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Earth has been reduced to dust and echoes. A scientist named Gordon Freeman must save it from impending doom. Dr. Kleiner recreates the teleporter, but with odd results. Very odd, and colorful results
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this is promising i always had the prospect of Gordon coming to equestria after Episode 2 when he faints G-man teleports Gordon to Equestria, but i thought that the equestria Gordon was going into was a equestria where the combine invaded, as the combine are from another dimension I think. well my whole Gordon goes to equestria idea has a few holes in it but is none of the less a good idea of how Gordon comes to equestria. A last note this has alot of promise to be good but Gordon CANNOT TALK instead write what Gordon Freeman is thinking
this story is good so far keep up the great work 
, and I haven't even read it yet.!
Forgive a silly comment, but I was under the impression that the Combine looked nothing like humans. So far as I know, the only "true" Combine we've seen in the games have been the Advisers from Episodes 1 and 2, and the only other Combine sub-species that have gotten any development has been the Vortigaunts (Unless you want to count the mechanically enhanced species, such as the air-ships and Striders).
Of course, if you mean that your version of the true Combine (Which may factor very heavily into your story, for all I know) are humanoid, then never mind.
Anyway, I don't really have that much to say about the actual intro; as you pointed out it's quite short. A few spelling errors are apparent, mostly your spelling of Prospect. Otherwise, things seem to be fine, in terms of mechanics. Good luck.
>>84681 No no no! Thats how Prospect is spelled in the game! http://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CCoQFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fhalf-life.wikia.com%2Fwiki%2FNova_Prospekt&ei=FFn1Tqv1G_DUiAL22dWMDQ&usg=AFQjCNHWUPlDbvb4nNLwZg0vtRi5x6lgqg
My internet didn't 
want to publish it I guess lol I thought it went through, but I checked today and it didn't 
<--- thats the closest face to gmans face so its justified. Also good story!
me :P
SO Gordon's teleport gets messed up another way good idea to make sure story still goes smooth so I'm just going to guess that Gordon still gets messed up in the teleport and appears outside Kleiner's lab if that doesn't happen their is going to be some differences in story-line, anyway great chapter keep up the great work
>>260373 Dont... even 
I've been working NONstop on this ALL day just to get it very, very perfect and not to mention working on my other story in which I'm late in publishing. Don't worry, I'll try to do a little every day to make them just that much longer. It's almost to 2,000 wut are you talkin 'bout
I can just imagine what the Overwatch dispatcher would say upon discovering the ponies...
"Attention all ground protection teams. Sentient non-humanoid life forms detected in this block. Respond, isolate, inquire."
Anyway... Is this just going to be a retelling of the story, with the only difference being that Freeman is followed by our sweet little equines, or are you going to take off on a whole new storyline? Are you going to even tell me?
Oh, and I also spotted a little grammatical error:
"Alright, Barney. You're turn." Issac grinned.
It should be your. Otherwise, you're doing a good job. Can't wait for the next update
>>260885 If you noticed, Lamarr never actually jumped in the vents, but in Kleiner's arms. So Gordon never actually was found outside of Kleiner's lab, therefore making the story so much different in every way possible. He's like an hour behind what the regular hl2 would be. 
this is going to be interesting twilight is going to want to ask Gordon soo many questions like why did you just kill that person why are you doing this and that? and Gordon wont be able to say a thing I think twilight is going to drive Gordon insane by the end of this 
, anyway great chapter keep up the great work
I just have one comment:
At the beginning, it sounded like you wanted to tell the story from the humans' point of view. You mentioned Twilight's name before she lets them know who they are. Did you want to keep her name hidden until she revealed it? Did my question make sense at all? The lines I am referring to:
"Um-" Twilight grew very nervous. "We come- In peace?"
"We're ponies, from Equestria." Twilight stated bluntly, she wanted out and to go home.
cant wait till zombies! oh, wait for the picture to load.....
Image: http://www.blackmesasource.com/img/loading.gifthere we go....
Image: http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m06dy6gZ9V1qcb7k0o1_400.gifZOMGS!
(if you have played half life 2, then this is not disturbing) YABBA!
===> I WANT TO PREREAD! 
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