, blue parts are comments and purple parts are highlights.
More info about that can be found here.
And 1.4 pre is out! Gotta start preparing for the real deal.
I think you mean Ingots
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Not nessisarely (I don't think I spelled that right). Ore (in general) is Diamond, Lapis Lazuli, Gold, Iron, Coal, things like that. You can create a block out of ingots for some of them, but not all. For example, an Iron Block is made out of ingots, but in general its a block made of a smelted ore. Ore Block. With that aside, thanks for reading what I have in this story.
1473529 Oh okay.
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Well yes, but you can't create ore blocks (or ingots for that matter), with a crafting table.
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Well actually, for a Diamond [Ore] Block you need a crafting table along with 9 Diamonds. That goes for the Ore Blocks that need ingots too. And of course you can't get ingots from a crafting table, you smelt the ore in a furnace.
Running with scissors. A bad idea, even for ponies.
that was.... pretty lame.
after a pointless amount of gathering everyone together, they find the ender dragon and he goes "oh hello I'm going to send you to my world now for no reason whatsoever ok have fun bye" and poof.
Really nice plot there...
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It's not finished, the Ender Dragon has a reason, but I haven't written it yet.