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Every night when Pinkie Pie goes to bed, Pinkamina rises. Using the cryptic powers of the Pinkie Sense, she deciphers the clues and goes out to prevent the deaths of others. Meanwhile, the Stallion Lickity Split is developing feelings for Pinkie's darker half, and the Royal Sisters do NOT like Pinkamina messing with fate.

First Published
19th Sep 2012
Last Modified
19th Sep 2012
#1 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

So...time for a party?:pinkiegasp:

#2 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

Aw yea! Let's scroll through this horseapple! Time to comment like buck!

#3 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

This is a sure :twistnerd: on pinkamena, you've garnered my interest :twilightsmile:

#4 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

Wait... incomplete?!?! :pinkiegasp:

#5 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

I'll read later:rainbowkiss:

#6 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Zecora ·

There's a reason the pink one scares me at times.

#7 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

Oh YAY :yay: this was the first fic from Aegis I read, and still one of my all time favs! I really hope he makes a 2nd sequel! :rainbowkiss:

#8 · 117w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

OOOH new cover art?

#9 · 117w, 23h ago · · · Epilogue ·

Okay something wierd happened and I suddenly (apparently) Havn't read all this...

#10 · 117w, 23h ago · · · Bon-Bon ·

Your Pinkamina characterization is pitch perfect.

Oddly enough I really do think Luna is this massive drama queen.

"There's a thing on this planet that can't ever die."

#13 · 117w, 22h ago · · · Pinkamina ·

This reads like a candy coated version of The Strange Case of Charles Dexter Ward :pinkiecrazy:

#14 · 117w, 22h ago · · · Epilogue ·

That makes way too much fucking SENSE

#15 · 117w, 20h ago · · · Epilogue ·

thanks for bringing this back.. i really wish for another sequel :raritydespair: this is the best thing ive ever read!:pinkiesad2:

#16 · 117w, 15h ago · · · Epilogue ·

Let's see if we can't get this to the feature box again.

#17 · 117w, 14h ago · · · Epilogue ·

>>1301786

There is. Its called>>>>>>Seeing the pattern: Death Awaits.  Or something like that.

#18 · 117w, 14h ago · · · Epilogue ·

huh, i've never seen this story of yours before. I'm gonna read this later

This is rather excellent!:pinkiehappy:

Also, :yay: for a story that features a non-evil Pinkamena!

#21 · 117w, 13h ago · · · Pinkamina ·

Nice Ghostbusters reference.

#22 · 117w, 13h ago · · · Epilogue ·

Wow very cool.  It is awesome to see a Pinkimina story where she is a good guy.  It is also nice that she has found somebody to make her happy.  Now if surprise could only be so lucky...well maybe she is with Rainbow around j/k maybe?

Luna is sort of ridicules but that is alright as it keeps the story moving and the rest is so much fun that I don't care.

This character could certainly fill more stories so I hope you continue to write sequels to this story and the like.

#23 · 117w, 13h ago · · · Zecora ·

This, is bucking AWESOME!

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

#24 · 117w, 13h ago · · · Epilogue ·

SPOILERS

Hmm. Interesting. I assume Surprise's (or Pinkie Pie's if you prefer) feelings for Lickety Split went out of the window after she thought he had raped her, since that is not addressed at all anymore. But will there be a follow up story here?

I think the biggest question remaining is, why is it so bad those deaths are prevented? That is never explained, really, nor do there seem to be any repercussions so far. There are other questions of course. Why are there so many deaths in such a short time frame anyway? If preventing these deaths is such a problem, why would it be somepony's special talent? Two out of the four ponies that almost got killed in that last incident were almost killed before... Was that fate or karma or whatever trying to set things right, or was one of the other two the target this time? Will what Pinkamena does have any consequences for Lickety Split or someone else?

Will there be more or does it end here?

Hah!  Wasn't expecting that bit with the kiss.

#26 · 117w, 13h ago · · · Epilogue ·

A very nice story, but luna is a bit of a drama queen.  RAirity is said here position as biggest on is taken:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair:

#27 · 117w, 13h ago · · · Epilogue ·

>>1300513 Bad Twist joke is bad. :rainbowlaugh:

#28 · 117w, 13h ago · · · Bon-Bon ·

Bwa ha ha ha! "Craving salt" eh? :trollestia:

Every year, nearly tens of lives are lost due to unsafe frozen dairy storage practices. Always remember to install freezer doors to swing inwards, and use the buddy system when dealing with quantities of more than 100 gallons of ice cream (any flavor.)

