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AleximusPrime

Joined September 2012
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Stories (9)

  • After the Gala
    The untold and very much needed story of what happened after the events of "Best Night Ever&amp

    5,279 words · 997 views · 46 likes · 0 dislikes
  • King Sombra's Warning
    King Sombra warns Twilight of his next attack in her sleep
    2,540 words · 3,064 views · 50 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Switchy Pie
    Pinkie and Twilight get their minds switched and hilarity ensues...
    18,525 words · 928 views · 42 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Age of the Alicorns: Chaos Rising
    The story of how Discord took Equestria and how Celestia and Luna found the strength to stop him
    32,921 words · 1,200 views · 34 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Muck and the Mare
    13,843 words · 589 views · 22 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Mark of the Sun
    3,265 words · 568 views · 25 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Fame or Friendship
    26,449 words · 502 views · 11 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Cutie and the Beasts
    14,488 words · 610 views · 13 likes · 2 dislikes
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Twilight and her friends sure had an awful time at the Grand Galloping Gala, but at least they are doing alright now that they are all there together and they have someone special to keep them company:  Princess Celestia!

Original release: August 27th 2011 on Deviant Art

And if you're interested, this existed as a comic first.  Link for the start page here:  http://aleximusprime.deviantart.com/art/After-the-Gala-Page-1-211665525

First Published
21st Sep 2012
Last Modified
21st Sep 2012

Comments ( 13 )

#1 · 101w, 3d ago · · ·

Well written.

Well read.

Well done.

#2 · 101w, 3d ago · · ·

Incredibly cheesy, but I liked it :twilightsmile:

#3 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

you have all my love in the world. seriously, this is absolutely one of *the* best stories I've read on this site. well done.

#4 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1313283  Excuuuuuuuuuuse me?!:trixieshiftleft:

#5 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1313660  hehe thanks!  :)

#6 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1313714 Fine, I exaggerated. It was a bit cheesy, making everyone get what they wanted in the end, but cheesy doesn't mean I didn't like it. My only problem with it is Applejack. I think she would feel like Celestia was being patronizing, buying all her stuff just to make her feel better.

#7 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1313735 But then the old pony wossname will kick-in and Applejack would be reluctant to contradict the diarch who presides over the nation of Equestria and all who dwell in it while the Sun shines down.

#8 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1313981 :facehoof: I was trying to explain to Mabbz why Applejack wouldn't consider Celestia being patronising; because, like all Equestrian ponies, she's been raised to think of the Princess in such a way that she wouldn't dare argue, at least not until She helps Applejack and the others cut loose in her presence.

#9 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1314111 Sorry I made the wrong comment.  I'm having a hard time getting used to the commenting system on this site, it really sucks.  -____-

#10 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1313735  Celestia's the princess therefore she's have loads of money.  And I made this to give them a happy ending after the Gala.  The Gala was a fiasco but this fic was just to give a realistic representation of how their night went afterwards.

#11 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

Good read overall, though there was a fair share of Deus Ex Machina with Celestia (Philomena, the Wonderbolts tickets, etc).  This felt more geared towards a younger demographic, so that's okay in the end.  In truth, this was a fine read with a good flow and no overt grammatical issue.  Fine job! :scootangel:

#12 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1314653  Well that was the overall plan really.  Celestia DID come to them at the end of the real episode so I thought I'd make her do them all some favors.  I can see her being that kind to them all you know and she only helped three of them with something (Fluttershy, Dash, and AJ) and of course Twilight too but we already knew that she'd be there to talk to her cuz she came to them in the end of the real ep.  I've heard it's an overdone thing to make Celestia do that apparently but this was made over a year ago as the description says, but even then I see no problem with giving Celestia a little more love than she gets in the show.  And I wanted to mainly fill in the empty space that some people felt that season finale left.  The Gala went horrible but then they all got together and were happy but then it was done and I am sure a lot of people would want to know what could have happened afterward.

#13 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1314736

I see.  In truth, it makes sense for her to that.  It just felt that, within the confines of the story, it was pretty much Machina still without the context of the explanation to back it up.  A bit more meat in that regard would clean up the issue.   Regardless, still a nice read.

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