The Eye of Harmony. A black hole sustained by the mass of the planet Gallifrey, allowing the Time Lords unprecedented access to the Time Vortex. When the hour came and the Time Lords defeat was impending, they try one last thing to preserve their legacy with hope to create Time Lords anew.
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I wanted to create a little more "Whovian" Fan Fiction in the FiM universe. Something with a spice of originality. Story will probably feature several Acts or mini-stories. Think of it as like a Doctor Who season, several mini-stories that will build up for the final story arc. Yes, features a human 10th Doctor just after Series 4 finale but before the Christmas(The Other Doctor) episode.
Comments, Criticism and Editors are welcome.
I hate this chapter. I HATE IT. Re-wrote it once, twice and still not much improvement. Danm.
Kiddies, don't stop writing like I did. 8 months of no-writing and I lost everything I learned. Now, describing a bloody desk seems like a deathwish.
I hope you enjoy the content and not the horribly written chapter.
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Silly filly! Being an A* English student I could help you, but I am not so sure.
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Who art thou! Thy has not seen such creature before!
Incorrect, thy is another word for someone else. You would say 'we' for Princess Luna. I = We, Mine = Our.
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Me gusta, keep writing.
Spelling mistake party! Aaaaaand now I have cancer.
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You have cancer? Think of the poor soul who WROTE this fic.
I'd love help if your still offering.
Edit: Oh derp didn't see your edits. Commiting them now! Thanks
I'm absolutely LOVING this.
The spelling, punctuation and grammar need some work, but your ideas are magical.
I can see the inspiration from Asylum of the Daleks, and I think it is amazing.
I'm doing my first fanfic ever at the moment and I can see yours has a lot of potential. Keep it up.
So... the Nightmare was actually part Dalek? Is that what you're saying? Or, and this is a lot more interesting, the Nightmare was an amalgam of all evil in the multiverse and, yes, that of course would include the Daleks.
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Funny thing is : I just watched Asylum today. You can imagine the shock I had.
But in any case, Nightmare Moon isn't exactly like those Daleks.
And thank you,
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Yeah, kind of. Hold on to your bowties, because things will get complicated soon.
i am lost
hmmm, I am very curious as to where this is going, tracking engaged!
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Things will make sense soon..
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Thanking engaged!
Thank you, Danke, Salamat, Muchas Gracias and thank you in all 3994 other languages and possible dialects.
Sorry bluetooth ketboard stopped working. Currently typing with onscreen keyboard.
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Fun fact: Chapter 1 and 2 was typed on a iPod. Revisions and edits on a computer.
Haha. That's cool. Typing this comment on my iPod.
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For fun sake, I typed this reply on an iPod. Just for you
MOTHERFUCK. Damn you and your short chapters.
But seriously, this is pretty good, and I want moar.
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Haha. Okay. Moar will be coming soon. Really soon.
*spits out coffee*
How could I have missed this?
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Because bad fan fictions barely get attention?
Does it feel like I'm rushing stuff?
Not quite sure...
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It's a tid bit rushed but it's not bad. I write entirely too slow anyway.
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Thanks for that.
Yes. Rassilon. This guy,
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yyeeeaaahhh! Flashback!!
The story was going toooo smooth. I needed to confuse you guys.
Don't worry tho. Everything will start making sense in the long run
At least as much sense as any Doctor Who episode.
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This story will feature acts. Acts are like episodes, so the story is divided into acts which can stand on it's own as a mini-story. I feel this will help deliver a authentic atmosphere since MLP and DW are episodic.
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I am going to have to call out a large mistake here. Ponyville was founded By Granny smith's (parents? grandparents) which would only make it 5 or 6 generations before the current time of the show. That would be (If were counting by human years) A little under 500 or 600 years, which would place the founding of ponyville 4 or 5 hundred years after Luna's banishment.
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Oh shi-
Okay got me there.
Time to the Edit boards! ALLONZ-Y
[5:50:50 PM] Globalnet: I haven't had the motivation to write chapter 5 of my fan fiction
[5:50:52 PM] Globalnet: Simplistic
[5:50:54 PM] Globalnet: Wat do?
[5:50:59 PM] Simplistic: PROCRASTINATE SOME MOAR :D
[5:51:09 PM] Gavin Phillip Lee Jefferson: this is the meaning of life
[5:51:13 PM] Simplistic: I am the best at procrastinating.
"Hard work often pays off after time, but laziness always pays off now."
- Procrastination
Ladies and gentlemen. The great simplistic.