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The Lord Thunder 400

Joined August 2012
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    The Lord Thunder's Stories (4)

    • Love's a Drag-on
      Trouble arises for Twilight when Spike meets a cute young dragoness.

      19,638 words · 6,497 views · 836 likes · 23 dislikes
    • Love Keeps Dragon On: The Return of Sapphire
      Ten years ago, two dragons said their goodbyes. What if they met again, under dire circumstances?
      19,603 words · 2,494 views · 366 likes · 11 dislikes
    • Tell the Tooth
      Everypony has fears. For some, bad foalhood experiences can turn into paranoia. Such is the case with Rainbow Dash and the dentist. When she gets a terrible toothache, she must face one of her worst fears or risk her friends knowing she's afraid
      5,942 words · 241 views · 15 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Loveless in Ponyville
      A unicorn stallion named Thunder struggles with why he is alone on Hearts and Hooves day for the 26th year in a row.
      1,537 words · 151 views · 9 likes · 2 dislikes

    A chance meeting with a cute young dragoness puts Spike on top of the world. However, it quickly becomes clear he may be forced to chose between his pony friends or the girl who captured his heart.

    First Published
    23rd Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    25th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 624 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · 2 · ·
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    That dragon looks strangely like the dragon form of Luna.

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Good story so far! Liked + faved. :rainbowdetermined2:

    I'm assuming Rainbow's little stunt was some Chekhov's Gun?

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Cover image made me dawwwww. Story seems pretty adorable too, and very much like something I'd expect to see in the show. It'd be nice if Spike wasn't the only dragon around who isn't a total tool. Keep it coming!

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :heart:

    >>1321894 Silent Bob would never say that, Imposter

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1321905

    Hey, just because I don't show Jay I have a soft side doesn't mean I don't have one!  ;P

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1321913 I was referring to you breaking your silence for something so :rainbowderp:

    Silent bob didn't even speak when he was pinned down in a diner with a stolen monkey  and cops surrounding the place....He said something afterwords though.:twilightblush:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1321927

    I had to for this story :D. Monkey be damned :P.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Huh... This...story has captured my attention, not the story but because...the dragon depicted in the image....looks very similar to Saphira. I will review your story. and please, make it a good one author~:moustache:

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    BEST DAY EVAAAAAAAAAR! and why does this dragoness have hair? Wouldn't spikes be a better choice. And I love this cute little romance... and um... spike does know about dating right? Of course not.. let the crash ( empahsise on crash) BEGIN:rainbowlaugh:

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Love blossoming... wait until the wee little ones are grown up:rainbowkiss:

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Thanks, everypony! :twilightblush: If you have any critiques, don't be afraid to give them to me. I can take constructive criticism.

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322071 Keep doing what you're doing :3:pinkiecrazy:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Alright... so what's wrong with her? ...Don't look at me like that! There HAS to be at least ONE thing that makes the chica seem in a darker light.

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #16 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Can you feel the love tonight :heart:

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Already read all 9 chapters... still going to fav after reading again though

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322849

    This is the edited version, mind you, not the pre-edited version that was stolen from ff.net.

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322858

    stolen? I read the one from ff.net

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322878

    Yeah, about a month ago someone took it from ff.net and uploaded it here as theirs without my permission. I was waiting to upload here for my editor to finish going through it so I'd have a final project to submit to EqD.

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322894

    Ah, that makes sense now... I didn't know it was copied without your permission, I had only known about the similarities between this story and the one I had read months ago by your alternate account on ff.net (I'm assuming it is at least) by the name of "Thunder Magus"

    that's all I was stating

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1321881

    May whoever made that Faust-forsaken macro be plunged into the farthest depths of Hell.

    Here's one I swiped from Magical Trever:

    Classy, and MUCH less likely to put me off reading the story it's posted on. Seriously, I almost closed the browsing window and walked away from this fic because of that image.

