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Every night when Pinkie Pie goes to bed, Pinkamina rises. Using the cryptic powers of the Pinkie Sense, she deciphers the clues and goes out to prevent the deaths of others. Meanwhile, the Stallion Lickity Split is developing feelings for Pinkie's darker half, and the Royal Sisters do NOT like Pinkamina messing with fate.
“SILENCE, LESBIAN!”
Wow very cool. It is awesome to see a Pinkimina story where she is a good guy. It is also nice that she has found somebody to make her happy. Now if surprise could only be so lucky...well maybe she is with Rainbow around j/k maybe?
Luna is sort of ridicules but that is alright as it keeps the story moving and the rest is so much fun that I don't care.
This character could certainly fill more stories so I hope you continue to write sequels to this story and the like.
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Hmm. Interesting. I assume Surprise's (or Pinkie Pie's if you prefer) feelings for Lickety Split went out of the window after she thought he had raped her, since that is not addressed at all anymore. But will there be a follow up story here?
I think the biggest question remaining is, why is it so bad those deaths are prevented? That is never explained, really, nor do there seem to be any repercussions so far. There are other questions of course. Why are there so many deaths in such a short time frame anyway? If preventing these deaths is such a problem, why would it be somepony's special talent? Two out of the four ponies that almost got killed in that last incident were almost killed before... Was that fate or karma or whatever trying to set things right, or was one of the other two the target this time? Will what Pinkamena does have any consequences for Lickety Split or someone else?
Will there be more or does it end here?
Every year, nearly tens of lives are lost due to unsafe frozen dairy storage practices. Always remember to install freezer doors to swing inwards, and use the buddy system when dealing with quantities of more than 100 gallons of ice cream (any flavor.)
The more you know, Aegis.
This is great. Now, allow me to explain why it is great!
A new premise, one that I've never heard of before. I'm fairly well-read, following hundreds of stories on various sites, and I'm also pretty creative, but I have never heard or thought of this before. It's an interesting idea, and I'm eager to see how it all works out.
Spelling, grammar, and sentence fluency are all good. You wouldn't believe how many perfectly good stories are ruined by messing up on those.
I like the idea of Pinkamina trying to keep herself secret, because things could easily get complicated if everypony knew. I've found that the more intricate and complex a story is, the more likely that things will be overlooked, resulting in readers wondering, "Why didn't they just do this?" However, keeping herself secret probably won't last forever. Either way, it sounds good.
Being a superhero? Pretty cool. It's a new take on the old cliche about somepony being normal by day, and a hero by night, the main problem with which is sleep. I like how you give Pinkie some rest, but cover the rest of it with sugar. It also fits into what we know Pinkie to be like.
I also notice that you explained why Zecora's hut caught fire, instead of leaving it at "it was on fire". Attention to detail is important to me, and it looks like this story will include it.
The room changing with the press of a button? Nice. Every hero needs a base, and her's is in her own room, but hidden. However, I do kind of wonder how exactly she managed to set it all up without anypony else noticing. Not that big of a deal, I tend to want a backstory for everything. Just the way I am.
The countdown idea? Brilliant. Having her Pinkie sense count down like that was fantastic. Having each one give some kind of clue as to what would happen was even better. And I love how she only realized it by accident. It's vague enough that you need to think about it, even knowing the answer. On a side note, I tried to solve the puzzle and find the connection before reading on.
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In conclusion (tl;dr):
Brohoof /)
I likes this!
This pinkamena is perfect.
That said...
You just came back to ponyvile after a long month away for a psychiatry conference, you are minding your own business, on your way to a cafe for some relaxation.
Then you see her. Pinkie Pie with her mane flat and a grinning skull for a cutie mark.
And that's the story of how Mind Helper the earth pony left for Neighponn and never came back to ponyville.
Top work, really enjoyed it! AND there's a sequel coming up?! 
After Chapters 6 & 7 I'm now thinking of Luna as
"First I'm going to have a little drinky...and then I'm going to execute the whole bally lot of you!"
After that last scene Pinkamina fits this song perfectly. 
What difference does it make if Pinkamina stops a few untimely deaths, she isn't stopping death itself, and Pinkamina just pointed out a good reason for Big Macintosh to live, so why can't Luna just leave Pinkamina alone?! 
Luna kind of reminds me of Alex from Power Rangers Time Force in that he claims that he allows for everything in the past to happen because it is meant to be even when such actions would cause him to cease to exist or puts his former teammates in danger, and Luna has a similar belief about destiny, which Alex at first states cannot be changed. 
Pinkie Pie: "(Sees a royal guard coming for her) What's going on?" 
Royal Guard: "Stop, you have lied about assult thus putting an innocent pony's life at stake, in other words you violated the law! Normally I'd ask if you wanted to pay the court a fine or serve your prison sentence but in this case YOU WILL PAY WITH YOUR BLOOD!"
Pinkie Pie: "But I" 
Royal Guard: "Silence Criminal Scum!"
So two Pinkie Pie's exist, "HAHA! The fun has been doubled!"
(I consider this a character song for Pinkamina at least in this universe)
(This song was never used because SEGA couldn't track down the original singer)
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this was the first fic from Aegis I read, and still one of my all time favs! I really hope he makes a 2nd sequel! 
this is the best thing ive ever read!
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, but it got the point across didn't it? 
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