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Deflare 2232

Joined September 2012
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    Deflare's Stories (2)

    • Luna's Night
      Luna is ready to become princess of the night again, but fears her subjects don't care.

      5,594 words · 1,004 views · 104 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Tank's Little Ponies
      Tortoises outlive ponies two or three times over. What does this mean for Tank?
      5,809 words · 392 views · 31 likes · 2 dislikes
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    Princess Luna is ready to take on her role as Princess of the Night once again upon the night of the winter solstice. She remains unhappy, though, for her subjects don't seem interested in what the night sky has to offer. Twilight Sparkle must take it upon herself to prove to the princess just how much Equestria loves the stars, and make this the best winter solstice ever.

    First Published
    15th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    15th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 28 )

    #1 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Loved it. There isn't much more to say, really. That was beautiful. Have a collection of emoticons.

    :rainbowkiss::ajsmug::yay::trollestia::moustache::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

    #2 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Day and night, night and day.  Neither truly exists without the other.  Now that's Harmony.

    If ever a fan concept deserved to be incorporated into canon, it's the Starry Night Festival.

    #3 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well done indeed. A treatment of Luna, her return, and the ponies reaction to her that I am very much in favor of. Looking forward to more of your writing.  

    #4 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    beautiful story :heart::heart:

    #5 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry::twilightsmile:

    Beautiful.

    Just plain beautiful.

    What an entrance.

    #6 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Mmm, this was lovely.

    #7 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wow that was amazing, you are a great author, good sir. Don't stop writing :twilightsmile:

    #8 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This could be an episode. I approve.

    #9 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Vary enjoyable. Thanks for writing this.

    #10 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Awesome. Just, awesome. Have a moustache.:moustache:

    #11 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    “Twilight?”

    “Yes, Rainbow Dash?”

    “Did Princess Luna just carve our cutie marks into the moon?”

    “Yes she did.”

    “By crashing, like, a ton of meteors into it?”

    “Yup.”

    “...Best. Starry. Night. Festival. EVER.”

    I loved it. This story was sweet, emotional, and completely brilliant.

    #12 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1282024

    HASBRO, MAKE IT HAPPEN!!!!

    #13 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Brilliant

    #14 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1283517

    Only problem is that they'd have to shift a ton of stuff for a good episode, thanks to media differences.

    Still: Yeah, that 'Best. Starry Night Festival. Ever.' Comment was solid gold.

    #15 · 35w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well done! Bonus points for keeping on topic and not letting it become a TwiLuna shipfic - though I wouldn't mind that as the Epilogue, of course.

    Two small corrections:

    Well, this is right embarrassing,  - Missing the opening quote before 'Well'.

    Pinky Pie, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash all backed up their friends - Should be "Pinkie". I had to look it up at Hubworld myself, just to be sure.

    #16 · 35w, 4d ago · · ·
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    For some reason I had 'Also Sprach Zarathustra' in my mind when Luna began her celebration and the bombardment of the moon, it had a Space oddisey 2001 feeling to it.

    #17 · 35w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1289171

    Corrected; thank you.

    JAG
    #18 · 35w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Luna is Best Princess. Things like this story are the reason why.

    You've earned a moustache, sir. :moustache:

    #19 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That part where Luna cried? I also had tears going. It was a beautiful moment she greatly deserved.

    (...where's my Luna emotes, darn it?)

    #20 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Aaah! Seriously, this is one of the first Luna oneshots I've seen that wasn't... angsty. And it was amazing!

    I'm so happy right now. That was actually really amazing. Because I can totally understand her right from the start, but then ajkahfs that ending was brilliant.

    I agree with what quite a few other people are saying. This needs to happen!! This will forever be deeply entrenched in my headcanon.

    :yay:

    ~Dash

    #21 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Such a wonderful story. I've just finished it a second time, and I have no doubt there shall be more readings in my future. This is truly a masterpiece.

    You are a wonderful author, and I hope to see more from you.

    :ajsmug:

    #22 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    “...Best. Starry. Night. Festival. EVER.”

    -Yes. :rainbowkiss:

    >>1280069

    I believe that it makes SO much sense that they need not include it in the show unless they have some particular use for it plot-wise. It can be assumed to exist until and unless proven otherwise.

    >>1492116

    If I might make so bold as to suggest my own Scratching a Diamond I think that you will find it worth the amount of time that its nine-hundred-odd words will require.

    #23 · 25w, 10h ago · · ·
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    This is one of the best fanfics on this site, and its a shame no one has read it :fluttercry:

    #24 · 25w, 4h ago · · ·
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    :twilightsmile: The best fic i've read in a while, take here some related art.

    #25 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·
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    all the d'awwww

    i can't contain it all

    #26 · 16w, 1d ago · · ·
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    One of the best stories I have ever read on this site.

    So moving I felt like crying in some parts... Just beautiful.

    And I completely agree with Dusty Sage, Starry Night Festival deserves to be cannon.

    #27 · 15w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Marvelous. Simply marvelous.

    #28 · 2w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Cool stuff, very sweet. Liked the moon part very much, gave me an idea for my own story.

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