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Deyeaz


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'Wha... what is that?'

Well? What would your reaction be if you were presented with something as foreign as a "computer"?

It's Celestia's first-ever time using such an unusual contraption. Will this end well? Will Celestia master the art of using a computer? Or will it all go to shambles? Why am I asking you all these questions?

The answer to all of that can be found... here.

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OH LOOK, ANOTHER TERRIBAD STORY BY ME. /)^3^(

One-shot I came up with whilst browsing deviantART.

Cover art created (beautifully) by Liebatron.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 32 )

Royal Sister doing something hilariously unrelated and completely random, the thing in question being an everyday item and the plot being nigh-on non-existant?
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Whelp, if the usual FIMFiction rabble show up, this'll be featured within 12.812791 minutes, according to previous research and observation.

^^Problem officer?

At-least it's a bit more inventive than a cross-over. Or a HIE fic. Or a clop-fic.

Silver lining innit?

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The number of RoyalSister X EverydayItem featured fics is TOO DAMN HIGH.

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This kind of fic is about as common as Twilight fucking up a spell AND HiE fics.

It's just the only ones who actually take this kind of story on can do it properly. Doesn't make it original or imaginative, they're just funny.

1380548 1380515 'A privilege not a right'.
You two ponder that line for a second while I brew some coffee and play the Jeopardy theme tune.

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The ability to write is a privelege.

The want to write these is a privelege.

Criticism is a privelege.

Writing these fics is an abused privelege.

Our complaining is a privelege.

Show some moderation people. You're gonna burn all the good ideas while the bandwagon is still stuck in the mud.

1381070 Alright I'll give you that. But still, it does not mean that you simply MUST read a fic that is almost guaranteed to be the exact kind of fic which you seem to find so over written. The friggin' description is a dead giveaway man.

You do not have to say that the concept is overused. You do not have to comment. You do not even have to read the fic.

You still do it though. Don't you?

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Yes I do. Because like I said, they may not be imaginative or original, but they're funny. They CAN be good stories, but people need to show a bit of moderation in writing them.

Luna used CANTERLOCK. It's super effective!
And /mlh/ - nopony tell Lyra!

bwahahahaha :rainbowlaugh:

Im liking the story shadow!'
Hevent been on fo a week soz about that

1381315 1381237 Okay okay okay. Look, you both have good arguments. It's unoriginal, sure. You don't have to read it, cool. You read it anyway because it's well-written and funny, awesome.

Now can you please stop bickering and just enjoy reading other fics? Thank you. :pinkiesmile:

Most :trollestia:people:trollestia: have used a personal computer in their home or at work

Here I thought Luna would be considered old but it seems like Celestia is (of course) OLDER:trollestia:

:facehoof: Why did I just do that? :facehoof::unsuresweetie:

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Bickering is so much fuuuunnnn though!

Don't worry, I read other fics.

1382326 But I agree with KillerSteel! Bickering is SO MUCH FUN. Think of all the fun you could be having through bickering.

We've doubled the fun. Can you triple it?

1385844 CAN YOU DO THAT? CAN YOU TRIPLE THE FUN? :rainbowhuh:

1385866 Let's find out eh?

1380493 Hey, nothing wrong with clop. :fluttercry:

Anyway, story critique. You change tenses at some points. You need to pick a tense and stick with it. Good show otherwise.

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Thanks for telling me about that. But could you please tell me where you found each tense deviation? I can't seem to find any. :applejackunsure:

First remark: not a bad choice of computer. I tend to keep away from HPs myself, however. >_>

Second remark: Oh Poor Celly. >_> *snickers, convinces Celly to visit e621* :pinkiehappy:

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Thank god it wasn't (Shudder) LEMONPARTY. :pinkiesick:

1411331 :3 ... Am I giving you ideas for further torture to poor Celly? :P

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PLEASE DON'T. 4CHAN IS BAD ENOUGH. :raritydespair:

1411341 XD Have you actually seen some of the stuff on e621? :3

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No, and for fuck's sake, I don't wanna find out. Is it bad?

1411361 ... Well, I enjoy it. But then, I'm hardened against soul-shattering stuff on the internet. I sometimes cruise 4chan's /b/ for lulz. I lol'd at 2girls1cup. But there's stuff on 4chan, e621, and similar sites that still makes me twitch slightly. Or at least provokes a 'wait, wat?' reaction. :P Go check it out.

WELCOME TO YOUR DOOM!

XD If you are savvy enough to make such comments about Ponychan and 4chan, I reckon you'll be fine.

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Time to lose my dinner! :D

Edit: I've seen worse.

I reviewed your story tonight find it here

"What is a 'computer?' More importantly, how did it get here? It wasn't here last night."

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