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The thing that makes Spartans special is their ability to adapt to a wide range of scenarios and come out alive. It is their stubborn survivability that makes them the stuff of legend in the eyes of humanity, and the creeping monsters of nightmares for the Covenant.
So, what if Noble Six wasn't killed on Reach?
neat story. will definitely keep an eye on this. i can see this story going in any number of directions. some very minor grammar errors, but nothing to noticeable to the untrained eye. good luck, and may the force be with you, Darth Brony
P.S. have some of these 
I love this idea and how you have set up the characters, but please don't tell me that your going to add more covenant then what was sucked in. Because for me personally that's were stories like this start there downfall, or maybe you can be the one to change that. Anyway great chapter and can't wait to see what happens next.
All I can say is PLEASE continue this! This story really caught my attention, the way Six kept the fast paced action that the game kept. Though to try and interpret that into first contact with the ponies will be kinda tricky. Can't wait for more that's in store for us! 
Carmen quickly spread her feet in a wide stance, and held her ground. The ultra's target came within striking range, and he thrusted his blade out in a lust for glory.The spartan's head fell bellow the strike, she had quickly ducked.
Technically, it's thrust* not thrusted. Thrusted isn't a word.
Second, it's below* not bellow. Bellow means to yell.
Otherwise you're good. Saw no more errors other than that, and a few words that had to be capitalized. I really like the idea of the story where the main character isn't the Master Chief, and has good grammar. Thankfully, this one isn't an abomination. You have received my fave.
TL;DR
Thrust*, not thrusted.
Below*, not bellow.
I liked it.
is it gonna be the whole thing of she lands in the forest then the mane 6 go looking for the "alien invaders" or the "meteor" then a really shitty first contact ensues? cos thats vever been done before... at all, well 6 COULD land in ponyville and that would save a metric ass ton of time
I'm actually debating with myself on where she's going to land, and the opportunities that derive from it.
Thank you. You're the first to not only tell me of grammatical errors, but also tell me where they are so that I can correct them.
I use google chrome, and the auto spell check is somewhat lacking in vocabulary.
Alright. There are two kinds of Halo fics that end up in the Featured box. The first kind is shit riddled with grammar errors and boring plot that only got there because people like Halo. Then there's this. It's better than the usual garbage, I'll give you that.
here's one more thumb and star to add to you undoubtedly growing collection
one question though how much of the covie ship got transported cus that greatly affects the believability of what/how many covie troops survived for instance a normal carrier might be all but completely transported
judging by the fact of the slipspace bomb used on the supercarrier the docked carrier (the one carrying the bomb) was completely engulfed but that was a modified bomb to that end it was human tec and covie slipspace tec far, far far surpasses our own so you got some play here
>>1369531 pinkie did say a meteor would land on them
ps. Spartans survive fatele falls by over-pressurizing the gel-layer 
halo 3
"how far do think he fell?"
"two kilometers, easy"
"armor's in lock down gel layer could have taken most of the impact, i don't know Sargent major he just might make it"
"were not leaving without him"
"that's right your not"
halo novel: first strike:
"over-pressurize your hydrostatics just before you hit"
I have but one thing to say;
Are you ready... for HALO REACH?!
The spartan's armor was splattered with brightly colored alien blood, testament to the rabidness of her fight through the ship. She. Dual plasma rifles blazing, she mowed down the multitude of elites, while the General rank elite, adorned in lavishly golden armor, fired a barrage of radioactive fuel rods in her direction. With great deft, she narrowly avoided each one like she was dodging cars on a highway. She weaved under, jumped over, sidestepped and dived around each of the rods in the magazine. When the general ran out of ammo, he threw the flak cannon at her in a rage and produced a pair of energy swords that exploded to life with a flick of the arms.Wat...?~Wolf
Don't worry, I'ma gonna.
Thanks for that bit.
I used armor lock for an explanation last time, but I didn't think that was right because of the design of the mk V bullshit is a little less advanced.
No! That random mistakenly placed She is artistic design, I swear! Thank you for telling me about it so that I can leave it there.
If Reach was an open world game, you and I can be certain I would run my ass in the direction of the nearest UNSC outpost and camp like a motherfucker with other people, unlike Carmen, I would've ran and THEN I would've gone to Equestria by doing what she did.
I like where this story is going, and I see that it has great potential. I think the idea is fantastic. I would love to be of assistance with this as a proofreader or however else you may need help. I've helped out with other stories before, like Helljumper117's first Halo crossover.
So is Celestia still going to try to have the strange and unusual alien that ended up destroying half the Everfree via what eyewitnesses will describe as "A blizzard of death and destruction from the skies" form a Town Milita for "The second worst place to live in Equestia".
Just for a laugh I'd like to see 6 die and then respawn at a checkpoint.
Also, you seem to be confused as to what actually makes up a Lekgolo (Hunter). They're made up of tiny little worms known as Lek. They multiply and join together to form a mass known as a Hunter. When they grow too big and multiply too much, they separate into a copy (or a brother), becoming the pairs we always see in-game.
The disorientating experience finally seized when she was slammed onto her back against the upper part of a wallshould be "ceased". also, "disorienting" not "disorientating"
With great deft, she narrowly avoided each one like she was dodging cars on a highwayi don't think "deft" is being used correctly here. "deftness", maybe? or you could use "agility", and put "deftly" where you have "narrowly".
This seems pretty good. I liked the old one, let's see what you got now.
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