The tale of an old stallion after the tragic passing of the elements of harmony.
Please give an honest opinion, altought constructive critisim is more welcome!
Author Notes: 69 words.
At first i was like: LOL NOPE!
But this is... Good-ish? Decent... No, above decent (consider it as a compliment)
i will keep my eye on this also ill give you a propper concrit tommorow *yawn*
pro tip-for god sakes dont use tge pony maker as a cover... Just get a random pic of like... I dunno a changeling or smtn..
Whenever I read about the Mane 6 dying...
Interesting concept, I normally can't bring myself to read something of such a grave topic, but a war with the changelings, that's something I'd like to read about.
Not sure what to think of this. While this idea has been done before, you write it decently enough. I'll track for the next chapter or two.
Anything that's not clearly negative is positive to me
I'm hoping to get the action going in a chapter or two so i hope you'll stay around for that long
Okay mate, I am ALL for this story continuing because you're an okay writer. I must insist, however, that you do some formatting involving paragraphs, indentations, and line spacing because that would help readability SO much.