    >>1322894

    Also, is there a reason the cover art makes me wonder where the Luna tag is?

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322961 I fail to see what's wrong with that image. But then again, I fail to understand why humanity does anything.

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1321935

    Also, you aren't actually talking. You're typing. Completely different.

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322978

    It is the picture of a gentleman who would have died of a heart attack in three years if he hadn't killed himself in shame after the image went viral. I see that horrid image posted on FimFiction so often that every time I see it I have to physically restrain myself from punching my Flatscreen TV/Computer Monitor. Long story short, the image makes me physically ill, and I see it a lot.

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Max
    #28 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yea, this souned awfully familiar, so this one is going to be edited or wut? Because i loved this fic :heart:

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very entertaining. Can't wait for more.

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So much

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    YES! THIS STORY IS HERE!

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh hey, you got this story up here, and it got featured? Congratulations!

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    DRAGONBALL!!!! great story thus far, and with this chapter you've created an interesting sub plot. Keep goin and stay golden^^

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #38 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL I want more

    #39 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL I want more            BBBBBBBLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDddddddddddddddddddddd:pinkiecrazy::rainbowwild:

    #41 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??

    #42 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322071 this is relevant to my interests. one small nitpick here though: the story seems a bit rushed. I don't know if I'm reading it correctly (it's one in the morning and I have terrible eyesight) but it seems slightly improbable for spike to completely forget his devotion to Rarity in just one day

    #43 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #44 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    SpikeXDragon(ess) is samething what we can't read often.

    We get SpikeXRarity, SpikeXSweetieBell, SpikeXAppelbloom or also SpikeXTwilightSparkle(by the last one mostly ClopFics).

    I think I even see SpikeXRainbowDash, but Rainbow Dash get shipped with everyone.

    And till now I must tell you...

    ... and give me ...

    #45 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Rainbow stopped in midair, staring wide-eyed at the purple unicorn. Did Twilight know about Spike? "Uh… sure! Did you need some help, Twighlight?"

    Was the misspelling a verbal fumble on Rainbow's part, or was it just a mistake?

    #46 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    [spoilers] I desperately needed moar and I found out this was already completed and read the rest of it on fanfiction...now I must go cry many tears for several hours. :raritycry: :fluttershbad: I DEMAND A SEQUEL!!! AND IT BETTER BE A HAPPY ONE!!!! :flutterrage: :twilightangry2:

    Btw, great story, very well written. My only criticism is that I thought it was weird how Spike doesn't really question Sapphire's origins. You would think he would wonder where a random dragon who just showed up in the forest near town would have came from. I was surprised he didn't ask about her family or where she lived or something.

    #47 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm feeling a sense of Deja Vu here (like I read this before) :twilightoops:

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1321959

    Dragonesses have hair.

    #49 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Goddammit, what's with all these commenters demanding "moar" using awful image macros? :ajbemused:

    For seriously, dudes. Cats telling the author to "proceed," babies with creepy faces, and fat guys hollering rapturously in Comic Sans won't make the chapters come out any quicker.

    All of that said, this story looks interesting. Might give it a read later. :pinkiesmile:

    #50 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

    #51 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322961 Been a while since I've seen that movie. And I very much agree with you. Well, except for that the image you're replying to doesn't make me sick, it just puts me off a good bunch.

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1323894 Spam much? :ajbemused:

    #53 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322894 Hmm... I think I've seen that one. He just removed the hyphen from the title, right? Huh.

    #54 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    spike x another dragon instead of pony

    finally lmfao someone with sense

    but its fast paced, slow down

    #55 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Please let this repost be different. And if not, then I demand a sequel.

    sig \/

    I made a statement, so I have to do this. BABALITY

    And if you want a link to brony music, click this<sig

    #56 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I have to ask...will Rarity Play a role in this ? :raritydespair:

    Because if so, then I'm all in for this story. :raritywink:

    #57 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1322214  What I was thinking.

