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Blog Posts9

  • 23w, 5d
    back on track........sorta

    Kinda funny how my last blog post was apologizing for my hiatus and then I just go ahead and take another one.  ^^;

    Well the 8th chapter of Chaos Rising was posted in Decemberish I think and just recently I posted chapters 9 and 10 and am working on 11 now so I've been a little better about updating more frequently.  The story is getting more interesting and we are slowly making our way towards the big turning point in the middle of the story, but even that is far off.

    As for Ask Accord............again, more commissions and stuff have kept me busy and this summer is going to be con season for me as I am set to go to Trotcon in less than a week and plan on attending BronyCon in August and also hope to attend and vendor at Cloudsdale Congress some time this fall.  On top of that my sister got married last month and preparing for that was kind of a mess.  Other than that, I honestly think I've just been lazy when it comes to working on stuff I have gotten people all hyped for.  I've come to realize I'm one of those types of artists who says he's going to do this but it ends up either not happening or it takes forever.  I really think it's because my mind is so full of ideas and I have unfinished things because I'm jumping from one project to the next and the thought of me having to get a job and eventually buy my own car and move out and start living an adult life is distracting me from that.  I guess that's also what has been distracting me from my FIMfic as well but I'm getting a little better about the story at least and I'm NOT going to cancel Ask Accord, I'm way too excited to start it to do that.  We'll just have to wait and see.  I'm a spontaneous artist full of ideas and that doesn't work so well when you are a college graduate looking for an American job.  It will get better soon though, I promise.  For now, don't hesitate to keep supporting me with my various projects and I will keep working on stuff...

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  • 66w, 2d
    Sorry for the hiatus

    Hey guys.  Don't worry, I'm not dead and I most certainly am not cancelling any of my in-progress fics just because I've been absent for a while either.  I've just been very busy for the past 2ish months working on commissions and then getting ready for BronyCon.  BronyCon was a blast by the way and I have pics on my Tumblr and a journal entry on my DA about it if you wanna check.

    But yeah, I'm still working on AotA: Chaos Rising, I am totally not going to stop with that fic.  I have a lot of plans for it still and will start working on the next chapter when I can.  I dunno when I'll actually be able to post the next chapter but stay tuned.  I'm also trying my hardest to get back on track with Ask Accord.  It takes lots of time to work on the puppets though so it will be a while.

    I've just been quite busy cuz I currently have quite a few commissions to get on with and the next loan payment is gonna be pretty big and I still don't have a full-time job so I gotta make some bank.  If you're interested in helping me out and commissioning me, please read this journal entry and contact me via Deviant Art.

    0 comments · 66 views
  • 73w, 5d
    Chaos Rising featured on Los Pegasus Tribune!

    A new MLP blog just featured Age of the Alicorns Chaos Rising here Special thanks to Flutterguy96 for the review!

    I may never get featured on EqD for my fanfic writing but it's good to know that I got a feature here!  :)

    1 comments · 96 views
  • 107w, 3d
    Short hiatus with Chaos Rising

    Chapter 3 has a song in it and I was unable to come up with good lyrics so I am holding a contest for anyone who would like to write the song.  You don't have to actually play any music or sing, I only need the lyrics.  More information can be found here on my deviant art if you are interested in entering:

    http://aleximusprime.deviantart.com/journal/First-Song-for-Chaos-Rising-contest-thingy-335147703

    So yeah, like I said, it's a short hiatus and I'm only waiting on lyrics.  I should be able to work on the chapter while I'm waiting but I may be busy with school during then.  Just bare with me...

    0 comments · 100 views
  • 108w, 2d
    Title derp

    Looks like I accidentally called chapter 2 the same as chapter 1's title.  It's supposed to be The Night Arrives, not Luna's test.  Sorry... ^^;

    1 comments · 70 views
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Twilight and her friends sure had an awful time at the Grand Galloping Gala, but at least they are doing alright now that they are all there together and they have someone special to keep them company:  Princess Celestia!

Original release: August 27th 2011 on Deviant Art

And if you're interested, this existed as a comic first.  Link for the start page here:  http://aleximusprime.deviantart.com/art/After-the-Gala-Page-1-211665525

First Published
21st Sep 2012
Last Modified
21st Sep 2012
#1 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

Well written.

Well read.

Well done.

#2 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

Incredibly cheesy, but I liked it :twilightsmile:

#3 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

you have all my love in the world. seriously, this is absolutely one of *the* best stories I've read on this site. well done.

#4 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1313283  Excuuuuuuuuuuse me?!:trixieshiftleft:

#5 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1313660  hehe thanks!  :)

#6 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1313714 Fine, I exaggerated. It was a bit cheesy, making everyone get what they wanted in the end, but cheesy doesn't mean I didn't like it. My only problem with it is Applejack. I think she would feel like Celestia was being patronizing, buying all her stuff just to make her feel better.

#7 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1313735 But then the old pony wossname will kick-in and Applejack would be reluctant to contradict the diarch who presides over the nation of Equestria and all who dwell in it while the Sun shines down.

#8 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1313981 :facehoof: I was trying to explain to Mabbz why Applejack wouldn't consider Celestia being patronising; because, like all Equestrian ponies, she's been raised to think of the Princess in such a way that she wouldn't dare argue, at least not until She helps Applejack and the others cut loose in her presence.

#9 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1314111 Sorry I made the wrong comment.  I'm having a hard time getting used to the commenting system on this site, it really sucks.  -____-

#10 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1313735  Celestia's the princess therefore she's have loads of money.  And I made this to give them a happy ending after the Gala.  The Gala was a fiasco but this fic was just to give a realistic representation of how their night went afterwards.

#11 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

Good read overall, though there was a fair share of Deus Ex Machina with Celestia (Philomena, the Wonderbolts tickets, etc).  This felt more geared towards a younger demographic, so that's okay in the end.  In truth, this was a fine read with a good flow and no overt grammatical issue.  Fine job! :scootangel:

#12 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1314653  Well that was the overall plan really.  Celestia DID come to them at the end of the real episode so I thought I'd make her do them all some favors.  I can see her being that kind to them all you know and she only helped three of them with something (Fluttershy, Dash, and AJ) and of course Twilight too but we already knew that she'd be there to talk to her cuz she came to them in the end of the real ep.  I've heard it's an overdone thing to make Celestia do that apparently but this was made over a year ago as the description says, but even then I see no problem with giving Celestia a little more love than she gets in the show.  And I wanted to mainly fill in the empty space that some people felt that season finale left.  The Gala went horrible but then they all got together and were happy but then it was done and I am sure a lot of people would want to know what could have happened afterward.

#13 · 113w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1314736

I see.  In truth, it makes sense for her to that.  It just felt that, within the confines of the story, it was pretty much Machina still without the context of the explanation to back it up.  A bit more meat in that regard would clean up the issue.   Regardless, still a nice read.

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