Nightmare Moon won the first battle, but luckily the Elements of Harmony turned into guns.
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Fire the Applejack bullet and the Rarity bullet at each other and lets see where that takes us. Nice story by the way.
I do believe my read list needs to eat this one. It looks rather interesting.
Epic. This is just plum epic.
I am seriously enjoying this.
Keep fillin' 'em with lead, Applejack.
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Uhh... Good going Fluttershy. Yep... Way to go... and... aww who am I kidding? You're now a wanted mare!
LLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYYY
JJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was quite possibly the most ridiculously awesome thing I've read in a very long time.
Only 3,000 words, but I just loved it!
You seem to know a lot about guns, dear Author. Good to see that. No obvious mistakes were found.
I also love the way how you gave each pony their own and unique weapons, styles and likes that fit their personality. A thing too many people ignore.
And the ending... Brilliant!
I didn't see grammar-related errors either!
Great job as always!
Nice... A slightly dark tale yet not without a touch of humor...
OMG, this was farking EPIC!
Celestia shows up with a minigun at the end. Luckily I wasn't drinking anything because the sheer silliness of that make me laugh out loud.
Thumbs up and watching.
I saw that ending coming a mile away.
This story is awesome.
Fluttershy was just perfect at the end!
BRILLIANT!!!
This is pure awesome! I love it.
I didn't expect the ending XD.
oh, hell yes.
two things popped into my head.
i wanna play Cod.
i wanna play TF2.
I'M SO CONFLICTED!
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Is it wrong to want to marry you on the spot?
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Get in line. There have been a couple of people propose to me over FIMFiction already.
No, I'm not kidding.
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Don'cha just love the internet?
Yup. Guess that Shadowbolt wasn't feeling lucky.
... This is just hilarious.
1911s. I approve of this.
Golden Deagle...
Dat ending...
And respect to Carlos Hathcock, one of the most awesome snipers in history.
WWII Fire arms and MLP. Color me interested.
You know how I said WII Fire Arms. I lied...
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Yeah, I knew someone would catch the reference.
Oh Fluttershy. How I want to feast on what remains of you're corpse (Not really, that's pretty disgusting. Why did I bring that up, you have permission to shoot me now).
This entire story feels like a gun commercial. I suddenly have this incredible urge to buy an Automag. Of course, mom says that one gun is one too many, so I'm not sure how I'll convince her to let me get anouther. Especially one that costs as much as that.
1314003 play tf2, it's so much better.
Short, sweet, and to the point. I like it.
Luna got better.
Fluttershy didn't.
wat
I like the story image, but the definition for Applejack is redundant. You've got liars on there twice.
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It took me a second, but LOL
Wow.
Me gusta.
Anyway, I really like this story!
Sure there was the odd spelling mistake here and there, but not enough to make a difference.
Rarity putting a scope on a Browning M2? Hilarious.
Celestia bashing the doors in with a minigun? Utterly priceless!
Anyway, this is going right on my favourites.
Great story!
Your Faithful Student,
--TwilitLightning
Meaning she whipped the cannon around and fired with her eyes closed, relying on the twitch of her forehooves to properly aim the cannon for her.
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I wasn't sure at first, but I couldn't stop, and that ending was just too awesome. Well played my good sir, well played indeed.
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Good, but too short
You know if the show wasnt for younger crouds this would probably be the most epic what if episode EVER.
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I wasn't sure if this was going to be worth my time.
It was. Very well written, no sentence is in the wrong spot, and I've finally figured out where all the old weapons from WWI/WWII disappeared to when they weren't recovered.
If they got new weapons then it means that the Elements are useless. Other than creating weapons to begin with.
Fluttershy just ate a whole lotta lead.
1314003 Play Gears of War, it's better than either.
Great story
But I got to point out some inaccuracies. The M249 machine gun even firing at a Cyclic rate and Dual wielding would only have a firing rate of 1550 rounds per minute. While a M134 mini gun has a rate of fire that's 3000 rounds per minute. So Nightmare moon was taking about the rate of fire that she was putting out without landing any hits.
But still a great story.
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Celestia, being a badass, only fired what she needed to in order to shoot down all of Nightmare Moon's bullets, and then two more to explode her guns.
*handwave* MAGIC
My avatar is very pleased.