It was obvious. One-shots with these kinds of twists are very common on this site.

HAH! Moonpies. I don't even know what they are. Actually, I do. They suck.

How does she like those things?

Oh, and the story was good. Sounds familiar, though. Like the time Twilight went to the Dentist for the first time.

Hmmmm... Pie.....

I remember the good days when they were "moon pies". Now it's "marshmallow pies". mmmmmmmm

Ah, it's another "What a twist!" one shot.

Common, nothing special, but always a bit of fun.

>>13700711370071try putting them in the microwave for about ten seconds.  Just long enough to get them warm and soft you have to eat it with a fork but its awesome!

Why is it always Princess Luna that fic-writers show as being obsessed with newfangled sweets? I mean yeah, she was on the moon for 1000 years, but why no other pony? I still liked this story; it's funny.

Completely predictable , BUT very well written so this still deserves a thumbs-up just for that . Maybe a different kind of twist next time?

Hah! Third paragraph in I called moon pies! Pretty predictable but decent. It was cute when Luna stuck her head out of the covers :)

... Why would Luna feel guilty about eating a moon pie?

Seriously, the explanation behind that would make a way more interesting story than this tired joke.

Wow! I was waiting for it to get more naughty til the very end... and after I knew the story was over I scrolled just to make sure. Really a great story.

HAHA!   I knew that Luna was not doing what everyone thought she was doing!.......good stuff.

this needs to be featured!

I am too familiar with these kind of one-shots. They are not as clever. Enjoyable read, mind you, just not as clever when there are a bunch of these all around the site.

Still wingboner'ed.

LOL

I love it. It looked like you were going to subvert the Innocent Innuendo only to double subvert it right at the end.

Whaaat a tweest.

That was awesome!

I will only ignore what the picture and description says and read it. Later...

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*adopts sarcastic voice* Didn't see that coming from a mile away. But still, enjoyable.

save for a single half eaten 'Moon Pie'.

I even predicted the moon pie

Another short story with a predictable twist.

Hm.

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>>13709021370902 Oh hi there

yum

>>13709131370913

I miss your sickly yellow pony picture.

Wait - why are you reading this!? RUN AWAY!

just once id like to read a story like this and not have the twist ending

Though i saw it coming from a mile away, it was still kinda funny

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Oh hey lets check out how bridge's story is going.

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Oh my God... 800 views and it's still not all the way through the feed. Holy necrosis, son. I thought this would do well, but damn.

On a side note: I'm surprised that the twist was so obvious to everyone. I saw it coming a mile away, sure, but I see that in a lot of one-shots that are featured. I thought people wouldn't have predicted it. Maybe I should have given the community's intelligence more credit.

>>13702381370238 maybe because there is an entire holiday dedicated to giving candy to a statue of her former (evil) self?

I actually had no idea the twist was coming...

Good story!  

I kept thinking to myself "This sounds so dirty, but it's not gonna be what I think... right? Yeah, rated Teen... Crap, that would cover suggested royal clopping..."

Nice way of cute-ifying Luna, by the way

wut the ...

>>13711151371115

FEATURED!!!  

Thanks a bundle with the editing BTW!

~Bridge

I'd eat a Moon Pie... just say'in.

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>>13709021370902

Well I'm quite new here and got trolled by Midway Bridge.

>>13700711370071  

Moonpies = Same thing as a creampie, except in the butt.

And then it turns out Luna eats moon pies while clopping.

>>13713261371326

Now now. It's a good story, don't get me wrong.

I'm glad you liked it.

There are, however, a lot of very similarly worded and deceptive tales that this is certainly a product of.

The writing in this, mind, is much better than most. Puts it up in the higher echelon. Also proves who the more popular princess is too - I don't think Celestia would garner this much fanfare.

>>13709021370902

It would have been a better twist if she had been masturbating.

>>13714821371482

HA! EXACTLY!

Damn you, tags. DAMN YOU ALL TO HELL! How can you put a twist on something that basically HAS to state,"this isn't what you think"?

So I guess that lends to the frustration.

Too all who are thinking about posting something about how predictable the plot is...  yes I know it was predictable, but aren't the actual episodes kind of predictable too?  It's not  like this kind of story is completely overdone

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/sarcasm

I just had such a blast writing this. And if you enjoyed reading it, I think that's all that matters right?

~Bridge

from the pic i thought it would be wearing pants.

>>13715371371537

Hey, all that really matters is you enjoyed it.

That, and it's bound for the featured Box.

YOU = WIN.

>>13715581371558

Perhaps your right.  But having a bunch a favorites as a real pick me up after a long day is pretty nice too.  

And this is how we know Equestria is in the northern section of whatever planet it's on.  (Had it been southern, Luna would have washed down that Moon Pie with a proper RC Cola.)

Not bad, I can definitely tell it had an editor. For a second I thought the twist was that Luna was watching soap operas.

Still, I feel like Hoofin' It did this joke better.

I wouldn't mind eating Luna's moon pie.

>>13716331371633  Yeah I drew a bit inspiration from that story.  It was definitely written with a better pace and delivery of the punchline.  And it certainly won't fade away like my story.  But the fact is, I'm proud to have my work compared to "Hoofin' it".

Haha this is freaking awesome!!!!!!

We really need a Twistfic that starts off as a Mane Six or Celestial Sister eating something/playing a game turn into clopping.

Or we could just read this (and all the rest of them) backwards....

