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Now with a prequel, Celestia's First Sunrise!

Twilight is old and weak. She has lived a good, long life, and as the last of the Elements of Harmony, she accepts her death. She goes to Canterlot now, to say goodbye to the princesses. But they have one last gift to give the student. The chance to meet their creators and see something truly wonderful...

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Not gunna lie. This made me tear up a little.

This seriously cant be the end, right? I definitely think you should write more to this, mainly just tell me what Twilight decides to do.

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... This Is Why I Hate Oneshots...
Good Job But.. No Denouement...

Even the description makes me feel. :fluttercry:
I'll read it later after work.

I admit I wasn't excited about the human tag since I believe that humans and ponies don't mix, but you proved me wrong. The humans in this story are badass because they can do almost anything they want,and that's awesome. Also you could continue this, since you could show like what twilight does and how he friends are doing,so please do continue.

Awwwwwww, that was so sweet.

Holy shit. That ending!

So Humanity is basically a benevolent Great Old One? Boundless in power and mysterious.

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Basically. Humanity has evolved to the point where the laws of the universe have no affect on us. We move faster than light, can create and destroy matter, see the very fabric of the universe, and can create, and alter life.

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Thank you.

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I assume that's good?

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I do feel like I want to continue this, maybe...

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Hope you enjoy it!

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I'm sorry you feel that way. I am considering adding more to it, if it makes you feel better.

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Maybe I will.

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Then my work....is complete. :pinkiesad2:

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:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: Thank you!

This is quite good!
It's always nice to see stories involving humans where those silly primates aren't total bastards, it's quite refreshing

I implore you to write more, if you don't the universe is going to blow up or something for some undisclosed reason! :raritycry:

Please, please continues this! This is so awesome! And that final touch. Lauren... *Giggles* Perfect.

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you should like
really continue this
the concept is very...
intriguing to me.

Rainbow Dash entertains herself by racing between the stars, going from galaxy to galaxy, leaving a rainbow streak behind her.

NYAN NYAN NYAN.

Trololol. Anywhom this made be tear up at a few points,

But my heart exploded after she accepted the Alicorn... en....sy......ness......

You can continue this?

Pwease. :raritydespair:

Somehow? ;3;

This was too awesome not too.....

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Wanna know the funny part? I didn't even realize that reference, which just makes it all the funnier. :rainbowlaugh:

You feel like you want to continue this maybe? That's good, because I deep like I want you to co time it too.

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I actually discovered that AFTER making this. I feel bad for unintentionally copying someone else. :fluttercry:

Well done. The only thing I have a hard time with is that after seeing all of this that they would go their separate ways. Twilight of course has the greatest ties to Equestria of all of the Mane 6 in her devotion to Celestia and beyond friendship with Cadence. In my mind's eye what I would see is Twilight trying to convince her friends to all return, bringing the Mane 6 back as a unit. They truly are greater as a whole than individually.

Beautiful, just... Beautiful! :raritystarry:
Can we see a sequel plz? :applecry:

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I prefer the comparison to Great Old Ones, another reader made. They're just good Great Old Ones.

1279964 "Reminds me of that other story, where ponies are AIs for human machines. This is also pretty neat."

What's the url?

1279237 "Basically. Humanity has evolved to the point where the laws of the universe have no affect on us. We move faster than light, can create and destroy matter, see the very fabric of the universe, and can create, and alter life."

If I had powers like that... I would give myself the body of Terry Bogard, health, and immortality. Then I would use them to get laid, a lot.

1282149 in my opinion, it was so good if anyone were to post FIRST! it would have spoiled the mood after you read it. so i posted mine first, it was a truly amazing fanfiction. hey, have you read 'for the ones we love' ?

1282243 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/20950/For-the-Ones-we-Love
it is over 100,000 words, but it is in my opinion, the greatest fanfiction i have ever read, and the read time is well worth it:twilightsmile: tell me that you think... oh, and one more thing... i'm watching you:coolphoto:

1282262 Thanks!^_^

Huh, my avatar? I made that with a ponymaker thing somewhere on devianart, I done forgot where though. It's a pic of what I would look like as a pony, and is the pic I used to create my OC pony character too.

Read about Nightgazer here http://home.comcast.net/~nekohibiki/Nightgazer.txt for info.

more please we need a touching reunion :twistnerd:

:pinkiehappy:I love your series! I can't wait for more updates (please)! It's almost as good as your Reconstruction story. :raritywink: It's getting there, though!

More more more? :heart:

Well, I didn't do my usual tearing up thing, but that's because I was filled with a very specific sort of joy. This was wonderful.

Special thanks to Cthulhu for proofreading and to silvadel for giving me this idea.

There's one more chapter after this. A short little epilogue for everyone!

What a great quote!
I am looking forward to your epilogue!

I am kind of hoping that Twilight returns to Equestria maybe a few years later to meet Princess Celestia again.

Very good, i've enjoyed this a lot.

Glad to be of help.

Wow, interesting take on this... BronyReynard1986 pointed out the parallels with my story found here:

The Last Parade

...which was actually the fast fanfic that I ever wrote.

Have to disagree with godhood for Cadence though. :trixieshiftleft:

... I want part three!

Also, is that sad tag really necessary? I mean, this is pretty heartwarming.

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There is no heartwarming tag, sadly. I don't know, part of me wonders whether or not I should have it....

I like this story alot. Another cool thing is that you could expand this alot. It could be like the adventures of the mane 6 as gods, imagine all the ideas and places this could go.

Aww, group hug and song! :pinkiehappy:

Can't wait to read the epilogue, too.

Beautiful.... so very... very beautiful. It made my eyes water while reading this....:twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

This was amazing indeed. Great work!

It starts like:ajsleepy: and then gets :fluttercry::raritycry: and then Twilight's like :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy: and then the end is :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

well done........you made me cry......how dare you..........thank you, things like this bring out emotion and remind us why life is so great.....the brony community has created so many things like this and that is ultimately one of the things that makes it so great....for your story, the ideas to come, and the inspiration behind them.....thank you:ajsmug::derpytongue2::fluttershyouch::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::trixieshiftright::twilightsmile::trollestia::moustache:

Best Fic EVER! Have a moustache :moustache:

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