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Discord returns and unleashes a deadly laughing gas onto Manehattan. When Rarity becomes a victim of this scheme, it becomes a race against time for Mare-Do-Well to stop Discord before the entire city becomes as crazy and chaotic as the draconequus himself.

My fourth Mare-Do-Well re-write of a classic Batman: The Animated Series episode. Here are the rest of them:

Hearth's Warming with Discord

Nothing to Fear...

Thorny Rose

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I was only intending to give this a quick read to see if it should go on my Read Later list but I ended up finishing it. You caught and maintained my attention from the very beginning all the way through. I have not seen the Batman episode so the story was a surprise to me and I really enjoyed your version of it.
Even though this is an alternate universe with noticeable differences from FiM, you kept it consistent so it was believable and blended the Batman crossover seamlessly. You showed Discord as a great Joker, not holding back on the amount of villainous puns. It was a fun story but one serious enough for me to keep reading with interest.
The structure is concise, with no unnecessary scenes. I liked how you bookended the action with Rarity's and Twilight's April Foal's jokes in the mansion.
Good work!

"aquatic transformation" :rainbowlaugh:
In all seriousness though, very nice. Not my favorite Joker episode, but still good.
Still can't wait for Nightmare/ Two-Face and Dr. Whooves/ Clock King episodes.:twilightangry2:
Also, these episodes are all on the first disc of the BtAS V. 1 that I have, so are you going to do the Underdwellers (the Sewer King)?:duck:

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:EEEEEEEE!!!!!! OH THIS SO MADE MY DAY!!!! And I don't think I've seen this episode before... Seeing as how I as going "WHO'S THIS ASSHOLE?!?!!" once you mentioned the new Draconiquis... Not in a bad way just a confused way. And I actually love how you make it so that Discord treat's his relationship with Pinkie Pie the same way that the Joker does with Harley...
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:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: So Does that mean he HITS her?!!?!?

Sorry for the late reply, folks. My Internet shorted out on Tuesday afternoon thanks to the rainstorms on the East Coast, and I just got it back. Thank you for your patience and I'm glad to know you all enjoyed this story.

1298186 Thanks for pointing that error out. Corrected. I'm doing the early in the episodes in their production order because it shows the development of Bruce's/Twilight's rogues gallery. At the beginning, they only fought crime bosses, with the occasional encounter with Joker/Discord and the Penguin/(SPOILER!), only to meet new supervillains with crazy gimmicks. However, I'm not really a fan of Underdwellers, so I'm skipping that episode and going straight to P.O.V., followed by The Forgotten, I've Got Mare-Do-Well in My Basement, Be a Clown, and the two-parter where Luna finally "snaps"...

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Does this answer your question?

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Shame. The Sewer King is probably one of Batman"s sickest foes.:pinkiecrazy:
But at least I know what to expect now.:raritywink:

1311195Ahhhh... The "But I Love Him" syndrome.... gets the girls every time.... Damn. Oh well true to character I suppose.

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Don't worry, she bounces.

Question WHEN WILL ON LEATHER WINGS BE RELEASED. you know the one with mare bat in it.

Hey there. I have to say I missed reading your stuff over on the site I first got to know you. :-D Anyway, you did an excellent job on your MDW-style versions of classic episodes of one of my favorite shows. The action, exchanges, emotional content, humor and wrap-ups were all well done in all the right places.

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