Tis good sir, and I would hope that you continue it.

I came here from Azurini

>>12890751289075 me to

Thank you, Azurini, you magnificent person, even though the story has yet to be approved

I look forward to seeing more of this.  There is quite a bit of potential to be seen here, and I do think that it is quite well written.

I have a ghost cat!

His names Boo!

I can't sleep, so I thought why not comment?

Have some Ditzy for creative encouragement, because I wan't to see MOAR.

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I am pleased with this story. As the prince of all saiyans, I demand more.

Please.

Hope to see more in the future looks promising

In b4 this gets featured.

And it will, because it's great!

This is wonderful! I'm certain this will end up in the feature box, so here. I give you a mustache spike-

THE LITTLE CHANGELING LOOKS SO CUTE

Ya'll got yerselves a spambot. DELETE THAT MOFO!

i demand a continuation

>>12928151292815

I demand your likeness!

I demand a monocle to go with that. But apparently there isn't one... lol

THAT IS SO CUUUUUUTUUUTTTHJDHGRHGUHGU:RNGRHGOP|RH|G:OICVN@wsPI'FFD

Keep up the good work! Here's something I spotted for you to fix.

"The air of tranquility was suddenly broken by a low growl. Cadance could feel it in her gut."

>>12941101294110

Thank you kindly for pointing that out. I write another story involving Princess Cadance and I might have gotten a teeny bit too used to typing Cadance all the time

All hail Prince Ditto!

So if I understand correctly, there are no genders, just queen and not queen for changelings? Or is it female queen and not queen.

Second to last paragraph second sentence:

"Cadance could feel it in her gut"...Cadance? Where'd she come from?

Edit: Brotato caught it nvm.

The cover is so cute

Welp, I'm enjoying and following this, lol.

congrats, you got a subscriber!

>>12941481294148

That happens. I'm not sure if you noticed, but I write another story as well involving Princess Cadance, and I tend to mistake the two as I write

OOPS!

To anyone who finds that the 2nd chapter has been republished again, that was entirely my fault! A misclick occurred when I reached up to click the edit button to finish off edits, and I accidently clicked the unpublish button, then had to click the publish button once again to make sure that nothing was lost.

My apologies to whom it may concern

Shining Armor is the father isn't he?

>>12960301296030 That was my first thought too.

Dear Twilight Sparkle

Congratulations, you're an Aunt.  Please pass the word on to your brother, the father.  It should help make up for him not informing you about the wedding.

Sincerely

Princess Chrysalis

PS: I'm registered for Baby Shower gifts at J.C. Bitsies.  No need for formula, just send love.

>>12988911298891

I daw'd

Goddamnit! Why!?!? Why can' I read SLOWER so I can enjoy the godDAMN CHAPTERS!

>>13001521300152

I guess Shining is the dad?

So Chrysalis is Celestia and Luna's half sister? I want to know more!

This.  IS.  ADORABLE!!  XD

tis be good, I await for more chapters!!

Well, this is going great! I really love what you are doing with this. I've always loved Chrsyalis, and hoped that she would turn out good in a number of fanfics(I'm pretty sure she has in about a million, but this is the first one I've read, so my hat goes off to you, good sir or ma'am). I have no suggestions, except that you should give me all the other chapters right now. Please?

Celestia?

D'aaaaw, I nominate Chrysalis for best mother.

Though what could she have planned that's so bad that it could end her rule?  

>>13050721305072 Most likely she is going to try and work with the Princesses or the Mane six

This is something I keep looking forward to. great job!

>>13055941305594

Not to spoil anything, but no. That is far too cliche for this story and I would never go near such a thing.

yay another chapter

>>13056891305689

Which brings me back to wondering what she could have in mind.

Are you kidding Chrissy? How can you still be hungry when there's enough motherly love coming from you to populate a small island nation? Talk about missing the point.

for a moment i though she was goin to fed from her son, good thing she didn't.

that is awesome, and I'm going on to the next chapters.

I approve of this. Need moar.

I'm intrigued as to the solution that Chrysalis came up with. I very much look forward to more.

>>13175451317545

that's actually what I was thinking as well, and I'm also glad that she didn't. I'd have had a serious sad if she would have...

Well, this took a turn to the dark. This isn't gonna end well.