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The Elements of Harmony are six of the closest friends in all of Equestria. But when a sudden tragedy strikes down one of the elements, how will the other five be able to handle their lives? Will they find the strength in themselves and each other, or will their inability to cope cause more tragedy for the group?

Featured on Equestria Daily December 30th, 2011

First Published
24th Dec 2011
Last Modified
9th Mar 2012

Sounds interesting...

I'll check up on it later.

This counter is just for my own personal amusement.

Sounds like Rarity just had a heartattack, oh poor Rarity... that's a really sucky death.

More please! I am tracking and can't wait to see how this one turns out. Yes, Rainbow Dash is the most loyal jerk in all of Equestria.

Awww, poor Rarity.  :(  That sucks, but I hope to read more soon.

where is the next part?

>>91092

Soon to be posted. It's written and is being edited by my prereader. Hopefully he gets it back to me tonight so I can make the edits, clean up, and polish and have it up here by tomorrow. I want it to be of the highest quality so its an enjoyable and memorable read, so please understand if updates take a little longer than normal!

This is the saddest thing i have ever read. it is first in my sad fanfic list. second is my lil dashie. when can we expect the next chapter?

Another life gone due to the incompetence of doctors. Bah.

Also, you may wish to put a tag up telling people to avoid looking at the comments if they don't wanna be spoiled... I kinda posted that without thinking. :twilightoops:

>>93390

I'm shooting for Saturday so people have something to read for the new year. If not, then Monday the 2nd is the hard deadline I set for myself to get it out

My Little Dashie will always be the saddest fic I've ever read, as this one didn't make me sob uncontrollably, but it's still pretty sad.

Manly tears were shed at this.... :fluttercry: (ok, maybe not so manly)

Why do you have to do that!

Heart-Breaking! Just when you thought everything was going to be good.

This is the first really sad death fan fiction I've read, and it is very sad. :fluttercry:  I do look forward to reading more though.

i have to say that i cried when rarity died. i wonder how dashie and the gang are going to react. oh please please please upload another chapter. i must see how this ends. i must I MUST! :duck:

This is the WORST...POSSIBLE...THING! :raritydespair: :raritycry:

I've lost family to cancer before, and I can tell you sudden death is the most painful and depressing thing in the world.  It's worse than breaking up, worse than divorce, and worse having someone you love lie to you.  Nothing else compares.:pinkiesad2:

:applecry: What a sad story. Even though I don't like Rarity doesn't mean she had to die.

Sorry but I call bull shit, Rarity is best pony.... she cant be dead...... *sniffle* She just cant be...

First pony fanfic I've read; I liked it.

"Our dead are never dead to us until we have forgotten them."

- GEORGE ELIOT, Adam Bede

"To live in hearts we leave behind

Is not to die."

- THOMAS CAMPBELL, Hallowed Ground

I had this massive sense of dread for the first part.... and then.... chapter 2 happened.....:fluttercry:

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

I'm still looking forward to the next chapter...... Rarity isn't my favorite, but... even so..... :raritycry:

So this is after the famous *dun dun dun* cupcakes ?

This is a sad story, but I wonder about only one thing. MAGIC. Why wasnt any used on Rarity? It might have saved her...:raritydespair:

:applecry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::facehoof::unsuresweetie: Sorrow shared by all.

So say we all.

do not want... but I respect a well written story. well done, now please stop killing ponies, we needs them.

We will all pass on from this world, but our deeds that we do will last for every last pony we touch.

This is just..so sad!!:fluttercry:

I wonder what would cause a heart attack like that. Stress sucks.

Death is not the end, just another path, one that we all must take.

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUu

Dis is so sad:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Very well written approach to a sad fanfic.

Good stuff, man. I can really feel the weight of the loss on Twilight's shoulders.

Quick suggestion: "a flash of light blue landed less than a foot in front her face. 'APPLEJACK! Rarity or Twilight is in trouble and they’re at the hospital! Come on, we need to make sure they’re okay!' Rainbow said as fast as she could. The sudden appearance of her friend caused the cowpony to jump back a few feet and yell in surprise."

could probably be written better as

"a flash of light blue landed less than a foot in front her face. The sudden appearance of her friend caused the cowpony to jump back a few feet and yell in surprise. 'APPLEJACK! Rarity or Twilight is in trouble and they’re at the hospital! Come on, we need to make sure they’re okay!' Rainbow said as fast as she could."

Because the first way makes it seem as if AJ was delayed in being surprised, which doesn't make any sense.

Anyway, I look forward to more.

Good stuff, man. I can really feel the weight of the loss on Twilight's shoulders.

Quick suggestion: "a flash of light blue landed less than a foot in front her face. 'APPLEJACK! Rarity or Twilight is in trouble and they’re at the hospital! Come on, we need to make sure they’re okay!' Rainbow said as fast as she could. The sudden appearance of her friend caused the cowpony to jump back a few feet and yell in surprise."

could probably be written better as

"a flash of light blue landed less than a foot in front her face. The sudden appearance of her friend caused the cowpony to jump back a few feet and yell in surprise. 'APPLEJACK! Rarity or Twilight is in trouble and they’re at the hospital! Come on, we need to make sure they’re okay!' Rainbow said as fast as she could."

Because the first way makes it seem as if AJ was delayed in being surprised, which doesn't make any sense.

Anyway, I look forward to more.

:raritycry::raritydespair::fluttershysad:

WHY????? WHY!!!!!!!!?

That's some detailed description about the cardiac arrest stuff. Totally hit the spot :facehoof:

Ah crap wrong emoticon :twilightoops:

good heavens just look at the time THE END:trollestia:

i know bad joke now you can kill me

Update....PLLLLZZZZZZ

Update plox

When Rarity survived I was :raritystarry:

Then by the end of this chapter I was :applecry:

When Twilight tells the girls, I will clearly be :fluttercry: :raritycry: :raritydespair: :pinkiesad2:

oh i dont even know if i wanna read the other pony reactions:fluttercry:

I want to find out what happens at the end. This story is just so engaging, I can't be left sitting at a standstill in front of a wall of sadness. It makes me sad that no one but Twilight and Rarity's family know about Rarity's death. I want to see how they overcome this horrible atmosphere. No rush, just have the story complete. :fluttercry:

For everyone waiting patiently:

Update will be out tomorrow afternoon. My prereader decided to take the holiday off :/ but she is working at it as i type this. I'm very sorry for the delay everybody. Chapter 4 is also being typed up right now. i promise the weekend on that one, be it through her or my editing!!!

I have never cried so much to any kind of media...... There is not much more to say.

Manly tears were shed..

Beautiful. (sob) What happens now ?

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