He knew he always had powerful legs, but he didn't expect that much.

Neither did Applejack.

Shouldn't that say Fluttershy?

Other than that, it's a good story so far.

Good story. I feel like there should have been a little more build up to the end there, but this is pretty good otherwise.

I like the beginning, but i think would be better if you shown their feelings in a dialogue instead third person, in third person it feels like a little rushed.

please continue the story i like where this is going

this is really really really good.

>>13043201304320

I'm glad you think so!

Unfortunately I'm really busy lately so I won't be able to write much.

I'll probably have the next chapter tomorrow though!

Thank you. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

why so much of this fluttershy big mac love stuff? i like the fic its just they just don't seem like a good couple to me. just too much stuff like that...

>>13043541304354 Hehehe, just wait until you read what I have planned..

In all seriousness, I have had deep thoughts about this story and how I'll progress it.

There will be many hard times for Fluttershy's poor heart.

Still, to each their own, and if you don't feel like reading it, then I won't force you to.

Thank you for your opinion. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

Buck, yeah! Another FlutterMac fic!

Awe....reminds me of middle school romance, in a good way!

>>13043541304354 For every 1 FlutterMac you see on this site there will be 4 FlutterDash's. I coy.t this as a blessing.

Awwwwww. Affectionate Mac is best Mac.

I was listening to the re-mix of Hall and Oates "Out of Touch" while reading this.  It was appropriate.

>>13043871304387 im still gona read this its just the fluttermac stuff seems over used...

This is adorable, and the depiction of the beginning stages of love is quite realistic speaking from my own experience. This reminds me so much of the first encounters between me and who is now my girlfriend. In fact, I would go as far as to say Big Mac reminds me of myself and Fluttershy of her.

To sum up my opinion so far....

Image: http://e621.net/data/sample/cc/d6/ccd647025e72bd93490b296c0fa664f4.jpg?1318839047

>>13043371304337

Awesome! Can't wait!

>>13070541307054 I find that a little strange, how I'm getting you to feel that.My main reason being.. I'm a 15 year old male and I haven't even experienced love at all yet in my life.

Love the pic.

Those of you wondering - I'm working on the third chapter right now.

Thank you for your support!

- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

I love this story update it soon

>>13087261308726 Your wish is my command

It'll be up in a few moments.

I've been working on it for a while, actually.

- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

Oh ya great I will be waiting this is a great story

Yes! MOOOAAAAARRRRRRRR! please

I loved it!! Do more!!!

That was pretty cool. And i'm not one for romance, so that's saing something.

Sorry. Typo. I meant saying something.

I have to admit that this is one of my favs...

Yay! WANT MOOOAAARRR

>>13134081313408 More? Your wish is.. well... Not within my reach right now.

I would give you more, but then you'd be faced with quite a predicament.

You see, I'm really busy writing it right now, and here soon, I'm going to be playing a bit of TL2 with my friend.

So you'll get the next chapter either late today or early tomorrow!

Hopefully that's not too bad. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

Awesome!

>>13134381313438

AHHHHHH, that is quicker than I expected...

but...

YAYYYYY

I know that feel... I think

Image: http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/22164017.jpg

This is sorda what im feelin.

I'm confused now! Is 'that stallion' from Fluttershy's or Big Mac's past?? Is this about to get extremely complicated??

>>13165351316535 Did you make that pic, or did you find it?

Because I've seen one similar to it!

Thank you for the picture! Means a lot to me.

- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

>>13165641316564

Haha i found it

And youre welcome, i'm really liking the story.  

WOOO NEXT CHAPTER!

>>13165601316560>>13167641316764>>13150111315011>>13166151316615

How would you all like another small bit of a chapter of romance? ((Note, don't reply via comment, send me a private message!))

Just think of it as the calm before the true storm hits.

Let me know if you want more faster, or you want to wait for the truly good stuff. Can't wait to read replies!

- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

When fluttershy kisses big mac, she is really eating a piece of his soul... NOM NOM

           . \ / .

