Earth has been reduced to dust and echoes. A scientist named Gordon Freeman must save it from impending doom. Dr. Kleiner recreates the teleporter, but with odd results. Very odd, and colorful results
MLP X HL2
That tragedy tag is deterring.... But it's half-life.
If Gordon talks, it's gonna destroy everything @_@
I NEED FUCKING MORE RIGHT FUCKING NOW AAAHHHHHHHH HL2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is promising i always had the prospect of Gordon coming to equestria after Episode 2 when he faints G-man teleports Gordon to Equestria, but i thought that the equestria Gordon was going into was a equestria where the combine invaded, as the combine are from another dimension I think. well my whole Gordon goes to equestria idea has a few holes in it but is none of the less a good idea of how Gordon comes to equestria. A last note this has alot of promise to be good but Gordon CANNOT TALK instead write what Gordon Freeman is thinking
this story is good so far keep up the great work
>>8446084460 You don't understand... The ponies come to earth. Its backwards. Pony on earth story.
Still waiting for Valve to release HL2-Ep_3. This has please me , and I haven't even read it yet.!
CROWBARS AND PONIES!
Forgive a silly comment, but I was under the impression that the Combine looked nothing like humans. So far as I know, the only "true" Combine we've seen in the games have been the Advisers from Episodes 1 and 2, and the only other Combine sub-species that have gotten any development has been the Vortigaunts (Unless you want to count the mechanically enhanced species, such as the air-ships and Striders).
Of course, if you mean that your version of the true Combine (Which may factor very heavily into your story, for all I know) are humanoid, then never mind.
Anyway, I don't really have that much to say about the actual intro; as you pointed out it's quite short. A few spelling errors are apparent, mostly your spelling of Prospect. Otherwise, things seem to be fine, in terms of mechanics. Good luck.
>>8468184681 No no no! Thats how Prospect is spelled in the game! http://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CCoQFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fhalf-life.wikia.com%2Fwiki%2FNova_Prospekt&ei=FFn1Tqv1G_DUiAL22dWMDQ&usg=AFQjCNHWUPlDbvb4nNLwZg0vtRi5x6lgqg
>>8468984689 So it is. My mistake; guess it's been too long since I stepped into the Hazard Suit, huh?
Hm, I must've not paid attention very much while playing the game, because I thought that the Combine were humans, not aliens... The more you know!
I wrote a Half-Life MLP fanfic
>>8478884788 Awesome. Up for some game?
>>8479184791 Depends on what you mean by that :P
>>8484084840 ehh Your good
Looks like this story is...
Half passed amazing.
>>8499684996 So glad you lieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek it
>>110732110732 Actually, this should have been publish like a week ago My internet didn't want to publish it I guess lol I thought it went through, but I checked today and it didn't
>>110737110737 Then I guess next one is comin' shortly after?
>>110743110743 Haven't even got a name for the next chapter yet xD Working on my Spider-Man sequel.
>>110745110745 I can tell ya some cool names, but need to know, if that chapter contains that, what I'm thinkin' of...
My favourite games series + pony
The right ponies in the wrong place can make all the differance in the world <--- thats the closest face to gmans face so its justified. Also good story!
oh I love half-life. I just replayed the entire series not long ago.
>>110986110986 Me too! Big fan
Me likey. More? DO WANT!
*Ahem* But really, this is good. I like how much detail you're putting into this. Keep it up...
Im gong to take a wild guess and ask, but is Opalescence...."that" cat?
I always kinda thought that at the end of episode 3 (or whenever hl ends) alyx would turn to Gordon and say something like, we did it. Then he would just say yes and teh internets would asplode
Why you no update?
>>242234242234 I will soon this week
Full of win. I can't wait for next chapter. I can't wait for the ponys to arrive. BTW how did you get pubished?
>>256234256234 How does everyone else get things published? lol
>>258061258061 No. Not like that. I mean it still dosn't have ponies in it. It has too to pass moderation. I still can't wait for 2nd chapter!
>>259314259314 I guess the mods just me :P
but i am liking this story can't what for next update.
This is pretty good.
Oh CHRIST. Her teleportation ended up getting looped together with Gordon's teleport, so... Yeah. The ponies just got sucked through to Earth. That's... Nice, I guess.
SO Gordon's teleport gets messed up another way good idea to make sure story still goes smooth so I'm just going to guess that Gordon still gets messed up in the teleport and appears outside Kleiner's lab if that doesn't happen their is going to be some differences in story-line, anyway great chapter keep up the great work
>>259952259952 Thanks :3
>>260070260070 Lol yeah
>>260127260127 Yeah, as you noticed, Lamarr never jumped in the vents!
I like this but the chapters are too short.
>>260373260373 Dont... even
I've been working NONstop on this ALL day just to get it very, very perfect and not to mention working on my other story in which I'm late in publishing. Don't worry, I'll try to do a little every day to make them just that much longer. It's almost to 2,000 wut are you talkin 'bout
>>260383260383 I'm sorry if I offended you, but I feel like more could have been done in this chapter.
I can just imagine what the Overwatch dispatcher would say upon discovering the ponies...
"Attention all ground protection teams. Sentient non-humanoid life forms detected in this block. Respond, isolate, inquire."
Anyway... Is this just going to be a retelling of the story, with the only difference being that Freeman is followed by our sweet little equines, or are you going to take off on a whole new storyline? Are you going to even tell me?
Oh, and I also spotted a little grammatical error:
"Alright, Barney. You're turn." Issac grinned.