    Also, I thought it was a Dragon version of Luna from the pic as well.  xD

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Let the D'aaaaaaaawwwwing begin!!!!!

    #59 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Can't help but notice the dragon looks a LOT like Luna.:rainbowderp:

    #60 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    For the love of luna. Moar.

    :raritystarry:

    Faved

    #61 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    sahhpire.......my friend made the almost same story

    #62 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Sheer, unadulterated, fucking adorableness. :rainbowkiss:

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    I'm surprised. I don't think anyone else ever decided to do a shipping story with spike and ANOTHER DRAGON.

    #64 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 22h ago · · ·
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    #66 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>1323377

    Hey, McPoodle! Where have you been? I haven't heard from you forever!

    #67 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 22h ago · · ·
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    This is the cutest thing in the world!

    #68 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 22h ago · · ·
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    Thanks for all the comments, everypony. You made me feel good about this. :pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish:

    #69 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>1321871 She better not be. She's my waifu.

    #70 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 22h ago · · ·
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    yep, remember reading this a few months ago (was all :raritycry: in the end)

    #71 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 22h ago · · ·
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    So much D'AW!:heart:

    #72 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1325088 What where!?

    #73 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    D'awwww.

    #74 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    What type of dragon is spike then???

    #75 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1325088

    OK, I've had this one up for a while on ff.net but let's take it easy on the spoilers, guys :derpytongue2:. There are a few who haven't read it, after all. :trixieshiftright:

    #76 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    #77 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1323415

    Oh, don't feel bad. Go for it! The world needs more SpikexDragoness stories.

    #78 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1325121 Oh shit :pinkiegasp:

    I have the strong urge to go find it now, but I'm very worried about what TheMyth is saying about the ending.

    #79 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1322894 Thats horrible Well atleast you got your story back. thumbs up

    #80 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    :moustache: spike gets the girls LIKE A BWASSS!

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Well damn. That right there is just straight adorable.

    #82 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    ok, THAT was adorable :twilightsmile:

    #83 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    #84 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1325167 Sad shit ovar ther.

    #85 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Just read this on fanfiction. STORY Y U SO SAD!!

    #87 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    RAINBOW DASH, IF YOU TELL TWILIGHT, I WILL BRING UPON YOU THE FORCE OF /B/, R/SPACEDICKS AND SHIT DEEP FROM THE DEPTHS OF SGT. SPRINKLE'S MIND.

    #88 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Wow, Dash is kinda a bitch, huh?

    #89 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    #90 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    I say sir, this is the first time I have ever seen something like this and will read it later when I have time and when I'm not supposed to be writing.

    #91 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1325224 Read it there... a sequel set like 20 years from now is necessary.

    #92 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1323415

    You're writing a story about Spike falling for a lady dragon with S1 Luna Hair?

    #93 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    I see a lot of comments about Sapphire looking like Luna. Well, Sapphire started out as an adult anthrodragon RP character on the Acorn Cafe for my Cafesona, a dragon, and I asked the artist to draw me a picture of her. When she asked what I wanted the hair to look like I just said give her Luna's S1 hair. The resulting picture was so awesome I asked her to draw Sapphire as an MLP dragon, and the result is the pic of Sapphire you see in the cover art.

    #94 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Good job Spike...Good job. Now just make sure Pinkie doesn't find out, and we'll be fine. Also, good story so far!:twilightsmile:

    #95 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Spike with another dragon? BLASPHEMY!

    Still looking forward to more.

    #96 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 20h ago · · ·
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    a bit overly fast paced

    #97 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Finally. A love story that involes spike and another member of his species. :yay:

    Let the D'aaaawwwmance begin :pinkiehappy:

    #98 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 20h ago · · ·
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    gaaaah I died of the daw in this story

    #99 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Loved it!

    Write the rest, and I will keep reading!

    Max
    #100 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 20h ago · · ·
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