   ^v^v^v^v^v^v^

she finds souls tasty...

Good work man! I myself am 14 m trying to write a fanfic with Fluttershy and my own oc. I must say it is hard, but you make it look easy! Can't wait to see where this goes!

This also made me a fan of Fluttermac. It's cute because she's shy and a little insecure, and he's big, strong and quiet.

>>13165601316560 Neither. I think it's from AJ's past.

Aw.... poor Fluttershy.

Yeah, WHHHYYYYYY???????

Noo! Imma cry now

Aww, why? Poor dear...

I'm a guy, and this is a romance. The two don't usually mix, but this is amazing. Definitely better than those stupid Nora Roberts novels my mom reads........Manperson out.

>>13317901331790 Glad to see I'm actually doing some good with this fic!

I can't believe all the support I'm getting on this story. It's my most popular one yet!

Thank you all! - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

Well, that was .....strange. But good.

aww... fluttershy got dumpted

WHAT YOU DID TO FLUTTERSHY WAS HORRIBLE! YOU ARE A HORRIBLE PERSON!

PS: please write more ...

>>13329501332950 I know I can't believe my eyes they are perfect for each other

>>13335031333503

Not really (i don't like fluttermacs) but i thought it was sad how she got dumped not that she got dumped.

>>13345791334579true very true

>>13345791334579

>>13346911334691

You guys wanna know the best part?

That was a recap of things. I'll give you a hint for the next chapter.

And the rest, you'll have to wait a little while for.

>>13347251334725

Lemme guess... Twilight learns that Fluttershy got dumped, Fluttershy is sad n stuff and Applejack feels like its her fault in some way... or something like that.

SO SAD!!!

Big Mac! why, all you need to do was go on a few dates with her and everything would be fine AJ should knock some sense into him

>>13404591340459

Image: http://i.chzbgr.com/completestore/2008/7/4/indubitably128597039696366331.jpg

>>13404591340459 Couldn't have said  better myself

Well look who just showed up.

Omigawd. Thats exactly what i guessed would happen! No offence to the writer but love stories are predictable. Still... i wanna read more...

>>13422661342266 dude... i think thats aj not big mac...

>>13467511346751 Ding, Ding, Ding, Ding, Ding!

We have a winner here! Prize: Next chapter!

You're welcome. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

Almost Crying at this point.

I understand Big Mac's motive for doing that but he didn't approach the subject correctly. Fluttershy is very easy to upset.

Yay! Can't wait to see what happens next when they sort through all of this!

>>13484281348428 Agree :

Knew it... it was aj...

WHY MUST YOU DISAPPOINT ME LIKE THIS?!?!?!?!

um, could you please write more, if you don't mind...

pretty good

Aw, that was short -but hopeful!

Short and sweet. I like it :) and everything you've done with this fic. Sad to hear its almost over

well...

you got a good story and all

the good things have to end

keep it up at your own pace

One question: how the hell did Apple Bloom hold the glass of water while talking and walking?

Interesting, but I have to say; DAFU(Q)

>>13862211386221

im not sure either

sad that its almost over but really glad i read this. I love everything your characterizations and your way of making me feel happy and sad and overall give me this warm fuzzy feeling. I have loved every moment and even though I wish it didn't have to end I know you will do a phenomenal job. See you in brighter days.

Finally I've been waiting to see how this story turns out. Excellent job with the cliff hanger.

So cuute

A lot of HNNNGGGGGHHH moments in this chapter. I loved it.

In the end, Is he drooling on her? Ha!

>>16060551606055 Well, my thought was more on a tear escaping after what she said, but I guess that could work if he passed out real quick.

>>16060831606083 Heh, that would be more romantic.

I have to admit, I'm very sad this has ended, but in a good way. I loved the ending, and the bonus chapter nearly killed me by D'aaaws. Thank you sir/madam, for one nice story to brighten up my day, even if by a little bit. Have three mustaches:

SO MUCH DAAAWWWWWWWW

Such a good story +=

How cute.

That ending ha!