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    The Doctor takes to the stars in this fourth installation of the Doctor Whooves Series.

    When the TARDIS is unexpectedly pulled off course during her first foray into the wider universe, the Doctor, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and a somewhat-reluctant Twilight find themselves brought to the doorstep of a utopian alien city. While Rarity and Pinkie immerse themselves in two opposite ends of the local culture, questions that have gone unasked for centuries draw Twilight into the shadowy labyrinth of intrigue and deception that sustains a delicate balance of power in this "perfect" society. A balance that some will go to any lengths to preserve.

    And as the mystery surrounding the cryptic messages left in the Doctor’s path continues to unfold, will the growing schism of distrust between Time Lord and Friendship Scholar over unspoken secrets cost both ponies more than either of them are prepared to lose?

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    "Only Skin Deep" is my fourth Doctor Whooves Episode and the sixth in the expanded "Number 12" continuity begun by the inspirational Squeak-Anon.

    It is strongly recommended to read the following fics here on FIMFiction.net before proceeding with "Only Skin Deep."

    1- Number 12by Squeak-Anon

    2- Traveler by Squeak-Anon.

    3- The Pinkie Conundrum

    4- Game of Stones

    5- Along Came a Spider

    Comments and critiques are very much desired and let this crazed writer-pony know that the herd does indeed care.

    Elements of Number 12 & Traveler (c) Squeak-Anon

    Doctor Whooves Intro posted on Youtube by: Cshep99

    Cover & Concept Art provided by FoxInShadow from Deviantart.com

    Number One Assistant & Proof-Reader - 2dextreem

    *Rated T for some Doctor Who level violence.*

    First Published
    17th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Mar 2013

    Comments ( 368 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YAY

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Top of featured box in 3... 2... 1...

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I have added my view and like! TO THE FEATURE BOX!!!

    Now, how about a little turnabout?

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #5 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Thumbed upped. Faved. Went to click the watch button but found I already clicked it.:pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yes the Doctor and Pinkie together again!

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YAY! Rarity!:raritystarry:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Darn nobles!:twilightangry2:

    A good prologue, though.:twilightsmile:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    My body is Reggie. :twilightsmile:

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    At last!:pinkiehappy:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Feature Box Reached: There was much Rejoicing!

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Rarity: Doctor, get me out of here.

    Doctor: Certainly, Rarity, where would you like to go?

    Rarity: FAR AWAY, I DON'T CARE WHERE!

    Doctor: *blink blink*

    Doctor: ...

    Doctor: ... *grin putting Pinkie to SHAME!*

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Why are we only allowed to thumbs up once? Come on people, this story needs fuel!

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wooo It's here it's finally here!! WOO HOO!! *Dances in celebrations!*

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Whoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Great characterization with Rarity and her parents, I can't wait to read the rest of this. You continue to impress me with your ability to write stories that feel like believable episodes of both My Little Pony and Doctor Who, and I say this as someone who is a big enough fan-dweeb about both things to have added to the TV Tropes for them.

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Poor Rarity. :raritycry:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I rather enjoy the differences between Rarity and her parents, and I like the way she finally snapped at Talk Down. She's better than I, I would've snapped much earlier. Either way, a good beginning to the story.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Huh?  Whoah whoah whoah!  

    I READ this already!  I know everything that happens!  I know what happens in.. at least the next 2 chapters, if I remember correctly.

    How do I know all this?  DID I SEE THE FUTURE?!  :pinkiegasp:

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    VICTORY IN THE FEATURE BOX!

    Thank you everypony.  You know what? I'm so excited, I'm gonna do a little dance.

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    *Takes a good breath: :yay:

    I haven't started reading yet but I already know it is gorgeous :twilightsmile:

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh joy!

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    When I saw this get posted I hit the Favorite and Thumbs Up buttons like I was the angry fist of god!  This is a very promising beginning to another one of your amazing stories and I can't wait to read more!

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh Dear sweet Celestia its coming!

    I will not be able to do any work for the next 4 months... I will be too anxious for this story! ^^

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #27 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    BEST WRITER EVER YAY!

