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Daring Do is a famous hero, with plenty of good friends and thousands of fans. Everything in her life seems to be going right. So why can't she be happy?
A Daring Do fanfiction about depression, which can happen to anypony. Inspired by "What Good Will Wishing Do?", from the 1986 My Little Pony movie.
At time of reading, this had exactly 0 likes. I've taken steps to rectify this 
Anyways, so...story. Spoiler alert for those who haven't read this yet.
On a meta note, a lot of RD's writing here mirrors my own so much (and to an extent, mirrors the thought process behind Something Broken specifically) so much it's scary, right down to some very liberal character interpretation. As it is, the potential for a good story here...but it's incredibly short, and here the length speeds to it's own detriment. It doesn't feel like a whole lot was explored. I really do think you could have done more with this idea and ran with it. As it is, for a completed story it's very sparse and (fully aware I'm shooting myself in the foot here) it feels rushed to completion.
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