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Daring Do is a famous hero, with plenty of good friends and thousands of fans. Everything in her life seems to be going right. So why can't she be happy?

A Daring Do fanfiction about depression, which can happen to anypony. Inspired by "What Good Will Wishing Do?", from the 1986 My Little Pony movie.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

"What Good Will Wishing Do?" :applejackconfused:
My #1 belief is ponies didn't exist before friendship is magic :moustache:

At time of reading, this had exactly 0 likes. I've taken steps to rectify this :twilightsmile:

Anyways, so...story. Spoiler alert for those who haven't read this yet.

On a meta note, a lot of RD's writing here mirrors my own so much (and to an extent, mirrors the thought process behind Something Broken specifically) so much it's scary, right down to some very liberal character interpretation. As it is, the potential for a good story here...but it's incredibly short, and here the length speeds to it's own detriment. It doesn't feel like a whole lot was explored. I really do think you could have done more with this idea and ran with it. As it is, for a completed story it's very sparse and (fully aware I'm shooting myself in the foot here) it feels rushed to completion.

Wow. This is . . . intense. And sad. But really good, :twilightsmile:

Well... I don't know what to say about the first chapter, but the second chapter ending is magnificent, simply magnificent.
The story is short but touching. (At least for me)
Thanks. :twilightsmile:

Amazing.
Needs to be read by more people. Period.

This REALLY needs to be read by more people :-/

Ooh, this is quite nice. I never feel there's enough Daring on this site, and I like anything that tries to explore her character. I'm liking this different side to Do, and the songs. Very good!:twilightsmile:

:fluttercry: SO beautiful and sad! Well done.:fluttershysad:

Thank you for writing this.

5574994 Thank you for reading it! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

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