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Liked and favorited even before I opened the chapter.

    Normally, I'd wait until a couple chapters in, but I'm more than confident in your ability to deliver a story that goes above and beyond.

    I await further chapters with an impatient glee. :twilightsmile:

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh: absolute awesomenesss s ...sss.s if that even is a word lol:rainbowhuh:

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YEAH!!! I'm liking how this started. Lets see where it goes but with you it's sure to be brilliant.

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yay:yay:

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    My face when I saw this was up:

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    ...I'm so excited :pinkiehappy:

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YAY! More Doctor is always a good thing. Now if you'll excuse me I need to go arrange an industrial accident for some members of nobility. The Doctor wouldn't approve but that's the price I'm willing to pay to ensure that Rarity life isn't ruined by those petty morons. Now where did i put that industrial strength adhesive?

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    There's one thing I just don't get: why did you continue the series when you haven't even completed "Traveler"?  I think you should finish that before continuing this story.

    Nevermind, 2dextreem explained it to me.

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1294313

    Are you even paying attention? Traveler was written by another author entirely... These stories are just based off his work.

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #39 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1294313 Oh, I didn't write Traveler.

    Please allow me to clarify. Number 12 and Traveler are both by Squeak-anon, who has graciously given me permission to branch off of his stories into a separate continuity while he focuses on his audio-plays, which can be heard on Celestia Radio and Youtube. My series and his continuing series share the same roots, but diverge after the events of Traveler. While I took some vague liberties with the 'as of yet unpublished' ending of that fic, The Pinkie Conundrum was given full approval by Squeak before it was posted almost a year ago.

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hell, yeah !!,. pinkie pie will be in this one   :twilightsmile: !! :pinkiegasp:

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1294313

    I'm workin on it!

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1294969 And I do believe he still approves of me. :pinkiehappy:

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1294993

    I do indeed, still need to find time to read Along Came The Spider, but love, the previous two, you'd done a fine job continuing my universe.

    Wanna write a Doctor Whooves Adventure short by the way?

    PL
    #44 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1291664

    Actually make that two Loyal2Luna, Pinkie Conundrum made it in the feature box as well, but I don't know if its still on, but congrats on the new chapter and your victory :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::trixieshiftright:

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesysysyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1:twilightsmile:

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1295482 Along came a spider did as well

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm loving this. AND it made the feature box! I'm happy for you L2L!:pinkiehappy:

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh, Booyah! Back in business!

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Lookin' good. Wish there was time for me to read your other DW stories, but there're just too many fanfics on my plate, so I'm-a gonna start here. And I can already tell this is going to be a fun ride.

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    New  Doctor Whooves?

    Better get reading!

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    MOAR!!! :flutterrage:

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Excitement building.... building... aaaaaaand....

    :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    Okay I'm done. Please keep writing these amazing stories. <3 I had only discovered squeak's Number 12 and Traveler stories 2 days ago, and since then I've read both of them, and then the pinkie conundrum, and then the game of stones, and then along came a spider...

    Dear god its a drug. And I'm loving every second of it.

    #53 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Another adventure with the Hourglass Stallion. Looking to the next chapter with glee.

    #54 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 4h ago · · ·
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    >>1295041 *Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee* Oh.. Ah...ahem. I mean. Uhhh sure. :twistnerd: any... uhhh, word limits and what available characters and such?

    #55 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 3h ago · · ·
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    >>1305672

    Haha! Well I'll take that as a yes. You're probably rather busy with ficitry and such, but write up a script when you can and we'll produce it when we have available resources (Normally released directly after episodes, so probably after this crossover business is done). The word limit for a short episode is 1500, if you MUST then 2000 but try to aim under those numbers. Goodnight shorts are written by me alone, but the Doc, Pinkie Pie and Twilight are all fair game. We haven't included the mane six in canon so they're not involved at this point, and it must be written in script format:

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y2vKRbdyo4AfMev32Z3Ce3NnDtMDt9ITkUkCvZODMlE/edit

    Like so.

