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Joined July 2012
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    Bluebirdd065's Stories (15)

    • Hearts and Hooves Day
      It's a lot more than just a holiday.

      1,303 words · 215 views · 19 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Magic Mishap
      Trixie attempts a little trick to aid her on her quest for revenge on a certain lavender mare, but she proceeds to look towards a certain planet of ours. (In short, it's an HiE fic.)
      14,174 words · 584 views · 27 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Derpy And Her Lava Lamp
      Derpy basks in the awesomeness that is her lava lamp.
      1,067 words · 403 views · 26 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Threw It On The Ground!
      Based off the song from The Lonely Island. Just something to get mah head reelin' with some ideas.
      1,179 words · 490 views · 25 likes · 3 dislikes
    • A Cello Player's Nightmare
      1,099 words · 210 views · 9 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Spin That S***, Vinyl!
      1,095 words · 361 views · 18 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Unshed Light
      1,212 words · 464 views · 13 likes · 2 dislikes
    • How It Used To Be
      3,051 words · 102 views · 8 likes · 1 dislikes
    • LIES!
      8,319 words · 611 views · 30 likes · 14 dislikes
    • Operation: Cupcake
      1,122 words · 184 views · 9 likes · 2 dislikes
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    Vinyl almost always wears her glasses anywhere, it's like her trademark thing! But what happened if she lost them thirty minutes before a show?

    EDIT: Sequel-ish thing's out! It's called "A Cello Player's Nightmare"

    First Published
    19th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    23rd Sep 2012

    Comments ( 10 )

    #1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Totally reminds me of this :D Especially from 46s

    #2 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    HAHAHAH, yes! Best pony going nuts over her shades, gotta love it. Favorited!

    Only critique though, you could really add more detail to her searching of the house. Since her searching for her glasses is the main focal point of the story, there's a lot more depth to be had. Adverbs and adjectives are your friends, and since this story is a comedy, exaggeration is your BEST friend!

    Other than that, though, great story! Like I said, Favorited. :)

    #3 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Looks interesting. Added to read later. Have a thumb for one of my favorite bg ponies

    #4 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #5 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The thing with Vinyl reminds me of Homestar Runner with the "Presents" cartoon, here I'll even parody it for you.

    Viynl Scratch: Oh horseapples I set the alarm for 6:00 PM instead of AM again!

    #6 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    this was so adorably awesome!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: thumbed :twilightsmile:

    #7 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    And then it got bumped somehow. Yay.

    #8 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Octavia: This house is in Unacceptable conditon, UNACCEPTABLE! :twilightangry2:

    #9 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh, and if you favorited this story, sorry for the new chapter things and whatnot; I'm not bumping the story, I'm just making tiny changes to link towards the new story. So please, don't take it the wrong way.:applecry:>>1320191

    #10 · 14w, 2d ago · · ·
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    There is nothing Holy, or sweet about Celestia. Nice story though

    Vinyl for best pony!:heart:

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