The more you know, Aegis.

#30 · 117w, 12h ago · 3 · · Applebloom ·

My god... she's like a woman. (I'm gonna catch hell for that one)

#31 · 117w, 12h ago · · · Epilogue ·

>>1302787

:eeyup:, but it got the point across didn't it? :trollestia:

#32 · 117w, 12h ago · · · Epilogue ·

A Pinkamena that isn't blatantly evil and psychotic?  You have my attention already. :duck:

A twitchy tail may be misconstrued

Off with everyone's head

#35 · 117w, 12h ago · · · Epilogue ·

Very very cool. Loved the story. Sensible, funny, well-written, with a helping of more "realism" than most other fics. Thoroughly enjoyable. Definitely going to check out that sequel.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

It's magic I ain't gotta explain shit.

#37 · 117w, 12h ago · 4 · · Surprise ·

This happened to a friend of mine once.

#38 · 117w, 12h ago · · · Epilogue ·

Aegis Shield is featured. TWICE. You sir, are a GOD :raritystarry:

#39 · 117w, 12h ago · · · Zecora ·

This is great. Now, allow me to explain why it is great!

A new premise, one that I've never heard of before. I'm fairly well-read, following hundreds of stories on various sites, and I'm also pretty creative, but I have never heard or thought of this before. It's an interesting idea, and I'm eager to see how it all works out.

Spelling, grammar, and sentence fluency are all good. You wouldn't believe how many perfectly good stories are ruined by messing up on those.

I like the idea of Pinkamina trying to keep herself secret, because things could easily get complicated if everypony knew. I've found that the more intricate and complex a story is, the more likely that things will be overlooked, resulting in readers wondering, "Why didn't they just do this?" However, keeping herself secret probably won't last forever. Either way, it sounds good.

Being a superhero? Pretty cool. It's a new take on the old cliche about somepony being normal by day, and a hero by night, the main problem with which is sleep. I like how you give Pinkie some rest, but cover the rest of it with sugar. It also fits into what we know Pinkie to be like.

I also notice that you explained why Zecora's hut caught fire, instead of leaving it at "it was on fire". Attention to detail is important to me, and it looks like this story will include it.

The room changing with the press of a button? Nice. Every hero needs a base, and her's is in her own room, but hidden. However, I do kind of wonder how exactly she managed to set it all up without anypony else noticing. Not that big of a deal, I tend to want a backstory for everything. Just the way I am.

The countdown idea? Brilliant. Having her Pinkie sense count down like that was fantastic. Having each one give some kind of clue as to what would happen was even better. And I love how she only realized it by accident. It's vague enough that you need to think about it, even knowing the answer. On a side note, I tried to solve the puzzle and find the connection before reading on.

End wall-o-text

In conclusion (tl;dr):

Brohoof /)

#40 · 117w, 12h ago · · · Epilogue ·

What happened to your account?

edit: Read the blog post.

#41 · 117w, 11h ago · · · Zecora ·

This is sooo good. FAVED! :yay:

#42 · 117w, 11h ago · · · Pinkamina ·

My alternative personality is someone who's really mean to authors.

You're doing great work!

#43 · 117w, 11h ago · · · Epilogue ·

Believe in me who believes in you.

#44 · 117w, 11h ago · · · Epilogue ·

I'll read this. Interesting take on Pinkamena. :pinkiecrazy:

I'm liking this idea. :scootangel:

I love this story! Yeees! :pinkiehappy:

#48 · 117w, 11h ago · · · Epilogue ·

I likes this!

This pinkamena is perfect.

That said...

You just came back to ponyvile after a long month away for a psychiatry conference, you are minding your own business, on your way to a cafe for some relaxation.

Then you see her. Pinkie Pie with her mane flat and a grinning skull for a cutie mark.

And that's the story of how Mind Helper the earth pony left for Neighponn and never came back to ponyville.

#49 · 117w, 11h ago · · · Epilogue ·

>>1302596

Searched, but couldn't find it. Anypony know if there is a sequel? I really want to see what happens next!

#50 · 117w, 11h ago · · · Bon-Bon ·

Lickity trying to pull his smooth moves

"Why not?...You're beautifu..."

FOUR BY FOUR SMACKS HIM RIGHT IN THE FACE!

Bwa hahaha! :rainbowlaugh:

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