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No longer updating stories. It's been a good run guys.

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Major props to UrbanHawk for the new cover pic! Check him out, he's awesome.

Told in Fluttershy's PoV.

Ten years. Ten years was all it took for Fluttershy's life to fall apart. She's living alone, her friends are farther than distant, her one and only love is married to another mare with kids, and she's been practically forgotten by the entire world. She's wondering if life is really worth it, if she would ever get her happy ending.

But life, apparently, has a very twisted sense of humor. All it took was one day to push her over the edge.

More Info:
--Shipping: One-Sided Fluttermac (Guess which side, genius)
--Contains minor sexual themes, minor language, dark plot (no, not that kind), implied suicidal thoughts, implied death, lots of Fluttersadness.

Author's Note
I know this story is very, very different from what I usually write. The inspiration for this story came from my own life that hasn't been agreeing with me lately. Here's hoping to things get better.

Edit
This fanfic officially has its own fanfic? Fanfiception.
Time Moves On by ZekeThePony

Edit 2
Now with a TVtropes page. This is easily my greatest accomplishment in my life. Could use a little work guys...
TVtropes is watching you...

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Comments ( 16 )

Soshite, toki wa ugoki desu.

Sorry, I'm a bad person.

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Poor Fluttershy. I don't even like her that much, but had my heart aching. :fluttercry:
Sad thing is, I can understand what she's going through.

On a happier note, well done. 'Tis a good story.

OH GOD WHY

I JUST DIED IN THE INSIDE

WHYYYYYYY


I AM IN TEARS RIGHT NOW

SWEET MOTHER OF CELESTIA THIS IS THE SADDEST STORY I'VE EVER READ. HOW COULD :eeyup: NOT :heart: THIS :fluttershysad: WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: But seroiusly this is really good

Wow, this is seriously the saddest story I've ever read in my life (well, asides from MLD). I loved everything about this; the story was VERY well-written, it never got jumpy or hard to understand, and 1st Person View Narrative of Fluttershy was just amazing (strong emotions, personality). I just wish there was a little more closure, like details on how she went (its gotta be something poetic though).

Seriously, great work. I haven't cried in quite awhile :applecry:

And btw....

ONLY 5 COMMENTS SO FAR!?! WTF PEOPLE :ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused:

Nah a story this good is gonna hit mainstream soon, just you wait :pinkiehappy:

Very well written, very emotional and it hit me right in the feels. Though it didn't quite hit the same chord as MLD did for me.
Very well done though :)

Fluttershy is my favorite Pony, I wish I could've been there for her :fluttercry:

Forever Alo- Ow, god, my teeth!

Great story, really tugged on the heartstrings.

right in the feels!:applecry: not quite MLD, but pretty damn close:fluttercry:

That was one of the saddest Fluttershy stories I've ever heard. Bravo to the creator of this story. Bravo. Very, very nice job :) :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Thats too sad I can not believe you would... You killed me

I like the changes you've made they make the story look alot more professional.

Good luck on your future writing .:twilightsmile:

OMG!! So sad! :applecry: I hope you get ,000000000,0000000000,00000 watchers.

Saddest story I've ever read. :fluttercry: I went looking for a good cry and definitely found it. You are a genius!

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