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XavierMendel

Joined August 2012
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  • Always Another Day
    Pinkie Pie and Twilight perform a time experiment that goes horribly wrong.

    3,644 words · 347 views · 19 likes · 1 dislikes

Pinkie Pie and Twilight perform a time experiment that goes horribly wrong, leaving Pinkie to experience a peculiar set of events.

I had this idea for quite a bit of time, and even wrote it out once before. I decided to rewrite it after a bunch of friendly folk in the Reddit Bronies steam chat urged me on. They should know I'm not quite a good writer. Oh well, enjoy!

Feedback is appreciated. This is meant to be a short fic and likely won't extend past 2-3 chapters. If I did something wrong, let me know.

First Published
21st Sep 2012
Last Modified
27th Oct 2012

Comments ( 8 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 96w, 3d ago · · ·

Nice concept, a little rushed but I can deal with it. I've given it a like and a favourite and I hope to see more.

#2 · Chapter 1 · 96w, 3d ago · · ·

>>1313662

Yeah, I suppose I should draw it out a bit more. I was determined to get the first chapter done before I went to sleep last night. Thanks for the feedback!

#3 · Chapter 1 · 96w, 2d ago · · ·

Its good and original. I am tracking this and can't wait to see where you take it. This is brilliant, really.  

#4 · Chapter 1 · 96w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1314161

This made me happier than you know.

#5 · Chapter 1 · 96w, 2d ago · · ·

Interesting idea...bit rushed, first 'death' comes out of nowhere, but...interesting.

#6 · Chapter 2 · 91w, 2d ago · · ·

So here it is, the second chapter. Sorry it took so long, everyone. I've had a lot happen to me this past month that has kept me from doing a lot of things, including writing. I can't say when chapter 3 will be out, as I just finished this one not half an hour ago. It will, however, be out before mid-December, so there's that.

Any feedback is appreciated. I hope you enjoy it.

#7 · Chapter 2 · 91w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1513995 Nice, I look forward to seeing how this progresses, especially Twiligt's guilt.

#8 · Chapter 2 · 91w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1514766

I planned on doing a bit more on Twilight's guilt, but the chapter grew just a bit too long. I'd like to keep each chapter near or under 2,000 words so that it can be read in a short coffee break if one so chooses. I may break this next time. I probably will.

Glad that you liked it.

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