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StellarStar 100

Joined September 2012
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    StellarStar's Stories (1)

    • From Bumps and Bruises
      Every pony wants to know something, but somethings are better left unsaid...

      2,200 words · 454 views · 8 likes · 1 dislikes

    When Rainbow Dash in temporarily suspended from flight, she opens up to the pony shes had her eyes on for about forever and has a dream about all the possibilities that could happen. She also learns that someone is plotting against her...

    (My first story! Please give me some constructive criticism! Also, since this is my first story, it might not be that good... And watch out, there are a bit of cloppish parts, but not as much as to rate it as mature.)

    First Published
    18th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    19th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 3 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 3h ago · · ·
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    I will only thumbs up in case it's RainbowLane.

    But you do need to start a new paragraph every time someone new talks. And I don't get why Rainbow would be grounded for 6 months. Why not try telling us the reason.

    #2 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    and tomorrow she´ll throw a fit, 50 bucks on that.

    #3 · Chapter 4 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    is rainbow whoreifying?:duck:

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