    Good luck! :twilightsmile:

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1290930 Hey, Literature, do you have any new and good books? I'm running out of stories and I need a book.

    #57 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1311150

    Warriors series? Talking cats. 'Nuff said.

    Dresden Files? The story of a wizard.

    Room? The story of a mother trying to have her son live a normal life while trapped in a room.

    Firm? A lawyer is asked to investigate a suspicious firm.

    All good books.

    Give 'em a try.

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1311235 I don't know about anybody else, but I grew up on the Redwall Series. Oh, and more recently R.A. Salvatore.

    ALSO: Still working on Chapter One, hoping to get it up tonight, but if not, will be polished and shined for tomorrow.

    #59 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie's line of finding aliens should definitely be what the first human to find alien life should say:rainbowlaugh:

    #60 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie Pie is in charge of first contact? We're bucked.

    Can't wait for more!

    Seriously. Post again, NOW.

    #61 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    First

    #62 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Crap not first

    #63 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    the way Pinkie entered the TARDIS: so her. i laughed hard.  and it looks like the TARDIS wants Twilight with her and the Doctor.

    #64 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Doctor: Twilight, that book belongs to my wife.

    Twilight: But... Princess Celestia gave it to me... :twilightoops:

    Doctor: Oh... oh my...

    Twilight: :facehoof:

    Pax
    #65 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    HEY GUYS! I FOUND ALIENS!

    #66 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Alright! I was just wondering if you would be posting this and then suddenly it was there in my unread updates!

    Love how you portray Pinkie's complete disregard for Reality coupled with the Cartoon Physics.

    Can't wait to read your characterization of Rarity. I always love reading a good Rarity.

    And last but not least is the growing tension between Twilight and the Doctor. Nothing so effortlessly strains a relationship like secrets.

    You have inspired me to not only continue watching the New Who Series but to also check out the Classic Who Series. May your muse never cease to inspire!

    #67 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Laughed out loud at pinkie's last line. :rainbowlaugh: Nice chapter, can't wait for the next one! Keep it up. :twilightsmile:

    #68 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Wow, the TARDIS was really sassy this chapter

    #69 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well. I can see the tension between Twilight and the Doctor is going to be coming to a head soon.  Can't wait to see the fireworks!

    #70 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    And here I thought I was going to get to bed at a reasonable hour tonight.  Oh well.

    #71 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Epic story, as always. [/genericcomment]

    There's just one thing that doesn't sit right with me: “I didn’t ‘come along’, I was shanghaied by the TARDIS, remember?” I'm surprised "shanghaied" is in Twilight's vocabulary, considering the word's origins lie from the real city Shanghai. Wouldn't the term in Equestria be some sort of pony equivalent? I know it's a really nitpicky thing, but I noticed it instantly.

    #72 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This series needs to be a real thing. SOMEBODY GET SOME ANIMATORS ON THIS SHIT!

    #73 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1321978 oh don't I wish. I would just die if somepony like Ask-TheCrusaders were to animate even a few random scenes. :heart:

    #74 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I love that Applejack is the one telling about the seaponies. Nice ref to the original MLP series. XD

    And I wonder what's gonna happen with Twilight and the Doctor, esppecially with not knowing the story behind the TARDIS-colored journal.

    Also: gotta love Pinkie. :pinkiehappy:

    #75 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Epic! Truly! Can't wait to see what happpens next!:rainbowdetermined2:

    #76 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh my...XD

    #77 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Awesome!!!!!!!!

    #78 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    “Dangerous? Awww, come on, Doc! We laugh in the face of Danger! HA-HA-HA!” Pinkie beamed as she let out an overly dramatic and cheesy theatrical laugh.

    “Yes you do, Pinkie.” Rarity confirmed, her voice deadpanned. “And that was very rude you know. Mr. Zone didn’t care for that prank at all.”

    ...

    You glorious bastard.

    #79 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Also, loving your Pinkie shenanigans as always.  She really knows how to liven up a trip with the Doctor.