It should be your. Otherwise, you're doing a good job. Can't wait for the next update
Oh geez it's about to go down!
>>260885260885 If you noticed, Lamarr never actually jumped in the vents, but in Kleiner's arms. So Gordon never actually was found outside of Kleiner's lab, therefore making the story so much different in every way possible. He's like an hour behind what the regular hl2 would be.
I noticed that...
I was just asking if Gordon would simply be babysitting the six ponies as he runs around kicking Combine and Zombie rear end...
Aw crap! CLIFFHANGER ENDING!!! I could imagine barney. "Would you look at that?" (The line of barney from the game when he sees you)
I can't wait for 3rd chapter!
>>263679263679 :P Hey, I run off of what people say in the comments. Suggestions? Yes.
>>263358263358 Well I honestly really don't want to spoil this, because it's a major reason I created the story. I try to make my stories as realistic as possible... So what do you think he would do?
Ok, ok... I see what you mean...
Did you finish writing the story. Did we make enough comments? I want MOAR!!!!!!!!!
>>264136264136 Lol, I love the support, yes. You guys keep posting, I'll keep updating. But... I just updated yesterday :P I have more than one story to work on you know. Check them out, maybe you'll like them? I'll work on it this week! Except something friday.
Woohoo! Ponies experiencing a distopia! Man, the fun they're gonna have. I'm jealous.
Anyway, this fic is win.
>>272760272760 Thank you so very much! :D New chapter coming very very soon!
needs more spiderman
>>280613280613 Omfg, I love you.
never even read the despription iknew that if this had half life in it it was gonna be good no great i gonna play my favorite dubstep song and read ill do another comment when im finshed
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Duvn9GCBkRQ pefect thing to read this to
FREAKING EPIC YOU RULE
>>284141284141>>284100284100>>284089284089 Thanks! You rule too for being so awesome
Time for Gordon to do what he does. CROWBAR CROWBAR CROWBAR!!!
this is going to be interesting twilight is going to want to ask Gordon soo many questions like why did you just kill that person why are you doing this and that? and Gordon wont be able to say a thing I think twilight is going to drive Gordon insane by the end of this , anyway great chapter keep up the great work
I just have one comment:
At the beginning, it sounded like you wanted to tell the story from the humans' point of view. You mentioned Twilight's name before she lets them know who they are. Did you want to keep her name hidden until she revealed it? Did my question make sense at all? The lines I am referring to:
"Um-" Twilight grew very nervous. "We come- In peace?"
"We're ponies, from Equestria." Twilight stated bluntly, she wanted out and to go home.
Awesome story half life with mlp genious
Man, you had an amazing idea mixing ponies and HL together in a fanfic. This makes me want to play HL2 once again. Know what? I'm actually going to play it
CROWBAR! I was imaging when dash said "I an't afriaid of no alien!" Of gordon saying (if he could talk) saying "how bout a crowbar?"
NOW ONWARD TO FREEDOM! AND CROWBAR!
>>289045289045>>286994286994 Why thank you
>>289148289148 Just wow Ponies in Half life Just wow it just fits wow (i said that alot when reading this).
Your fellow soon to crossover maker-Muxix311
EPIC. the first half life 2 and my little pony crossover. honestly, when i searched "half life", i didnt really expect anything to pop up, but something popped up!!! automatic track
emoticons ability, ACTIVATE!!!!
*malfunction* heres the right ones good luck on the story!!!
>>296555296555>>296508296508 Thanks and lmfao emoticons
>>295271295271 Just wow, thanks wow.
i would love to pre-read the chpaters
but sadly, i have school, and only available (most the time) on the weekends. if i can "pre-read" the chapters, please pm me. thank you!!
haha, didnt even notice that all of the mane six on the emoticons are up there(on teh happy one :D)
and then Gordon x Twilight became relavent
>>298652298652 You and you're shipping.
Barney x Lamarr
it's a love-hate relationship.
Lamarr would hump Barney's head alllll niiiight looooong
>>302973302973 alright enough
enough of head crab on human action? I gueeeeess
awesome chapter :D
Yeah, shipment of win just came in; I'll leave it here.
awesome story!!! keep up the good work!. (i also think, besides all teh ponys going back to there universe when they all get to the other lab, i think they shoud decide to stay and help them free city 17!)
Crowbar! I did notice one thing and that was the citizen's lack of intrest of Twilight Sparkle. Also of the woman's lack of intrest, too. I would be suprised to see color in a colorless world full of pain. I did like everything else! Godspeed and goodluck!
>>313512313512 Actually, I did have that but cut it out because I don't want (Try not to add) any transitions, even though I could have done it.
cant wait till zombies! oh, wait for the picture to load.....
there we go....
(if you have played half life 2, then this is not disturbing) YABBA!
>>325726325726 MY ICING!!!!
I like how you made Gordon a mute but he 'talks' to twilight in his mind my magic( I can't spell what is called).
You need a pre-reader? I could do it for you.
You haven't seen Black Mesa. Noone else but Gordon, Eli, Issac and Barney have witnessed it. Stupid Metrocops
I should renmber Gordon's mind quote. If they want you killed- kill them. Really good chapter and I hope for more! Godspeed and goodluck!
===> I WANT TO PREREAD!
FUS RO DAH! ========
>>328345328345 Lol, made that quote myself. I think its going to be much more inspirational now.
Good story! What took so long though? Oh well all I want now is another chapter! GOOD LUCK! Your going to need it