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" “You will probably be arrested several crimes, and be brought in court,” Twilight explained. “Or even worse, banished without a trial,” Twilight continued, still staring at me. “If I were you, I would stay here nicely and await your fate,” " Why would Twilight say something so horrible and callous to a filly?
It needs a lot of work.
I'm not gonna lie, but it had potential.
A rewrite would do this story a world of good, I would love to see more of dinkys adventures.
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