The Lord Thunder
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Good story so far! Liked + faved. ![]()
I'm assuming Rainbow's little stunt was some Chekhov's Gun?
Cover image made me dawwwww. Story seems pretty adorable too, and very much like something I'd expect to see in the show. It'd be nice if Spike wasn't the only dragon around who isn't a total tool. Keep it coming!
Huh... This...story has captured my attention, not the story but because...the dragon depicted in the image....looks very similar to Saphira. I will review your story. and please, make it a good one author~![]()
BEST DAY EVAAAAAAAAAR! and why does this dragoness have hair? Wouldn't spikes be a better choice. And I love this cute little romance... and um... spike does know about dating right? Of course not.. let the crash ( empahsise on crash) BEGIN![]()
Thanks, everypony!
If you have any critiques, don't be afraid to give them to me. I can take constructive criticism.
Alright... so what's wrong with her? ...Don't look at me like that! There HAS to be at least ONE thing that makes the chica seem in a darker light.
A Spike shipping fic?...Well I do like those.
Already read all 9 chapters... still going to fav after reading again though
Ah, that makes sense now... I didn't know it was copied without your permission, I had only known about the similarities between this story and the one I had read months ago by your alternate account on ff.net (I'm assuming it is at least) by the name of "Thunder Magus"
May whoever made that Faust-forsaken macro be plunged into the farthest depths of Hell.
Here's one I swiped from Magical Trever:
Classy, and MUCH less likely to put me off reading the story it's posted on. Seriously, I almost closed the browsing window and walked away from this fic because of that image.
Also, is there a reason the cover art makes me wonder where the Luna tag is?
Also, you aren't actually talking. You're typing. Completely different.
It is the picture of a gentleman who would have died of a heart attack in three years if he hadn't killed himself in shame after the image went viral. I see that horrid image posted on FimFiction so often that every time I see it I have to physically restrain myself from punching my Flatscreen TV/Computer Monitor. Long story short, the image makes me physically ill, and I see it a lot.
shipping spike with oc dragon?
Yea, this souned awfully familiar, so this one is going to be edited or wut? Because i loved this fic ![]()
Oh hey, you got this story up here, and it got featured? Congratulations!
*clears throat* *EXTREMELY LARGE INHALE!*
I AM LOVING THIS TO THE FULLEST EXTENT!!!!!!!! PLEASE
and MOAR!
DRAGONBALL!!!! great story thus far, and with this chapter you've created an interesting sub plot. Keep goin and stay golden^^
More my good wordsmith! Please!?
LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL I want more BBBBBBBLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDddddddddddddddddddddd![]()
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Are. you. bucking. kidding. me.
I just began work on a story with essentially the same story.
>>1322071 this is relevant to my interests. one small nitpick here though: the story seems a bit rushed. I don't know if I'm reading it correctly (it's one in the morning and I have terrible eyesight) but it seems slightly improbable for spike to completely forget his devotion to Rarity in just one day
That was so great its time for hugs!
YES! Hugs of win!
SpikeXDragon(ess) is samething what we can't read often.
We get SpikeXRarity, SpikeXSweetieBell, SpikeXAppelbloom or also SpikeXTwilightSparkle(by the last one mostly ClopFics).
I think I even see SpikeXRainbowDash, but Rainbow Dash get shipped with everyone.
And till now I must tell you...
... and give me ...
Rainbow stopped in midair, staring wide-eyed at the purple unicorn. Did Twilight know about Spike? "Uh… sure! Did you need some help, Twighlight?"
Was the misspelling a verbal fumble on Rainbow's part, or was it just a mistake?
[spoilers] I desperately needed moar and I found out this was already completed and read the rest of it on fanfiction...now I must go cry many tears for several hours.
I DEMAND A SEQUEL!!! AND IT BETTER BE A HAPPY ONE!!!!
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Btw, great story, very well written. My only criticism is that I thought it was weird how Spike doesn't really question Sapphire's origins. You would think he would wonder where a random dragon who just showed up in the forest near town would have came from. I was surprised he didn't ask about her family or where she lived or something.
Goddammit, what's with all these commenters demanding "moar" using awful image macros? ![]()
For seriously, dudes. Cats telling the author to "proceed," babies with creepy faces, and fat guys hollering rapturously in Comic Sans won't make the chapters come out any quicker.
All of that said, this story looks interesting. Might give it a read later. ![]()
spike x another dragon instead of pony
finally lmfao someone with sense
but its fast paced, slow down
Please let this repost be different. And if not, then I demand a sequel.
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I made a statement, so I have to do this. BABALITYAnd if you want a link to brony music, click this<sig
I have to ask...will Rarity Play a role in this ? ![]()
Because if so, then I'm all in for this story. ![]()
I'm surprised. I don't think anyone else ever decided to do a shipping story with spike and ANOTHER DRAGON.
Thanks for all the comments, everypony. You made me feel good about this. ![]()
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yep, remember reading this a few months ago (was all
in the end)
I most certainly can't. WAY too much cuteness here, for any one man to handle.
RAINBOW DASH, IF YOU TELL TWILIGHT, I WILL BRING UPON YOU THE FORCE OF /B/, R/SPACEDICKS AND SHIT DEEP FROM THE DEPTHS OF SGT. SPRINKLE'S MIND.
I say sir, this is the first time I have ever seen something like this and will read it later when I have time and when I'm not supposed to be writing.
You're writing a story about Spike falling for a lady dragon with S1 Luna Hair?
I see a lot of comments about Sapphire looking like Luna. Well, Sapphire started out as an adult anthrodragon RP character on the Acorn Cafe for my Cafesona, a dragon, and I asked the artist to draw me a picture of her. When she asked what I wanted the hair to look like I just said give her Luna's S1 hair. The resulting picture was so awesome I asked her to draw Sapphire as an MLP dragon, and the result is the pic of Sapphire you see in the cover art.
Good job Spike...Good job. Now just make sure Pinkie doesn't find out, and we'll be fine. Also, good story so far!![]()
Spike with another dragon? BLASPHEMY!
Still looking forward to more.
Finally. A love story that involes spike and another member of his species. ![]()
Let the D'aaaawwwmance begin ![]()







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