    But I was hoping for Spike to come along, especially since his crush is apparently in great danger this time.

    I know this is about the Mane 6, but Spike is as much a part of their group as the others, so I hope you make it up to him somewhere down the line.

    #80 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    applejack is a silly pony because a blue box that travels through time and space is alive

    #81 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    you gonna update within the next year, CUZ I NeED MOAR

    #82 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Found Something!

    ...Let’s find out what my the old girl’s picked out for us this time.”

    Choose one or the other

    >>1321999

    Yeah that would be cool. Maybe you could commission them once the VDC Contest (I swear it was supposed to end before Summer) is finally over. Assuming that the price isn't too exorbitant.

    #83 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Woooohooooo, amazing as always !! :)

    #84 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie and Doctor is best combo.

    #85 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Twilight is going to feel betrayed that the Doctor told Pinkie about himself, and has kept it a secret from her.

    #86 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The Cloister Bell, whoever these aliens are they have serious pull. The number of species that can influence the TARDIS are very few, the Daleks being the most notable.

    #87 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie gives me a headache

    #88 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Best line ever by pinkie :rainbowlaugh:

    #89 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Awesome chapter once more. Poor Spike, to be left behind like that... I can't wait to see what will happen next to the four ponies, and to see more Rarity and Pinkie funny moments, and to see how it will go between the Doctor and Twilight... and to see what the mysterious puppetmaster has prepared for them this time... I'm also wondering, could the said puppetmaster be secretly messing with the Tardis? like, programming it behind everyone's back to send the ponies where and when he/she'd want?

    #90 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Twilight twilight twilight, don't you know the first rule of the doctor:

    Rule number 1- the doctor always lies

    And you appear to have forgotten Rule number 3- trust me I'm the doctor

    #91 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    the small box of gems that he kept in a box in the loft

    Bit of redundancy there?

    Anyways, can't wait for more. Keep it up.

    That is all.

    #92 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Great chapter cant wait for the next one. :eeyup::twilightsmile::pinkiesmile::yay:

    #93 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1311274

    R.A. SALVATORE!?!

    ALL PRAISE LLOTH!

    also, wulfgar is best barbarian :trollestia:

    #94 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1325503 Cadderly is best cleric. :derpytongue2:

    #95 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Hey L2L, just wondering, what's your stance on Spike/Rarity?

    #96 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1327889 I don't know why anypony would be so horrible as to spike Rarity, I mean, the mare is NOT a hoofball... Oh... Oh you mean shipping. Well.

    Personally, I am not a fan of Rarispike for 2 reasons. The first being the obvious age difference (in my head at least, Rarity is around 20 (21 my stories) and Spike is 10 or 11. Obviously, this is an issue. Secondly: It's too obvious a ship. While Rarity might find his affections sweet, I just find it hard to swallow that such a relationship could be taken seriously.

    Now me personally, I like Spikebloom. Aside from being more compatible in terms of age, I just think that Applebloom and Spike look cute together. Some might state Sweetie/Spike... but I can't accept that because all I can think of is...

    "Girl you want rejects you? Marry her sister."

    #97 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Sweet Celestia, Pinkie.:facehoof:

    Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

    #98 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    AWESOMENESS!!!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: i cant STAND cliffhangers especially in something i love, AUTO fave and watch, but im gona hold off on reading until its complete just like i did along came a spider. THEN BINGE IT IN ONE SITTING!!!!:pinkiegasp: my record is 250K words in a day.:twilightblush: so this will be easy peasy lemon squeazy once its all up (assuming you dont make it abnormally long!):pinkiehappy:

    #99 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I want you to know that you are one of the reasons that i made an account. your stories are amazing. never stop:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #100 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    The best Doctor Whooves fanfiction is the stuff by intelligent writers who are die-hard fans of both shows. Pinkie's antics in this one kept me laughing. I'm curious as to how her "aliens" are gonna factor into the story, as well as what the TARDIS's mysterious motives are regarding Twilight.

    Wait, didn't they leave someone behind? Eh, whoever it was must not've been very important.

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