Might want to switch the description and author's note around. Or better yet, remove the A/N from the place where the description is meant to be, and put it elsewhere. It's just not really attractive to read like this.

EDIt: The story is quite good, do keep it up.

Quite an interesting plot to this story. Of course, I must admit my standards for plotline quality aren't as high as those of many other people. After all, I thoroughly enjoyed Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen and The Dark Knight Rises, and those movies are constantly being bashed for their allegedly horrible plots.

new head cannon

This is by far the best crackfic ever.

  4/5 but don't bet with my well being

but there is only room for one Lord of Chaos

Is that a Lord of the Rings reference I see?

Ahahahahahahahaha you crack me up

I really meant for it to be romantic but oh well.

Brilliant!

See, Rarity?  You're not the only one who can troll your opponent into submission.

>>12993511299351 Transformers did have a bad plot, but Michael Bay did a good job of making continueous explosions with awesome animations. Dark Knight Rises had a good plot, but was riddled with sooooo many plot holes. The only one I instantly noticed tho was how did Robin know he was batman? From a look on his face when he visted his orphanage?! Holy shit he is good, Cole Phelps has got NOTHING on this mastermind.

"How did you know I was batman?"

"I saw you had a look on your face, as if you were living a lie, so I deduced you must dress up as a bat and fight crime"

- Cracked.com

>>12998241299824 uh geo ithink i hear a voice that belongs to a 'friend' of yours...

>>13002441300244 also YAY FOR EXPLOSIONS and wtf how did you guess that so easy *kick in groin and runs away*

>>13005791300579

He's probably sleeping.

Hey Geo, if you're awake you have 1 hour to reply to this before I downvote your story

Mwahahahahahahaha!!!!

Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-flaugh.png

jk

He's sure to respond now

>>13006661300666 is that a tiny jk i see under 'Mwahahahahahahaha!!!!'? If so if he doesnt and you downvote him ill... um... KICK YOUR MOM

>>13007581300758

Pfft, like I give a flying feather

Shhhh! you weren't supposed to see that!

>>13006661300666

Responding.

>>13008071300807

Ah, there you are old friend.

Truth be told, I lol'd so hard when I saw the notification for this. I just knew this was the story

>>13008551300855

I'm honestly surprised that people like it.

>>13009001300900

It's an unorthodox idea, and that usually gets people's attention.

>>13009051300905

True. I doubt many people will see it, though, given the time it was posted at.

Snerk.

Pfft.

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...

BWA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Ahh, that was funny. Discord, getting his ass metaphorically handed to him by the exotic foreigner. Nice. And maybe epic.  

YES.

>>13014691301469

Definitely epic. Someone should make a animated short of this! or at least a comic.

>>13186561318656

If anyone wishes to do either, you have my permission. Make sure you send me a link!

>>13186851318685

I lack the programs (and know-how) to animate, and probably the artistic skill to comic-fy it. I could try, but I need to see something to draw it, and I'd need to practice a bunch first.

...Yes, I like this very much.  You, good sir, have quite the touch.

Finally got around to reading this.

All I have to say is...

Image: http://iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-what-bronies-see-when-we-brohoof.gif?1334139765

>>13891841389184

That was hilarious and Zecora came across Like Boss!

This was amazing and I love you.

>>14692231469223

I don't always get drunk before I do an author's reading,

but when I do,

I prefer Dos Equis

>>16141221614122

Hey look, a joke just flew over my head! Amazing.

Worth the read, nicely done.

This was an interesting story.

That was laugh out-loud HILARIOUS!