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It's no secret: Pinkie loves donuts. She also loves Joe. So, what better way to celebrate than to enjoy a very special donut during a night of fun with her very special somepony?
This was based on a Sexty Minute Ponies prompt, and my goodness was it fun to write. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
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When I was in highschool I made a lot of food jokes with my best friend. One of them involved Boston Cream donuts. I told him that a bakers wife wouldn't put out or stop nagging him. The baker decided to make her a donut. Only instead of filling it with jelly he filled it with his jizz. When the baker's wife ate it she demanded that he make enough for her friends to sample and thus the Boston Cream donut came to be.
Your story brings back so much nostalgia. Anyway good job and have a Derpy. 
I dunno if I can ever eat a Boston Cream again! 
Thanks for that 
Good job keepin the Pink's personality on par! As Hancock would say "Good Job"!
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>>1273890>>1273942>>1274253>>1274413>>1274654>>1274753>>1274800>>1275827>>1276218 Thanks all!
>>1273930 Opinion.
>>1274586 Good 'n' hard. Thanks for the read!
>>1274778 Talk about your background music...lol. Well, even if your feelings are going berserk, I thank you for the read anyway.
>>1275377 That is freaking hilarious. Now I'm glad I don't like Boston Creams...
>>1276487 Very nice. Thank you, David Caruso...thank you.
Read this like last week, but hadn't commented or faved on grounds would do so later, when had some time. Anyway, I have to say even though never read your other story with this pairing (been meaning to) and I don't know how managed to happen, in time since I first saw your stating that have a stallion for each of the Mane 6, you've like convinced me this is probably the one straight ship with Pinkie Pie and a canon stallion that works! 
And for some reason, I could maybe see Pinkie doing that thing with the doughnut with Joe, if the couple was canon and off-screen, of course. 
Well, not much I can say, other than nice clop story and that I'd be curious to see what else you would do with this couple in the future, when you get an idea (even if might not be in same continuity as any other).
>>1313722 Thanks for the fave and review! And you should totally read Between Bakers when you get a chance; it'll shed a lot of light on how Pinkie and Joe came to be together.
Well, in all honesty, I have sort of opened it a few times and read the beginning, but I never made effort to finish for some reason. Nothing wrong with the story mind you, just me being lazy, I guess (what with the length of it, being one of, if not your current longest one-shot, as well as probably second longest story in length currently, with exception of Cadence/Armor and OC couple on honeymoon story). 
So yeah, I kinda recall your theory about how it started after the whole "MMMystery on the Friendship Express" episode. But I will try to, someday soon! As again, even if don't know how without reading, I've been convinced thanks to you (maybe a few of my own thoughts), it works as the one straight pairing with Pinkie/canon stallion!
Right, off the bat it started interesting enough. Not overly porno, but a bit. And can't handle more than two orgasms in an hour? Bah, lightweight xD Writing as I go, so will see how this turns out. Hope it will be neatly "balanced" however. Can kinda see where it is going from here. Semi-abrupt break, but still hoping for "it" hehe. Oh, and before I forgot, find it a slightly interesting mix to part Pinkie with Joe. And heh, almost expected him to be prude, or whatever it's called, so porn-like/stereotypical xP Kind of got a second re-assuring with his speech afterwards, semi-went against what he said before... I think heh. And when I at first thought something interesting would happen at "fill up a pie", I immediately after had second doubts, sounds too corny, But might get surprised, sure hope so heh, rather tired of the ones that just go with bland porn stuff.
Right, looking "bad" so far, but guess it can go either way from here. Could've needed some more "description" on her marehood imo, but ah well. As for the "pleasing her", can argue, seeing how he is about as much pleasing himself, not to mention just going vaginal. Then again, equines clits are internal, so they might actually be able to cum from it. But yeah, his goals were to get off himself. And as said, it's very "ponry" in the description and assumptions. I can however see Pinkie as one that actually makes sounds during sex, so to me, people can have her scream all they want hehe. All the hard and whatnot indications were somewhat boring, but they can work. And eh, 3 ain't that high. Maybe for a beginner, but one can get there quite easily. Might be a bit sore, but still.
Righto, nothing I was expecting came, or well, only what I assumed from norms and guessed, but nothing I had hoped for to be more precise. Overall, it was quite good. A tad bit generic in many ways, had some interesting parts, and was rather well written. Could as said have been a lot better, or at least a lot more interesting. Might just be me wanting more interesting and less generic stuff, but ah well. Things I'd thought been more interesting, or at least less "porny" would've been if he said he was in the mood for some pie and ate her out, and her saying something about how she loved to paint his face with her affection, or "sugar coat/glaze" it with her mare juices. Then perhaps "stuffing the pie" after that. That he got her to squirt into some pastry as well, alternatively with as well being less "ew, my own sperm I make her swallow loads off". Or my personal "favorite", having her doe the squirting thing, fill a pastry, to which they then decide that making an entire cake or something with their sexual fluids over the course of a few days, keeping the "ingredients" in the freezer/fridge in the meantime as they "prepare" it would be a good idea, and likely end with that concept/suggestion. So yeah, it wasn't bad, wasn't overly good. Rather decent imo, could've been better. Hope my random ramblings made sense and wasn't offensive.
>>1666497 Thanks! You should check out Between Bakers if you haven't already; it gives a more detailed story of how the two of them came to be together.
I cannot say I liked this one of yours, partially because I more prefer Joe and Mulia being romantically involved (no proper reasoning why, it just helps keep my composure in check for whatever reason). I gave it a like all the same, but won't add to my favourites let alone re-read it. 
As for Between Bakers I approve that one regardless of Joe and Pinkie not being a preferred couple of mine but mainly for the lack of... we'll say "Joenuts" shall we? 
>>2072293 I completely understand your lack of a fave for this one, and I'm not bitter in any way. It's definitely my most...unusual and "out there" piece, but it was worth trying something different just to see the reactions from my readers. Thanks for the read anyway, as well as the like.
Also, "Joenuts"...I don't know whether to be amused or incredibly disturbed.
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