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FormNalvoid


Made this account to keep track of stories and comment on them i may or may not write fanfiction but i have a few ideas

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NOT A TROLL FIC.......... i think - The Equestrian Department Of Equine Resources brings you a message about stories where luna or celestia are overpowered and what would happen IF THEY WHERE! And how it ends in the destruction of our cute loveable poines. Remember only YOU can prevent Equine Genocide! (or wild fires)

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No spacing inbetween paragraphs you say? What a ridiculous notion!

1272669 Is the Where in the description a typo for were? Because if it's not I must be reading the description wrong... :applejackunsure:

Man isn't there a way to ban or report these annoying spambots? This is the third time I've seen them this week. It's starting to get ridiculous

1278656 I deleted that comment though thats the first time i have seen a spam bot.

1278394 Its not just found out what your message ment you must be reading it wrong.

1279446 What do you like about it?

1279450

Well, you see, I was definitely getting a Warhammer 40K vibe out of the beginning... and then the ending is just SO RIDICULOUS.

This fic makes the point it's meant to make, and more importantly, it made me laugh.

Hats off to you, sir and/or madam!

1279479

This fic makes the point it's meant to make, and more importantly, it made me laugh.

Thats the point in this fandom they made the princess overpowered so much it anoyed me so...... This happened.

1280136 Thats what happens if you make an overpowred celestia and luna:rainbowwild:

1280141
You forgot the overdramatic wink!

XiF

1272669 I'm sorry, but I hated that comment.

Green is a grammatical error.
Red is a spelling error.
Grey should be removed.
Pink doesn’t make any sense.

No spacing in between paragraphs you say?

I never said that.... :ajbemused:

What a ridiculous notion!

If you say so.


Woosh!

~XiF, awg;oihnasg[oo

There! I just made it 11 thumbs up to 11 thumbs down. You're welcome. Though I didn't fav it, you'll just have to be satified with a thumb. now go suck on it

1683483 Really? With that like/dislike ratio and its inclusion in the TWE, I'm not fully convinced of that.

Kinda a wierd cautionary tale about the risks of total power.

my biggest gripe was actually at the start

For over eight hundred thousand years the species of equine kind has expanded across the stars, conquering all before them. It has been over a million generations since we first realised our destiny as a species lay with the stars,

A million generations over eight hundred thousand years seems abnormaly high, requiring about 1.25 generations per calendar year.
Generation X is defined as anybody born between 1960-1980, Gen Y is 1980-2000, at about 20 years per generation. based on that it would be about 40,000 generations over the full time, possibly lower if Earth Ponies really can live for upwards of 300 years as was so implied in Family appreciation day.

Hi there! I'm Scribblestick the Chill, here on behalf of TWE to identify the source of the downvote swarm. Let's get started! :twilightsmile:

>starts reading story

Huh. Aside from some grammar and spelling errors, I like this.

>last paragraph

:rainbowhuh:

Meh, I don't usually think very deeply when reading ponyfic, much less something I find through TWE, so chances are I missed something deep and clever. That and I'm completely unfamiliar with this universe-is-a-heart theory or whatever. However, I did find the ending mildly amusing, so there is that.

All in all, I'm not really sure why this is getting so many downvotes. Grammar and spelling might be contributing factors, but yours aren't nearly horrible enough to merit so many downvotes on their own. So... yeah. I got nuthin'.

~Scribblestick, TWE's notoriously friendly moderator

NOT A TROLL FIC.......... i think

Jesus, they don't even try any more.

Comment posted by FormNalvoid deleted May 15th, 2013

THis is pretty good. Hilarious ending and an epic 10 movie intro like from MAN of Steel but cooler.

Your eloquence has earned you a like.

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