*wingboner* Dat dayum image! Also, yeah, old joke, but still a good one.

Nothing terribly original, but well written.

>>13715371371537 ...So we're discussing predictable plots, something white on Luna's face, and secret indulgences?

.... Eh, I can work with this. *un ZIP!* :D I kid, I kid.

As Hitchcock said, "There is no terror in the bang, only in the anticipation of it."

That we know, or at least have a good idea of, what is going to happen doesn't take away from the story as long as the writer still manages to leave us waiting, wanting, needing to actually hear the gun go off.

>>13700661370066 Hey! He got me alright! I was sure it was going to be some super embarrassing but insanely comfortable outfit. Tasty tasty Moon Pies never crossed my mind. Everyone knows these are going to be a twist, the point to these is to make people expect the wrong twist and this had nothing to indicate eating sweets.

>>13716221371622 Bah!... What the hell, 'Humbug!' too. Moon Pie, a smoke, and a Coke.... Now that's where it's at!

Hahahaha! I love these.

hahaha oh, Luna! You naughty filly

Just don't grow up with an addiction like your sister!

>>13702431370243

>>13702381370238

IKR?

Yes, it was obvious there was a twist, but that doesn't detract from the ending. The fun is in trying to figure out what the twist was, and this one earned a chuckle.

>>13716331371633

I can tell it had an editor

Well, thank you sir, but I only did a little sentence restructuring here and there.

At this point, having seen so many stories like this, I'd honestly be more surprised if all of the sexual innuendo turned out to actually be talking about sex.

me: oh hey this looks cool.

*get's half- way through*

there is no way he can turn this around

*reads end*

...didn't see that comming

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Heh, I so saw that one coming

It was obvious this was going to happen. I've seen plenty of fanfics like this.

I have read enough of these kind of stories to have seen that coming from the start. I'm terrible.

>>13703911370391 The same reason Celestia would feel guilty about the whole cake thing?

This joke is really old and worn out.

I knew I expected a red herring since it was a one shot, but secretly inside I wished the twist of the story was that there was no twist. However, you got my hopes up and it turned out to be the red herring after all

>>13701301370130 I had one a few days ago and it was still called a moonpie, you sure you're not thinking of some knock off brand? Admittedly it was different to what I remember, did they always come in double layers of marshmallow between three layers of the chocolate stuff?

that was hilarious, and a real good dirty mind test.

>>13700711370071 she's the Princess of the NIGHT, she controls the MOON. WHAT ELSE WOULD HER FAVORITE SNACK BE?!? It's so shocking obvious! lol

LOL, Predictable but funny

I'd eat her moon pie.

>>13722061372206Maybe it was a special kind, because typical moon pies have only one layer of marshmallow. And come to think of it, maybe my mom did buy knock-offs.

Freakin brilliant mate!

>>13724101372410 Mahaps that was implied?

>>13725991372599

But of course.

People are saps for these one-shot stories.

>>13703911370391  Because they're named after her.  It's like eating herself out symbolically!  At least, that's how us perverts describe it.  

I saw this comming a mile away. Wait... If she was actually... And you thought... No twist...

Oh look, another clop-tease fic...this totally hasn't already been done a million times, nope.

The answer to pie is always yes.

hmm. people are very confident it's pie. I prefer the other alternative in my mind~ Very arousing~

I kiss my pillow at night!

(After several minutes later.)

OH GOD WHY DID i SAY THAT!?

Edit: Oh of course, she was eating a moon pie. And you still managed to make me keep smiling to the very end.

One Chaotic Favorite coming up.

>>13716741371674

Says that user named, "Brutalassmaster."

No, but, really... The topic of the story is actually quite obvious. It is a question that has plagued the brony community since the very first season. Each time our beloved ponies appear, we ask ourselves this question, though we do not ask each other. It is a shameful thing, it would seem, to share this secret question with each other, let alone other people. It eats away at us, gnawing at our gray matter, begging to be answered. It is the question that keeps you up at night, that challenges all your thoughts and feelings, that makes you go outside for a walk in the night time to decide just what kind of person you truly are...

"Does Luna's moon pie taste like a moon pie?"

Totally saw this coming. My guess was either eating Moon Pies or dancing in a tutu (guessed from the cover pic). Reminds me of the story called "Royal Regalia", in which the line was blurred because a soldier had the same coat color as Celestia, and was caught wearing her jewelry. Celestia told him to take it off, so the story described that in vivid detail, but failed to mention that the fur underneath belonged to the guard. O lol.

Random but sadly heavily used, rather well this time though.

You got a like.

While completely enjoyable, and very fun to read, the ending was like a giant ant tormenting a sugar cellar in a remote smugglers town. As my GM said when I rolled for a reaction save, I could see it coming like an M. Night Shayamalan plot twist.

As I said, though, it was still a good story.

Predictable, but fantastic nonetheless. :)

Innuendo + Luna = feature.

I love Moon Pies... i woulda joined her!

I knew it wasn't what it looked like, but I expected some late night calculations and research

Meh.

xD I knew it wasn't the expected "clopping" but I was still trying to see if there were any clues to tell me what she was up to BEFORE it was told at the end xD

I DIED IN THe END!!! xD

Meh. I've read better "seems dirty, but with an innocent twist" stories.

I'll say this, though -- if "Moon Pie" isn't the fanon name for the Luna/Pinkie ship, it should be.